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I really need your feedback for this, so make sure you [b]let me know[/b] by commenting to this post and the YouTube video! Also, please, don't mind the [b]wrong-timed[/b] cuts and the [b]noise[/b] during the video! Editing programs hate me!
And if you are going to criticize me for the quality of the video and/or the audio, please accept my apologize. I'll try to remove more background noise and get users with better internet connections to film for next time (if it's going to be a next time). Other than that, please go ahead and tell me your opinions!
[video=youtube;XZmJwb55iRA]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=XZmJwb55iRA[/video]
Cool concept but I think it could have been executed in a better way somehow.
Oh god, that black guy's voice was so horrible it wasn't even funny. The voices in general wasn't too good, too much accent.
[QUOTE=PollytheParrot;31992537]Cool concept but I think it could have been executed in a better way somehow.[/QUOTE]
Can you be a bit more clear with that? Because that was my first ever machinima series trial, and the lack of experience makes me very confused. So, can you tell me, maybe, what I should've done to make it better? So that I'll know in the future.
You need to work on your voiceacting, and the skits could've been done much better, but I can see that this has potential.
[QUOTE=Randomined;31992607]Can you be a bit more clear with that? Because that was my first ever machinima series trial, and the lack of experience makes me very confused. So, can you tell me, maybe, what I should've done to make it better? So that I'll know in the future.[/QUOTE]
Kind of agree with what Raptor said,
The voices weren't very good and the skits should be better.
[QUOTE=PollytheParrot;31992702]Kind of agree with what Raptor said,
The voices weren't very good and the skits should be better.[/QUOTE]
About the skins, this is not that much of a problem, we'll change them easily. The voice problem is kind of complication though. I am not english, and I am trying to force my accent to sound more english-like, as the innate english community may not enjoy it. I would love to find a place to find english guys willing to do these kind of things. The acting is terrible, I know that, but for now, this was kind of a demo to see if some guys will be interested in joining us, preferably guy with better english accents than ours...
Forced humor is not "random", it's got the Minecraft but no comedy and the voice-acting is painful to listen to. I'd volunteer to do some voice-acting work but current living conditions forbid me from saying such, eh, "colorful" things out loud.
It isn't terrible, but again I have to echo the previous complaints. Work on the English, and the correct words to be used.
[QUOTE=Randomined;31992793]About the skins, this is not that much of a problem, we'll change them easily. The voice problem is kind of complication though. I am not english, and I am trying to force my accent to sound more english-like, as the innate english community may not enjoy it. I would love to find a place to find english guys willing to do these kind of things. The acting is terrible, I know that, but for now, this was kind of a demo to see if some guys will be interested in joining us, preferably guy with better english accents than ours...[/QUOTE]
He doesn't mean skins, he means jokes.
The beginning reminded me of "The Room", just the way he was talking.
[QUOTE=Gubbygub;31995006]The beginning reminded me of "The Room", just the way he was talking.[/QUOTE]
I have never watched it, so I would not know XD.
[QUOTE=Randomined;32000700]I have never watched it, so I would not know XD.[/QUOTE]
Never use XD on Facepunch [I][I][B]EVER[/B][/I][/I]
Geh...adding "random" in the title doesn't help at all. It kind of made me not want to watch the video at all...
That, and
[video=youtube;DqM3uiy-7os]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=DqM3uiy-7os[/video]
[editline]29th August 2011[/editline]
[QUOTE=Randomined;32000700]I have never watched it, so I would not know XD.[/QUOTE]
Uh...yeah...improve before you try to make something.
[media]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=WFyzadnA79k[/media]
and now i take my leave.
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