"Sir..We have to go" A three Russians pass through the abandon city

[bave2]

[URL=http://filesmelt.com/][IMG]http://filesmelt.com/dl/ttt_camel_v10008.jpg[/IMG][/URL]

C&C plz and Tell me Which point I have to improve ? So I will improve that in next Pic. Thank you. :downs:

[Joazzz]

You did a really half-assed job colouring the univorms and isolating the blur.

Tip: Use in-game Super DOF instead of photoshopped blur, it looks much better.

[Jetty]

I dont get how theyre calmly standing/sitting there, while a giant strider steps through a car next to them

[AFewOstriches]

Fingerposing could be better, especially on the doll and left hand of the dude on the right.

Also, the dude on the right has two gasmasks. Just pointing that out.

[Conely]

Nobody seems to be holding their guns right.

[lonefirewarrior]

[QUOTE=AFewOstriches;35007250]Also, the dude on the right has two gasmasks. Just pointing that out.[/QUOTE]

He's being extra careful.

[bave2]

Thank you! For the Comment I will Improve that next time I post For next thread!

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[editline]6th March 2012[/editline]

[QUOTE=KaNe1310;35006980]I dont get how theyre calmly standing/sitting there, while a giant strider steps through a car next to them[/QUOTE]

That strider is dead When I was in game posting this I was going to put a Effect on it but cannot find

any tool to do this Sorry for that..

[lonefirewarrior]

These tools let you use all kinds of effects in game.

[url=http://www.garrysmod.org/downloads/?a=view&id=59471][img]http://www.garrysmod.org/img/?t=dll&id=59471[/img][/url]

[url=http://www.garrysmod.org/downloads/?a=view&id=41386][img]http://www.garrysmod.org/img/?t=dll&id=41386[/img][/url]