I'm trying to put together a more informed "new releases" video series. Thoughts on the first attemp

[TheBratterz]

[video=youtube;UAM6FsQGGKI]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=UAM6FsQGGKI[/video]

I'd be very happy to hear your feedback. Thanks.

[Lazor]

pretty good. you could try injecting a bit more personality into it though, your voice is pretty flat throughout the entire thing(like when you said "who knows, some of this may have even been useful" which was intended to be comedic but just sounded a bit dull)

keep it up, though! a lot of this will come more easily with practice

[TheBratterz]

[QUOTE=Lazor;33676872]pretty good. you could try injecting a bit more personality into it though, your voice is pretty flat throughout the entire thing(like when you said "who knows, some of this may have even been useful" which was intended to be comedic but just sounded a bit dull)

keep it up, though! a lot of this will come more easily with practice[/QUOTE]

Fair enough point - I'll try and bear that in mind next week. I think the problem may come from reading a script without thinking about how my voice is sounding. Definitely something to work on. Thank you.

[Lazor]

that probably is the problem. you should definitely do a couple read-thrus before doing an actual run. if that was your first time reading it out loud in this video, then you're doing exceptionally well. cold reading is a difficult thing to do.

[MadPro119]

Enjoyable, your voice sounds good for it and it does sound like you read through it very well.

[Super Saiyan Ye]

more info is better so try not to skip things like x3 if possible and just keep it full of information pooled from many sources in a organised just entertaining way.