[QUOTE=Egevened;23705269]treythepunkid, ever since you have been listening to the whining of these jealous nitpicks your map has been getting progressively worse
they just think they're professional at giving you tips how your map can be better but in the end all they're doing is ruining your shit
perfect example is how "the yellow sticks out like a sore thumb" no it doesn't[/QUOTE]
No-one is being jealous here as far as I've seen. We're just giving pointers on how to improve the map. Right now I feel as if Trey's map looks like it has a Turbine-theme with a whole bunch of custom models.
[QUOTE=TerabyteS;23705605]Yes it does. His prop is not rexpecting the tf2 color scheme and modelling style, it sticks out a lot because of this, and it looks a lot dirty.[/QUOTE]
Every single prop he made fits, even the generator. You guys are just nitpicking because he's a jack of all trades and can make this shit in minutes and you can't accept it's amazing
[editline]02:18PM[/editline]
[QUOTE=Daimao;23706213]No-one is being jealous here as far as I've seen. We're just giving pointers on how to improve the map. Right now I feel as if Trey's map looks like it has a Turbine-theme with a whole bunch of custom models.[/QUOTE]
so far every single "tip" I have read here is a nitpick
[QUOTE=Egevened;23706385]Every single prop he made fits, even the generator. You guys are just nitpicking because he's a jack of all trades and can make this shit in minutes and you can't accept it's amazing
[editline]02:18PM[/editline]
so far every single "tip" I have read here is a nitpick[/QUOTE]
No-one here is jealous, we're not gathering in a smoky room to come up with a scheme to ruin a map.
[QUOTE=Egevened;23706385]Every single prop he made fits, even the generator. You guys are just nitpicking because he's a jack of all trades and can make this shit in minutes and you can't accept it's amazing
[editline]02:18PM[/editline]
so far every single "tip" I have read here is a nitpick[/QUOTE]
To you it might be amazing, but others might think it's mediocre. (Not saying it is, I think it's a pretty decent map.) You shouldn't get so worked up about it.
[QUOTE=Egevened;23706385]Every single prop he made fits, even the generator. You guys are just nitpicking because he's a jack of all trades and can make this shit in minutes and you can't accept it's amazing
[editline]02:18PM[/editline]
so far every single "tip" I have read here is a nitpick[/QUOTE]
Stop being a childish fanboy please. If you cannot distinguish constructive criticism from nitpicking, you shouldn't belong here.
In other news, pics:
[IMG]http://dl.dropbox.com/u/2951174/contest5/m9_1.png[/IMG]
[IMG]http://dl.dropbox.com/u/2951174/contest5/m9_2.png[/IMG]
[IMG]http://dl.dropbox.com/u/2951174/contest5/m9_3.png[/IMG]
[IMG]http://dl.dropbox.com/u/2951174/contest5/m9_4.png[/IMG]
[IMG]http://dl.dropbox.com/u/2951174/contest5/m9_5.png[/IMG]
[IMG]http://dl.dropbox.com/u/2951174/contest5/m9_6.png[/IMG]
Started doing the part near CP 1/2 (was about time).
Opinions? (OMG DONT BE JEALOUS ABOUT WHAT I DID PLEASE)
Bumpty bump?
Bump Bump ba dump bump, BING
Just getting started building after settling on a theme with artists.
Just getting initial block out of the type of geometry needed. Shiny HDR shots won't come until geometry fits gameplay and is sound.
Ah, incremental, slow progress..
[img_thumb]http://www.skysilcox.com/dev-blog/wp-content/uploads/2010/07/yardarchprogress1_unlit.jpg[/img_thumb]
Looking great, TerabyteS, but IMO,
[img]http://img59.imageshack.us/img59/2373/criticisms1.png[/img]
Maybe scaling the bricks to be bigger vertically (and horizontally a small amount?) would help.
Hey guys, here is what you missed from FP being down.
Basically i reworked the room with the generator to be more factory like.
[img]http://imgur.com/jwNiz.jpg[/img]
[img]http://imgur.com/bGlHK.jpg[/img]
[img]http://imgur.com/VAGoU.jpg[/img]
[img]http://imgur.com/ynkTI.jpg[/img]
Also made a box railway system
[media]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=cJI1fEgZwVA[/media]
And now here is whats new.
I made a crane to hang over the box rollers, but i might have to size it down a bit. Seems to big. Also the texture is just base colors so bare with me for a sec. Also the shadow seems off as well, will fix that.
[img]http://imgur.com/RVPw4.jpg[/img]
I also made my own version of concretefloor007 and made it more "warm" to help fit with the floor around it.
[img]http://imgur.com/pkbqg.jpg[/img]
Thats all for now!
You're only working on one room all the time.
Also, make a trim around that metal floor.
[editline]08:49AM[/editline]
Also, new stuff from me
The awesome bridge made out of various stuff
[IMG]http://dl.dropbox.com/u/2951174/contest5/m10_4.png[/IMG]
And some more pics
[IMG]http://dl.dropbox.com/u/2951174/contest5/m10_1.png[/IMG]
[IMG]http://dl.dropbox.com/u/2951174/contest5/m10_2.png[/IMG]
[IMG]http://dl.dropbox.com/u/2951174/contest5/m10_3.png[/IMG]
[IMG]http://dl.dropbox.com/u/2951174/contest5/m10_5.png[/IMG]
I really like that bridge :v:
Yay :D
Trey has my vote but Tera is dominating as well.
Why does trey get more love than me D:
[QUOTE=TerabyteS;23754602]The awesome bridge made out of various stuff
[IMG_thumb]http://dl.dropbox.com/u/2951174/contest5/m10_4.png[/IMG_thumb][/QUOTE]
My one complaint is that the tires/palette seem to be defying gravity a bit. They don't have any support and seem to be hanging over the edge in a way that's not possible.
The rest of the map looks really good though.
[QUOTE=TerabyteS;23765788]Why does trey get more love than me D:[/QUOTE]
Must be because of the Didgeri-Die and Tooth-Ache. D:
Between Trey and Tera I'm gonna have to suicide twice.
[editline]05:28PM[/editline]
:suicide: :suicide:
[QUOTE=TerabyteS;23765788]Why does trey get more love than me D:[/QUOTE]
It's because he's going for something really different, though I'm not really sure it will work, I'm interested to see the result.
Yours is quality, I must say, but overlooked due to its largely being grounded in established tf2 map style.
I am reserving judgement on both until I see, and get to try, the finished products.
Plucking this thread up from the dead!
Big handful of images from the new areas of the map :)
Huge up to Gooba for the custom skybox! [URL="http://forums.tf2maps.net/showthread.php?t=14349"]Check his artpass entry and leave him a nice comment![/URL]
And here come the pics!
[IMG]http://dl.dropbox.com/u/2951174/contest5/m12_1.png[/IMG]
[IMG]http://dl.dropbox.com/u/2951174/contest5/m12_2.png[/IMG]
[IMG]http://dl.dropbox.com/u/2951174/contest5/m12_3.png[/IMG]
[IMG]http://dl.dropbox.com/u/2951174/contest5/m12_4.png[/IMG]
[IMG]http://dl.dropbox.com/u/2951174/contest5/m12_5.png[/IMG]
[IMG]http://dl.dropbox.com/u/2951174/contest5/m12_6.png[/IMG]
[IMG]http://dl.dropbox.com/u/2951174/contest5/m12_7.png[/IMG]
[IMG]http://dl.dropbox.com/u/2951174/contest5/m12_8.png[/IMG]
[IMG]http://dl.dropbox.com/u/2951174/contest5/m12_9.png[/IMG]
[IMG]http://dl.dropbox.com/u/2951174/contest5/m12_10.png[/IMG]
[IMG]http://dl.dropbox.com/u/2951174/contest5/m12_11.png[/IMG]
[IMG]http://dl.dropbox.com/u/2951174/contest5/m12_12.png[/IMG]
[IMG]http://dl.dropbox.com/u/2951174/contest5/m12_13.png[/IMG]
Leave comments and feedback! :D
Christ almighty.
[QUOTE=Sharc;23834000]Christ almighty.[/QUOTE]
I guess this means good
[QUOTE=TerabyteS;23833877]Leave comments and feedback![/QUOTE]
A thousand Saxton Hales shed manly tears of joy.
[editline]07:47PM[/editline]
I am disliking the texturing here, however.
[img]http://img440.imageshack.us/img440/9286/artpasscriticisms.png[/img]
Seems a bit too "patchwork-y" for me. IMO, it repeats too many times(looks weird having it twice vertically) and looks shrunken horizontally.
Amazing otherwise.
I officially give up.
Autumn theme just isn't gonna work, and I have an idea for my own arena map anyway.
Besides, Tera is basically doing what my theme is, only 300,000% better than me :saddowns:
[QUOTE=NanoSquid;23836712]I have an idea for my own arena map anyway.[/QUOTE]
Go for it! And make a KOTH port if you ever finish it.
[QUOTE=Baboo00;23836865]Go for it! And make a KOTH port if you ever finish it.[/QUOTE]
Alright. It's going to be called arena_hole, and it's just a basic mine theme. It's a big round map with a bottomless pit in the middle. :v:
Seems like it was a good decision to give up on the third day, I wouldn't stand a chance. :v:
I have no ideas for the last point, to make it look in a way that doesn't break the theme. Got any?
[editline]03:06PM[/editline]
[IMG]http://dl.dropbox.com/u/2951174/contest5/m12_14.png[/IMG]
I forgot to mention this one
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