https://orig00.deviantart.net/8933/f/2018/052/0/c/last_day_as_a_sniper_by_t3ss3r-dc3wyyg.jpg
better watch your back
gmod and photoshop
It looks cheesy and awkward.
tell me more. i really dont know what is wrong
I think what Devil Traitor was trying to say is that it doesn't really convey the emotion that'd be visible in this kind of scene... it looks like its staged, as if there isn't any danger at all.
I'd mainly blame it at the perspective and the posing of the guy in the background (He looks more like an SS officer about to execute a civilian, then someone who just sneaked up on a sniper). Perhaps a perspective changed would help or better posing.
Aside from that the lighting is phenomal, though the guy in the background is a bit too much out of focus
He's not looking at the sniper, thats one reason why its awkward
The lighting is great, and the angle is good too imo. I agree that changing the facial expressions to be a bit more expressive would help.
my final thoughts: in addition to the lighting, this image went out of the wrong way and, with the help of all, I will be able to improve my future artworks.
I do not like to re-edit my screenshots because I want to remember what went wrong
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