My Immortal: Da Next Chaptas: I WAS BORED OK, I PROMISE!! - General

I think My Immortal is Comedic Genius, and when it ended with ""Abra Kedabra!" I Shooted." i was disspointed, so i decided to end my immortal Properly myself with my own continuation of the story, i dont know how long it will take for me to go Completely Brain dead or to just get bored of doing this shit, which ill say the first one will happen first.so, anyway, if you REALLY want to read this, go ahead, i hope you have a good laugh. i love making people laugh. if not,im fine. -------------------------------------------------------------------------- Shapter 45: iM NOt ok. A.N:Sot op mudda fockers!!!11111. I dutn car if i left da sorty ded for YEERS! my parents tok me into a Merital Hospatal cuz i slit muh rists agen!11 Fangz raven for returnin to help me wif da story and fer joinin me supprot groop whil i wuz gon. PREPZ GTFO FUKERS!!!!1111 xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx666xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx "Abra Kedabra!" I Shooted. Da spell had hit da car and zoldemort was Yelling Shouting his gun.It looked like a Black a Black Red Pentegram with Smaller Pentagrams cumming out of its side.Boldemort was Agry. "WTF FUCKERS!!1 Y DU U SHOT ME WHIL I WAS IN DA CAR!11" he shooted at us. Hades started to look all deprzzd wen suddenly.......................Veldemont Flew away in Drakos Gottik Car, wile Hadeys began To. "OMFG"shotted most uf us in da froop. "OGM VONDEMART KILLED HATEYS!!1" i shooted. We ran up to Doubledoors Oofice. "Sire, Sirius Izd ead!" Lukian Souted. "idd not giv a fok wut appens to u all. u r all goffick nd i shill send you all to Baslaham if Hu try 2 do anyfin agen." he shooted arngly.He waz watchin a preppy movie about sum man who tim trevelles nd has a wife. "Nooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo!!!!!112" we shooted. we were Shooked becuz he used to be goffik and now he iz meen agen. we went down da tower, we wer in da cort yard wen............................................................... DA TOWER FELL OVER FROM A MASSLE FROM FOXELMARTS WOOND! "NO!" i shooted as i tried to save Domballdur. he was stabud by a Poont on a goffic black fence. His blod torned da fence in2 a red coloor. It was a beggenning, of a new adventur. ------------------------------------------------------------------------ So, i hoped you like it, now go ahead and post your reactions! also, i hope i posted in the right place too, and not have broken any rules, cause all i wanted to do is show how well im able to copy Tara Gillesbe and make people laugh. :ohdear:

So stupid.

I remember when cloud8745 and darkside did videos reading this

[QUOTE=TheSporeGA;29141551]So stupid.[/QUOTE] on purpose, well if you've seen the first my immortal, then you would know why its so stupid. [editline]13th April 2011[/editline] For the people who haven't read it yet: [url]http://myimmortalrehost.webs.com/chapters122.htm[/url] [editline]13th April 2011[/editline] [QUOTE=Adrenaline;29141602]I remember when cloud8745 and darkside did videos reading this[/QUOTE] also bennetthesage has the best reading.