[SFM_GLS] Left 4 Dead - Why Do We Fall (Music Clip)

[2Baxes]

This is my first work in Source Filmmaker. Spend about three weeks to made this clip.
P.S.: GLS tag in the title of the thread means "G-LinK Studio". This will help me to find my threads in future, beacause the @search@ doesn't works for me here.

[video=youtube;ik182yvDl2w]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ik182yvDl2w[/video]

[Funny Hats]

The opening shots are a bit drawn out.

[gt118]

I really wanted to see the end of that.

[2Baxes]

[QUOTE=gt118;37820054]I really wanted to see the end of that.[/QUOTE]
This is the end. Nick was holding a grenade in his hand, and when he hit those terrorist, he died with all guys in the church,

[Robertto]

Finally ellis and rochelle are dead :D (both are DUMB)

But Nick is badass...

Would be better with l4d1 characters, but great job.

[HWECQI]

That was pretty great! I think if you practice animation a bit more (some of the animation like when nick was laying on the ground and looked to the others was kinda stiff) you'll be pretty much perfect. You did a great job conveying the story.

That intro sequence is kinda obnoxious though, I'd try shortening it. Try making it no more than 5 seconds long.

[2Baxes]

[QUOTE=HWECQI;37829145]That was pretty great! I think if you practice animation a bit more (some of the animation like when nick was laying on the ground and looked to the others was kinda stiff) you'll be pretty much perfect. You did a great job conveying the story.

That intro sequence is kinda obnoxious though, I'd try shortening it. Try making it no more than 5 seconds long.[/QUOTE]

Yes, I'm thinking about making more shorter intro.

[zombiez]

I thought your intro was great, could have taken out 5 seconds.
The esablishment and introduction to soldiers was out of nowhere and should
have been hinted to creatively within the first couple shots or at least before
a third of the way through.

The ending seemed like it wasn't finished. If you take so much time in the begining, it needs to end that way.

[2Baxes]

[QUOTE=zombiez;37843542]I thought your intro was great, could have taken out 5 seconds.
The esablishment and introduction to soldiers was out of nowhere and should
have been hinted to creatively within the first couple shots or at least before
a third of the way through.

The ending seemed like it wasn't finished. If you take so much time in the begining, it needs to end that way.[/QUOTE]

This is the end. Nick was holding a grenade in his hand, and when he hit those terrorist, he died with all guys in the church.

[Arxin]

Nice job.
SFM is just perfect for making music videos.