New Map for The stalker Ts_undercity

[doxkool]

Hey!

I decided to make a map for Stalker from a underground of a RP map I never finish and I simply called ts_undercity.

I not gonna write alot on that, simply because I'm not verry good in english...

So here some screenshot of that map. If you have questions or comments feel free to write them and I'll try to response the most I can. :)

[url=http://image.noelshack.com/fichiers/2013/13/1364357806-rp-qbix-city0007.jpg][img]http://image.noelshack.com/minis/2013/13/1364357806-rp-qbix-city0007.png[/img][/url]
[url=http://image.noelshack.com/fichiers/2013/13/1364357826-rp-qbix-city0010.jpg][img]http://image.noelshack.com/minis/2013/13/1364357826-rp-qbix-city0010.png[/img][/url]
[url=http://image.noelshack.com/fichiers/2013/13/1364357869-rp-qbix-city0018.jpg][img]http://image.noelshack.com/minis/2013/13/1364357869-rp-qbix-city0018.png[/img][/url]
[url=http://image.noelshack.com/fichiers/2013/13/1364357892-rp-qbix-city0021.jpg][img]http://image.noelshack.com/minis/2013/13/1364357892-rp-qbix-city0021.png[/img][/url]
[url=http://image.noelshack.com/fichiers/2013/13/1364360040-ts-undercity0000.jpg][img]http://image.noelshack.com/minis/2013/13/1364360040-ts-undercity0000.png[/img][/url]
[url=http://image.noelshack.com/fichiers/2013/13/1364360044-ts-undercity0001.jpg][img]http://image.noelshack.com/minis/2013/13/1364360044-ts-undercity0001.png[/img][/url]

[B]:EDIT:[/B]
DOWNLOAD:
7zip : [url]http://www.mediafire.com/?a5r0x5rm8i3h5sg[/url]
Workshop : [url]http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=134549891[/url]

Thanks guys!

[bradno]

looks good. I really like the stalker, so hopefully I can play on your map someday.

[doxkool]

Thanks ZeFruitNazi :)

I just fix the missing textures and content in the map.

[UntouchedShadow]

Oooooooh, I do like maps that have that underground base/sewer type vibe. Looks nice.

[Sims_doc]

*Scrubbed*

[TCB]

this looks nice, but you use decals a bit too much.
[t]http://image.noelshack.com/fichiers/2013/13/1364357826-rp-qbix-city0010.jpg[/t]
in this screenshot you can see the same stain decal on the wallls twice, along with three splashes of blood. if you only used one of each of these, it'd be more effective; exposing the player to too much blood removes the shock and they become used to it.

it's also seen here
[t]http://image.noelshack.com/fichiers/2013/13/1364360044-ts-undercity0001.jpg[/t]
along with some lighting issues on the ceiling.

some areas look a bit too bare, such as
[t]http://image.noelshack.com/fichiers/2013/13/1364357806-rp-qbix-city0007.jpg[/t]
it could do with some more props or other small details.

this map looks really good, it shows that you have a good understanding of atmosphere and lighting, if you just improved these few things it'd make it much nicer. keep it up!
[sp]it also looks like it'd make a rad deathmatch map[/sp]

[doxkool]

Thank you TCB for you're comment i'll try to take more attention to that :)

[twoski]

damn i don't know how i missed this map. looks awesome.

a few things:

you put a game_text entity in the map that prints out "map made by doxkool" which is kind of tacky. i'm just going to make my gamemode delete game_text entities so this isn't a problem anyhow.

a few props have improper lighting which can be fixed pretty easily.

there is a checkerboard texture in the room with the death pit. it's on the sliding door. i assume it's an ep2 texture or something.