The button coat looks better. I also agree with the idea that you could tighten the waist on it a little bit, but not too much.
I would almost say conceal the mouth, too much of the face is showing imo
Looks nice.
Keep up the good work.:golfclap:
I did some more refinement to the pea coat idea, changed the length, shape and added some more details. I also thought maybe the scarf should be tucked into the coat to show the collar.
[IMG]http://th04.deviantart.net/fs71/PRE/f/2010/193/f/e/Spy_coat_by_ChemicalAlia.jpg[/IMG]
[QUOTE=Biotoxsin;23320885]I would almost say conceal the mouth, too much of the face is showing imo[/QUOTE]
I considered that when I was first coming up with ideas, but it bugs me because I feel it would muffle/obscure her voice in game and I don't want that. It would be cool looking, art-wise, but just seems weird to implement.
I think the wrap covering her neck looks much better. Seems much more 60s.
[QUOTE=The Vman;23322412]I think the wrap covering her neck looks much better. Seems much more 60s.[/QUOTE]
It's still covering her neck, though it's hard to tell from the front view in these renders. It's just going under her collar instead of over it and wrapped more firmly.
[QUOTE=The Vman;23322412]I think the wrap covering her neck looks much better. Seems much more 60s.[/QUOTE]
Agreed. The different style just doesn't look fitting...
[QUOTE=ChemicalAlia;23303794]Lol, I'm saving that for the Sniper. [/QUOTE]
:saddowns:
Awesome. Lookin forward to it.
Glasses are way too big. Kind of reminds me of a female engineer in a lab coat at the moment
[QUOTE=ChemicalAlia;23322524]It's still covering her neck, though it's hard to tell from the front view in these renders. It's just going under her collar instead of over it and wrapped more firmly.[/QUOTE]
Still, the wrap over the collar seems to fit better, also it makes it obvious the wrap's a wrap and not a weird hood of some kind.
[QUOTE=ThePutty;23322997]Glasses are way too big. Kind of reminds me of a female engineer in a lab coat at the moment[/QUOTE]
Or a Pilot. In a Lab Coat.
[QUOTE=ThePutty;23322997]Glasses are way too big. Kind of reminds me of a female engineer in a lab coat at the moment[/QUOTE]
Yeah, maybe make them less round?
[img]http://www.costumebox.com.au/images/P/Cat%20Eye%20Glasses%20-%20Pink%20Black%20Leopard%20costume%20accessories.detail.jpg[/img]
Maybe like this kinda shape?
[QUOTE=ChemicalAlia;23303584][IMG]http://fc02.deviantart.net/fs71/f/2010/192/6/b/Female_Spy_variations_by_ChemicalAlia.jpg[/IMG][/QUOTE]
[img]http://2.bp.blogspot.com/___2tJY1Rixs/R9OPHO6IYhI/AAAAAAAAAh8/_zLnIOEhTvI/s400/Audrey%2BHepburn%2BTrench%2BCoat.jpg[/img]
I was thinking something POSSIBLE like this from Breakfast at Tiffany's, as in for the whole Trench coat idea, of course you can make it go shorter. Just an idea on what I thought would look pretty swell, gotta love Audrey Hepburn.
I've been measuring the picture proportions in Photoshop too see what was annoying me about the model.
Firstly, the height is fine, but she could do with losing 2 inches (relative to my measurements) from her upper body. It hits a 1.6 which is the best outcome for a male body, but females should be closer to 1.4.
The chest is roughly ok in proportion to the body. You need to widen the waist and stomach by a couple of inches. Bring her hips in, they look far too wide. Soften the shoulders a little as the look very pointy, bring her breasts down slightly and I'm still saying make them a little bigger.
Maybe try these alterations and see if it looks any better? I measured via picture so it doesn't work as well as it would on a real person but the model is missing the "golden" 1.4 female ratio.
[IMG_thumb]http://i44.photobucket.com/albums/f48/guruworshipper/modelmeasure.jpg[/IMG_thumb]
[QUOTE=Agent.Orange;23323296]Yeah, maybe make them less round?
[img_thumb]http://www.costumebox.com.au/images/P/Cat%20Eye%20Glasses%20-%20Pink%20Black%20Leopard%20costume%20accessories.detail.jpg[/img_thumb]
Maybe like this kinda shape?[/QUOTE]
Female medic already has those glasses.
[QUOTE=Agent.Orange;23323296]Yeah, maybe make them less round?
[img]http://www.costumebox.com.au/images/P/Cat%20Eye%20Glasses%20-%20Pink%20Black%20Leopard%20costume%20accessories.detail.jpg[/img]
Maybe like this kinda shape?[/QUOTE]
Oh, yuck. Those remind me of the Far Side, plus they provide no contrast to her already very angular face. They need to be big, since the purpose is obscuring the face. Round sunglasses are also more in line with the rest of her style, and late 60's fashion. I can adjust the size to her face to find a good balance, though. Or change the contour so they're rounded but less the same all the way around, if that makes sense.
[IMG]http://4.bp.blogspot.com/_5gwE623U2mM/SWJ5zDbP-DI/AAAAAAAAAHE/nnzy6YdhDiI/s400/oo.bmp[/IMG]
[IMG]http://www.cellinifinegifts.com/fmdimages/fmd_jackiepalmbeacha.jpg[/IMG]
[IMG]http://www.rustyzipper.com/pics/138791L.jpg[/IMG]
The shape is good, but it's still too big. It looks like the engineer's googles from a distance.
Why not make her look like that hotty russian spy they caught a week ago?
[QUOTE=Clint Cavanagh;22067433]awesome work, as always Miss Alia, although i would like to see an alternative to the headband, maybe some ol' hairstyle like this ? [img]http://g.metron.com/CGWCate2-f.jpg[/img][/QUOTE]
she looks like my mother.... :geno:
[QUOTE=ChemicalAlia;23303584]I[IMG_thumb]http://fc02.deviantart.net/fs71/f/2010/192/6/b/Female_Spy_variations_by_ChemicalAlia.jpg[/IMG_thumb][/QUOTE]
The one to the left looks better to me. But it's just mine opinion.
Well if you going to do the scarf make sure to add jiggle bones.
I think she needs a softer nose and chin.
[QUOTE=TheDudeGuy;23348951]I think she needs a softer nose and chin.[/QUOTE]
Maybe a little, but I'd rather have her look like this than generically attractive. That problem started creeping into my Medic model with every update, and I had to go back and make her face interesting in the end. I'll be adjusting her face a little more, and then also after I get textures on it.
[IMG]http://fuzzybuzz.files.wordpress.com/2008/08/cruella-de-vil-b-web.jpg[/IMG]
I think a trailing scarf would be a better callsign than the cigarette. Very Sly Cooper.
[QUOTE=smellypickle;23332009]she looks like my mother.... :geno:[/QUOTE]
Post pictures. I don't believe it.
On-topic, I love how she looks so far. Keep up the excellent work!
Oh god. This looks so epic :holy: Can't wait for it :keke:
ChemicalAlia is da best can't wait to see what you did so far.Wish i could get in modeling but my pc is a piece of crap and it can't run 3d max nor photoshop D:
[QUOTE=ChemicalAlia;23355094]Maybe a little, but I'd rather have her look like this than generically attractive. That problem started creeping into my Medic model with every update, and I had to go back and make her face interesting in the end. I'll be adjusting her face a little more, and then also after I get textures on it.
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I guess it'll be better to judge when she has a proper texture.
[QUOTE=TheDudeGuy;23365804]I guess it'll be better to judge when she has a proper texture.[/QUOTE]
Yeah, and the rigged face with expressions tends to make a huge difference too.
Good job so far!
I'd say to keep the pointed face, but round the shoulders a bit.
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