Sorry for having like 3 threads in one day but I've made tons of stuff since I went, this is it for tonight and tomorrow.
This is the first chapter of my first ever comic and honestly, its far from the best it could be. The comic makers at metrocop helped me out with criticism and thankfully Chapter 2 is already far better writing wise.
This is based in Sumatra, the esp faction i had before i got banned from it for being a cock. Its on the wiki if you'd like a brief history.
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Digging this panel a bit too much
Lol good, i really liked that panel.
Overall imo its a bit shoddy to say the least comic wise, theres not much "plot" and the posing could be majorly improved.
Hopefully Chapter 2 will be much better.
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