[QUOTE=tempunary;43865139][IMG]http://cloud-4.steampowered.com/ugc/469801088439997386/E8F6FDBE601D50D37D220C6A1680CFEE1354ADD2/1024x576.resizedimage[/IMG][/QUOTE]
I want to see this with the HDMI Patch, making his evil brother
[media]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=RlI7AQhUySo[/media]
How competitive TF2 matches are decided
[QUOTE=Drury;43883140][media]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=RlI7AQhUySo[/media]
How competitive TF2 matches are decided[/QUOTE]
Wait, how the heck did that happen?
[QUOTE=Drury;43883140][media]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=RlI7AQhUySo[/media]
How competitive TF2 matches are decided[/QUOTE]
Oh god, I remember this, I was the Blu Spy for that match. No one is really sure how it happened but I believe our demo pushed it and the ping was so out of whack that it lagged out the cap. We switched servers after that round.
[video=youtube;v0ocaBhyksw]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=v0ocaBhyksw[/video]
Hey everyone, I was here about a week ago asking for help on my commentaries. After noting down everyone's advice, I went and asked my viewers as well and took some time to think of different ways I can create better content for everyone and in this video I made these changes:
1) Facecam was added in mainly because the people who regularly watch my content and interact with me enjoy the reactions, so I changed the size dramatically from before so it doesn't take up that much screen space and the gameplay can still be enjoyed.
2) I took my time to edit everything out and made a shorter and hopefully more entertaining final product.
3) I was way more relaxed commentating and I was basically myself and simply saying the first things that came to my mind instead of going tryhard mode to make jokes and lines.
4) Someone commented on boring thumbnail pictures, so I started learning SFM and i'm making most of my thumbnails from there, still a work in progress but i'll eventually get better at it.
Again guys, i'd love some more feedback if you have any and I want to thank everyone for wanting to help me get better at this, it really means a lot and I hope you enjoy the video!
-Overall, you spent 6 minutes(and probably more) without really knowing how the Loose Cannon works and how you're suposed to use, never ever achieved a double donk or anything that hasnt seen before. it was a 6 minute long video of randomly talking about stuff while spaming the loose canon and that sounds boring as fuck.
-You're somehow overacting your reactions a lot, and its clearly evident you're doing so, but so are the rest of the people doing lets plays on youtube, aparently -a comedic effect I supose. if thats the case, you need to do way better than that, because you actually sound more like a really generic tryhard rather than anything else, a non ironically tryhard, if that makes it clear.
-on the same point, the main feature of your content are your face and reactions(wich really do not add anything at all to your videos, but thats a personal point of view). as i stated previously, your viewers are either forced to look at you or at the video: whenever there is nothing relevant on the game one is suposed to look at you, but most of the time there was nothing really relevant about these two. either you really go overboard and actually add more to your reactions, or improve your gameplay, because neither complement each other.
-your video edition still needs more work. you're still giving yourself and your face more importance over what are you delivering to the viewers, wich in turn makes it extremely generic and plain to anyone who is "not into seeing your face". as i also stated before, you really need to think about content that can reach a wider audience, rather than please the 50 or so people that currently watches your stuff. there is a step foward towards reducing the video's legth and thats really welcome, but you really didn't show anything remarkable and therefore, it was really boring to look at.
[QUOTE=TWStapler;43886267][video=youtube;v0ocaBhyksw]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=v0ocaBhyksw[/video]
Hey everyone, I was here about a week ago asking for help on my commentaries. After noting down everyone's advice, I went and asked my viewers as well and took some time to think of different ways I can create better content for everyone and in this video I made these changes:
1) Facecam was added in mainly because the people who regularly watch my content and interact with me enjoy the reactions, so I changed the size dramatically from before so it doesn't take up that much screen space and the gameplay can still be enjoyed.
2) I took my time to edit everything out and made a shorter and hopefully more entertaining final product.
3) I was way more relaxed commentating and I was basically myself and simply saying the first things that came to my mind instead of going tryhard mode to make jokes and lines.
4) Someone commented on boring thumbnail pictures, so I started learning SFM and i'm making most of my thumbnails from there, still a work in progress but i'll eventually get better at it.
Again guys, i'd love some more feedback if you have any and I want to thank everyone for wanting to help me get better at this, it really means a lot and I hope you enjoy the video![/QUOTE]
Facecams are dumb in my opinion, unless it's a scary game or something and even then it's irritating. if you prefer to use it, it seems REALLY close to your face
the fact you treat it like a business is what's your problem, just play the game and later if you think "man i'm pretty quiet at this part" then cut it out, but don't be an actor the entire video. just play.
you might be trying to let it flow organicially now, but you're still falling to the observers effect, instead of playing you talk to the camera and out loud.
and if you're going to use sfm thumbnails, make it somehow obvious it's a commentary and not an SFM video. this being words or a side sticker or something.
point is, i don't like it and i probably never will. you're TRYING to be internet famous and that throws me off. best of luck though.
[QUOTE=Magmacow358;43848120]It bothers me that to win you have to [sp]go straight through the main entrance every time and ignore the sentry gun, even though both of those actions go against everything a spy should be doing[/sp][/QUOTE]
i agree, but at the same time, any good spy knows that blowing your cover for a single kill or sap is a really bad thing to do, and you have to find a good time to strike. Sapping a sentry as the engineer is right there looking funnily at you is not a good way to go about it
as punchy said, you're trying too hard to be an "[I]internet pop star[/I]".
the problem with this is that you're basically doing the exact same shit everyone else does, wich in turn works for prople like STAR and such thanks to their already stablished fanbase that can literally suck his cock if he commands them to do so. you cant afford to do this kind of shit because nobody gives a fuck about you and you're not providing reasons or content to actually care about what you do.
the fact that you have to post your material on your own and literally ask us to watch it reinforces this.
if you want to be relevant to anyone but your 1XX subscribers, do something relevant then, hopefully something that doesnt involve facecams while you're at it.
Thanks a lot for the criticism guys, so this is what i'm going to work on for the next time I do commentary:
- Remove the facecam.
- Create newer and relevant content.
- Be myself.
If there's anything else you guys would like to add i'd appreciate it, i'll keep checking for new replies.
Also to note about my reactions and gameplay, honestly that's how I normally react to things in this game. If I was acting i'd go more overboard then that haha, and regarding the actual skill involved in my gameplay, i'm NOT even an average player, I like to goof around and do things I find interesting more then getting 60 bajillion headshots in one life and never dying, but that's just preference in gameplay styles. I guess I was just my regular old self with me trying out a loose cannon and failing, but I can see what you guys are saying and i'll try to work on that a lot more going into the future commentaries I end up making.
[QUOTE=TWStapler;43889510]Thanks a lot for the criticism guys, so this is what i'm going to work on for the next time I do commentary:
- Remove the facecam.
- Create newer and relevant content.
- Be myself.
If there's anything else you guys would like to add i'd appreciate it, i'll keep checking for new replies.
Also to note about my reactions and gameplay, honestly that's how I normally react to things in this game. If I was acting i'd go more overboard then that haha, and regarding the actual skill involved in my gameplay, i'm NOT even an average player, I like to goof around and do things I find interesting more then getting 60 bajillion headshots in one life and never dying, but that's just preference in gameplay styles. I guess I was just my regular old self with me trying out a loose cannon and failing, but I can see what you guys are saying and i'll try to work on that a lot more going into the future commentaries I end up making.[/QUOTE]
This is what i'm talking about, you don't need critique on your channel. just play video games and sometimes record yourself and if it's good then upload it. don't sit down and plan out a schedule unless you need to or you actually have some stellar ideas. playing with the loose canon is just in limbo between planned out and "im gonna play video games today"
[QUOTE=Magmacow358;43848120]It bothers me that to win you have to [sp]go straight through the main entrance every time and ignore the sentry gun, even though both of those actions go against everything a spy should be doing[/sp][/QUOTE]
I can't get over the fact [sp]that you can't win a shoot-out with the Pyro in the sewer despite technically being next to the health kit and having the better ranged weapon, but can kill a Soldier who sees you coming head-on.[/sp]
[QUOTE=Razi The Red;43891258]I can't get over the fact [sp]that you can't win a shoot-out with the Pyro in the sewer despite technically being next to the health kit and having the better ranged weapon, but can kill a Soldier who sees you coming head-on.[/sp][/QUOTE]
Worst part is [sp]the end, where the path you choose determines whether or not a spy stabs you in the back, even though there's no logical reason for why and you won't know until you get to the end.[/sp]
[QUOTE=Hogie bear;43895887][t]http://fc00.deviantart.net/fs71/f/2014/044/f/4/get_a_load_of_this_guy_cam_by_gt118-d769hal.png[/t][/QUOTE]
Good lord.
[QUOTE=Hogie bear;43895887][t]http://fc00.deviantart.net/fs71/f/2014/044/f/4/get_a_load_of_this_guy_cam_by_gt118-d769hal.png[/t][/QUOTE]
For some reason, I can't see the whole image, only the beginning :v:
it is supposed to be like that?
[QUOTE=Hogie bear;43895887][t]http://fc00.deviantart.net/fs71/f/2014/044/f/4/get_a_load_of_this_guy_cam_by_gt118-d769hal.png[/t][/QUOTE]
who the hell saves an intentionally low quality image as PNG
takes 30 minutes to load
[IMG]http://i.imgur.com/NLj9kV9.png[/IMG]
According to Archimedes, you [I]did[/I], Medic!...
[QUOTE=Punchy;43900461]who the hell saves an intentionally low quality image as PNG
takes 30 minutes to load[/QUOTE]
Gotta have the the pixelation in the HIGHEST QUALITY.
save as DMX
[QUOTE=Metaru;43903070]save as DMX[/QUOTE]
Don't remind me that we're all still waiting for x to deliver (with a full version)
[QUOTE=Fapplejack;43904110]Don't remind me that we're all still waiting for x to deliver (with a full version)[/QUOTE]
I still check his channel to see
Its still tanks and planes and shit
X, please
[QUOTE=Hogie bear;43895887][t]http://fc00.deviantart.net/fs71/f/2014/044/f/4/get_a_load_of_this_guy_cam_by_gt118-d769hal.png[/t][/QUOTE]
Dear sweet jesus that is terrifying.
Py-Bun did a thing again.
[t]https://31.media.tumblr.com/2122564a19352d104a6242bb1104128d/tumblr_n0zlm9BmKM1r8lde5o1_1280.png[/t]
(Bah, sorry, apparently doesn't like it anymore when you remote link an item)
[QUOTE=Dat Lobo;43908740]Py-Bun did a thing again.
[t]https://31.media.tumblr.com/2122564a19352d104a6242bb1104128d/tumblr_n0zlm9BmKM1r8lde5o1_1280.png[/t]
(Bah, sorry, apparently doesn't like it anymore when you remote link an item)[/QUOTE]
looks like if someone ported this map to fortress forever/team fortress classic
speaking of fortress forever
[media]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-0-6wdDyGLI#t=69[/media]
it makes me sad that the servers are always empty even when it got greenlit ;;
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