Hello ! (I'm french sorry for my bad language)
I wish you present my map!
I called it "rp_robertland"...
I began has creates the map approximately 2 months ago, and I shall like having your advise to the improved.
I am going to present you to it: it consists at present of a city, a center commercial as well as a small campaign having two houses.
This is my first map !
Center Commercial :
[url=http://uppix.net/0/4/3/58f890b757cba8dad77822806052a.html][img]http://uppix.net/0/4/3/58f890b757cba8dad77822806052att.jpg[/img][/url]
[url=http://uppix.net/6/f/5/71227c6f3729b79262dbdfdffd6a2.html][img]http://uppix.net/6/f/5/71227c6f3729b79262dbdfdffd6a2tt.jpg[/img][/url]
[url=http://uppix.net/2/7/e/5c9b8ef66a1653407ddcddf62cd8f.html][img]http://uppix.net/2/7/e/5c9b8ef66a1653407ddcddf62cd8ftt.jpg[/img][/url]
The Campaign :
[url=http://uppix.net/8/e/5/124dd46b67ed1dadc400ecfad6041.html][img]http://uppix.net/8/e/5/124dd46b67ed1dadc400ecfad6041tt.jpg[/img][/url]
[url=http://uppix.net/0/8/1/51f397b9a7e4e7ba5493f5208fde8.html][img]http://uppix.net/0/8/1/51f397b9a7e4e7ba5493f5208fde8tt.jpg[/img][/url]
The City :
[url=http://uppix.net/0/f/f/5efea719a95259698d4eb1f71cc03.html][img]http://uppix.net/0/f/f/5efea719a95259698d4eb1f71cc03tt.jpg[/img][/url]
[url=http://uppix.net/c/1/0/12b3a20d4b3756e9006e42ff6d25e.html][img]http://uppix.net/c/1/0/12b3a20d4b3756e9006e42ff6d25ett.jpg[/img][/url]
[url=http://uppix.net/6/a/4/bb1fc535720d613a95a6d0ac74d82.html][img]http://uppix.net/6/a/4/bb1fc535720d613a95a6d0ac74d82tt.jpg[/img][/url]
[url=http://uppix.net/d/7/4/c155afb1c128edea3e75a6f00482d.html][img]http://uppix.net/d/7/4/c155afb1c128edea3e75a6f00482dtt.jpg[/img][/url]
[url=http://uppix.net/5/1/a/be89f96d1a5d07080522256750bf4.html][img]http://uppix.net/5/1/a/be89f96d1a5d07080522256750bf4tt.jpg[/img][/url]
Sewers :
[url=http://uppix.net/8/f/f/6b71cc6bac130f07b9e4043424e8d.html][img]http://uppix.net/8/f/f/6b71cc6bac130f07b9e4043424e8dtt.jpg[/img][/url]
[url=http://uppix.net/4/6/7/c4ae2a5adda78e640d5bbd566dc01.html][img]http://uppix.net/4/6/7/c4ae2a5adda78e640d5bbd566dc01tt.jpg[/img][/url]
[url=http://uppix.net/9/6/e/98fd62251aa4030b8009b11507f00.html][img]http://uppix.net/9/6/e/98fd62251aa4030b8009b11507f00tt.jpg[/img][/url]
Thank you for having to look! I shall like having your impression and do not hesitate in given the advice if you have it!
You can download the map on gmod.org : [url]http://www.garrysmod.org/downloads/?a=view&id=120151[/url]
[url=http://uppix.net/e/d/d/a8b051218032db73b2fd809ebbf7c.html][img]http://uppix.net/e/d/d/a8b051218032db73b2fd809ebbf7c.jpg[/img][/url]
For your first map, that's really not bad at all. Just try and vary your architecture a little bit, to make some of those buildings easier to look at.
not BAD but maybe more detail in the v2
I love how the last few threads have been people that don't speak english very good, but none the less this map is actually pretty good for a first.
Oh my god! You're first map is better than my first map:O I love this!!! <33333333
an elaborate mapper in the making
Agreed!!!!!! I might get a few tips from this guy!
Looking good
Looks kinda similar to a few other RP maps. Good start, nonetheless.
[QUOTE=regisrobert;29096812](I'm french sorry for my [b]bad language[/b])[/QUOTE]
:irony:
A little blocky but nontheless a better map that some of the other new guys around here.
Add some train tracks all over the place and then we'll talk
Actually quite nice OP, try adding a bit more detail to the exteriors of the buildings to take the players eyes away from the minor blockiness and it'll be lovely.
That is actually very good for a first map. I'm confident that you will become a very capable mapper in time and with more practice. :buddy:
My only complaint is a few blocky areas, otherwise it is fine.
[QUOTE=Black-Ice;29106349]Add some train tracks all over the place and then we'll talk[/QUOTE]
Train fetish
[editline]11th April 2011[/editline]
:v:
Considering most peoples first maps are full bright rooms, with box corridors, box ceilings, and a nice little box in the middle this is pretty good... Nice one.
Very much looking forward to future works from you.
This is great for a first release.
For what I assume is a first map this one of the better ones, but it could use some polish, it's very "pointy" with all those edges. Your map actually uses its simplistic architecture to its advantage, it screams child like optimism and happiness, reminds me of Dragon Ball somehow?
le map.. il est une tres gros merde
Its better then most peoples first maps. Good job!
Also, those storm drains are massive.
[QUOTE=Instant Mix;29173464]le map.. il est une tres gros merde[/QUOTE]
[img]http://gyazo.com/9ef1313cf8b5504027b67dea912a599d.png[/img]
Heh...
[QUOTE=Instant Mix;29173464]le map.. il est une tres gros merde[/QUOTE]
idiot
[QUOTE=regisrobert;29193473]idiot[/QUOTE]
French idiot
[QUOTE=simonjb;29199920]French idiot[/QUOTE]
French learning Scottish idiot.
[QUOTE=Instant Mix;29239266]French learning Scottish idiot.[/QUOTE]
Haha fair enough but I do a great scottish accent, I can pass as a bloke from dundee :P
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