Nlr code help

[PropGamer123]

Well my Nlr code isn't workin PERIOD nothing is happening
I might be missing a hook I just don't know

function GM:PlayerDeath( victim, weapon, killer )
	local deathpos = 0
	if victim:IsPlayer() and killer:IsPlayer then
		if !victim.died then
			victim.deathpos = victim:GetPos()
			print("You have been slayed because you passed your nlr line come back in 5 mins")

		end
	end
end

timer.Create( "nlrtimer", 1, 500, function()
	local deathpos = 0
	for k,v in pairs(player.GetAll()) do
	if v == playernlr then
		local deathpos2 = v:GetPos()
				if deathpos2:Distance(v.deathpos2) < 800 and v:Alive then
				ply:Kill()
				print("Sorry you have been slayed for nlring")
			end
		end
	end
end)
	
	

[Vegasx]

Untested, but it should do something valuable.

function SetNLRZone( ply ) --Making a function for this because I said so.
	if SERVER then
		ply.deathpos = ply:GetPos()
		timer.Destroy(ply:EntIndex() .. "NLRTimer") -- We don't want a billion timers floating around.
		timer.Create(ply:EntIndex() .. "NLRTimer", 1, 300, function() -- 5 minutes is only 300 seconds. howdoimath.org
		if not IsValid(ply) then return end -- Because dead players are invalid. This'll spam errors unless we only run if the player is alive... I think.
			local playerpos = ply:GetPos()
			local targetpos = ply.deathpos  -- Not sure if continually defining this is efficient, but I do what I want.
			if playerpos:Distance( targetpos ) < 800 && not ply.nlrimmune && ply:Alive() then -- nlrimmune is to make sure a player isn't continually spawn-killed for dying at a spawn point.
				ply:Kill()
				ply:ChatPrint("You got too close to your death zone, and have been slain! (Don't do it again or I'll cut you. (again.))")
			end
		end)


	end
end

hook.Add("PlayerDeath", "NLR.DeathZone", function( ply, inflictor, killer )
if not killer == ply then
	if killer:IsPlayer() then -- Only run the function if the killer was a player. Otherwise, why would we care?
		SetNLRZone( ply ) -- I've only ever ran functions like this with C#, so forgive me if this is incorrect.
	end
	timer.Destroy(ply:EntIndex() .. "nlrimmune") -- Simple timers cannot be stopped as far as I am aware. And we need to stop this
end
end)

hook.Add("PlayerSpawn", "NLR.SpawnImmunity", function( ply )
	if SERVER then
	ply.nlrimmune = true
	timer.Create(ply:EntIndex() .. "nlrimmune", 30, 1, function() -- Creating a timer here because we want to be able to end it.
		ply.nlrimmune = false
	end)
	end
end)

[editline]2nd November 2013[/editline]

Why am I being rated dumb? I tested the code and it works exactly as intended?

[pvtpuffball]

I too was having issues with a NLR module/addon, and yours doesn't even seem to do anything xD
I might be putting it in the wrong place 0.0 idk