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Anyone know what map was being used in that comic?[/QUOTE]
It's pl_outback.
[url]http://www.fpsbanana.com/maps/101441[/url]
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[IMG_THUMB]http://img230.imageshack.us/img230/4976/ctfwell0000.png[/IMG_THUMB]
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Engineer Pooh?
[quote=Blutarch Sherman]Winnie the Heavy
Winnie the Heavy
Fluffy all pluffy
Can outsmart bullet
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[QUOTE=Lijitsu;24010484]Or, in my case, shoot two dozen arrows at it before you finally notice it's a spray when running past it with the intel.
I still don't know who sprayed that, but damn if it didn't fool the hell out of me.[/QUOTE]
The best ones are the ones that you can only see from a distance, and disappear when you get close.
"Damn, son of a bitch got away. >:C"
[QUOTE=halflambada;24009918]All credit for this picture goes to [URL="http://www.facepunch.com/GselKa"]GselKa[/URL] I'm simply posting it here.
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Engineer Hive.[/QUOTE]
I'm pretty sure that Rebbacus was the one that made that hat. You can look her up if you want it.
[QUOTE=Zero-Point;24017051]The best ones are the ones that you can only see from a distance, and disappear when you get close.
"Damn, son of a bitch got away. >:C"[/QUOTE]
Oh damn, I probably would've never figured out it was a spray if it had faded when I got close. That was right after the Sniper/Spy update, and I was playing primarily defense on 2Fort - believe it or not, even though it was a full 24 man server, it was rare to have 3 Snipers and/or 3 Spies at any one time, great server, wish it hadn't shut down. I knew something was odd about my 'opponent' when I launched several arrows directly into where his head [i]should've[/i] been, and yet I never even heard the hit sound. If it had been a fading spray, I wouldn't have even noticed it when I ran off the battlements with the intel, and would've perpetually thought he had really damn good dodging skills. And an inability to fire his rifle.
[QUOTE=Pvt. Martin;24029730][media]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=HCF471iqbLQ&playnext=1&videos=AjADT7t_swA&feature=sub[/media][/QUOTE]
I lol'd
lol what did usaokay do to piss everyone off.
Best DemoLady! ever
[img]http://www.pixenli.com/images/1281687356066871300.jpg[/img]
Groovy baby!
Get someone to write the scripts for you
Well his can't be any worse them mine
[img_thumb]http://img40.imageshack.us/img40/4365/superior2j.jpg[/img_thumb]
[QUOTE=usaokay;24032075]No.[/QUOTE]
Well excuse my being direct, but your stories suck. They are boring, unfunny, etc. The posing is sometimes stiffer than it should be but that's fine.
[QUOTE=usaokay;24032103]Okay, how about this comic I have yet to post here?
[url]http://www.facepunch.com/showthread.php?t=971285[/url]
read that then come back to this thread
Okay, thanks for not falling in line with the numerous other kids who will rate boxes.[/QUOTE]
Okay, let me point out some of the stuff that I didn't like.
[list]
[*] "Now with 104% less dialogue"
[*] The text colors are nit always fitting, like the 'Good Ol'Boy' is too dark at the bottom
[*] Darkish brown + black stroke = not easily readable
[*] Too many frames when the pyro first appears
[*] Close-up guitar neck - make it a real chord if you're doing a close-up
[*] Random combustion?
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Posing is really good apart from several places, namely the get out pose looks a bit wrong, can't put my finger on it though, the w-hat's wrong pose is p.stiff too, when the pyro disappears (a quick runaway, I assume) from the medic, the second frame should be with him blurred/running IMO, the first pyro guitar pose is weird, so is the one after random combustion, the tackle doesn't really look like a tackle, more like a fall, also wtf engi's shoulder when he's swinging the wrench.
Scout pose is p.nice apart from floating, sniper's is weird, heavy leg wtf, the crossed arms look stiff as hell also fingerposing, demo made me laugh, the soldier is emotionless, as is the spy; and what the hell reverse guitar @ final frame.
Overall it's pretty good, the story could be better though, like this it's fine but not particularly funny or entertaining. Loved the speechlessness, but it was ruined a tiny bit by the combustion, tackle and audience (aliased)text.
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Forgot to mention that you need to be conscious about the in-frame layout as well as the page layout, don't forget the rule of thirds, too.
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Forgot to mention that you need to be conscious about the in-frame layout as well as the page layout, don't forget the rule of thirds, too.[/QUOTE]
The rule of thirds? Please inform me of the rule of thirds, I plan on getting into comic making sometime soon.
[QUOTE=DireAvenger;24034132]The rule of thirds? Please inform me of the rule of thirds, I plan on getting into comic making sometime soon.[/QUOTE]
[url]http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Rule_of_thirds[/url]
"My dispenser comes as a suppository."
Oh lord.
Also, Zoidberg Pyro made my day. You can't like Futurama and not like Zoidberg. It's impossible.
Good news everyone!, my sentry is getting sap- No wait.
I still say Fry should be the Scout.
[QUOTE=Ehanced_AI;24032083]Well his can't be any worse them mine
[img_thumb]http://img40.imageshack.us/img40/4365/superior2j.jpg[/img_thumb][/QUOTE]
It looks great
[QUOTE=Funnycat;24031983]Get someone to write the scripts for you[/QUOTE]
Has it ever occured to you that not all comics are meant to be funny. You're seriously over-critiquing the comic. I thought it was good.
I thought Zoidberg was the obvious choice for the medic
[QUOTE=Ehanced_AI;24032083]Well his can't be any worse them mine
[img_thumb]http://img40.imageshack.us/img40/4365/superior2j.jpg[/img_thumb][/QUOTE]
If only soldier could have that as secondary in tf2 :sigh:
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Where's the Smart rating when you need it?
[QUOTE=ADT;24031116]Best DemoLady! ever
[img_thumb]http://www.pixenli.com/images/1281687356066871300.jpg[/img_thumb][/QUOTE]
NOW WITH EXPLOSIONS
[img]http://www.pixenli.com/images/1281720915045811600.jpg[/img]
[QUOTE=ADT;24041339]NOW WITH EXPLOSIONS
[img_thumb]http://www.pixenli.com/images/1281720915045811600.jpg[/img_thumb][/QUOTE]
:smug:
I wouldn't mind seeing more of that demo-lady.
[QUOTE=KnightLight;24041806]I wouldn't mind seeing more of that demo-lady.[/QUOTE]
Is that in a :smug: way or a "I like this art" way?
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