Hi im new here

[Pew,Pew]

[img]http://i.imgur.com/YF5odc2.jpg[/img]

[img]http://i.imgur.com/Bg4VkpG.jpg[/img]

[img]http://i.imgur.com/noYG9xX.jpg[/img]

hi im new here

and i make bad scenes

please give me some feedback
pls

[AutismoPiggo]

You can zoom in by holding right click

[Pew,Pew]

[QUOTE=AutismoPiggo;52500442]You can zoom in by holding right click[/QUOTE]

thanks for feedback..?

[AutismoPiggo]

Well yeah, the angles aren't very good at all, the bottom pic has the better FOV

[Pew,Pew]

[QUOTE=AutismoPiggo;52500452]Well yeah, the angles aren't very good at all, the bottom pic has the better FOV[/QUOTE]

is there any way to save camera angle?
i lose concentration very easily so i get off gmod so much i really need to know how to do it

[AutismoPiggo]

Use the enhanced camera tool

[Plaster]

that's a horrible thread title, spambots have those all the time

[G i n g e]

[QUOTE=Plaster;52500494]that's a horrible thread title, spambots have those all the time[/QUOTE]

He's new to fp, I have him added on steam he's not a spambot.

[Joazzz]

you're off to a great start from what i can see, the only major "early" problem in the first two shots is that you haven't zoomed in enough so the scene appears stretched/squished (as well as a bit shoddy composition in the very first one)

the third one would look better if the dust effect didn't cover the entirety of the scene, but composition-wise it looks a lot better than the first one already. i also see you've used lamps - if you want to get sharper shadows, look here: [url]https://facepunch.com/showthread.php?t=1112981[/url]

[Olmate Ubafest]

-snip- Joazz said it better

Oh and don't call yourself bad, that gets you nowhere. H

[Pew,Pew]

[QUOTE=Joazzz;52500526]you're off to a great start from what i can see, the only major "early" problem in the first two shots is that you haven't zoomed in enough so the scene appears stretched/squished (as well as a bit shoddy composition in the very first one)

the third one would look better if the dust effect didn't cover the entirety of the scene, but composition-wise it looks a lot better than the first one already. i also see you've used lamps - if you want to get sharper shadows, look here: [url]https://facepunch.com/showthread.php?t=1112981[/url][/QUOTE]

thanks for feedback!
i already seen that thread before like years ago but still thanks for the great feedbacks!

[The bird Woman]

I actually like the high fov on the two last ones

[Pew,Pew]

[QUOTE=The bird Man;52501504]I actually like the high fov on the two last ones[/QUOTE]

im glad you like it

[Shellmish]

the last one lookes the coolest, try out different methods of lighting.

[Pew,Pew]

[QUOTE=Shellmish;52507051]the last one lookes the coolest, try out different methods of lighting.[/QUOTE]

thanks!
and do you know any other methods?

[QwertyTSecond]

[QUOTE=Pew,Pew;52507185]thanks!
and do you know any other methods?[/QUOTE]

Have a look at 3 and 4 point lighting. Most of the principles of photography apply to gmod poses.

[Shellmish]

[QUOTE=Pew,Pew;52507185]thanks!
and do you know any other methods?[/QUOTE]

Umm, im not very smart with this either. I just apply real world methods of lighting, as in try to have multiple light sources highlighting different parts of the subject. Like one from behind, front, left or right. But each light can either be minorly different or the same. It makes everything look neater

[Pew,Pew]

[QUOTE=QwertySecond;52507878]Have a look at 3 and 4 point lighting. Most of the principles of photography apply to gmod poses.[/QUOTE]

i already read the guide about 4 point lighting by ninja nub
but still thanks!

[editline]27th July 2017[/editline]

[QUOTE=Shellmish;52508612]Umm, im not very smart with this either. I just apply real world methods of lighting, as in try to have multiple light sources highlighting different parts of the subject. Like one from behind, front, left or right. But each light can either be minorly different or the same. It makes everything look neater[/QUOTE]

thanks for method!