[QUOTE=gigazelle;47394804]Reading between the lines (even if you didn't intend it as such), your post says, "hey I had this idea first, your picture is just an improvement of my design" followed by a concept that is not all that similar. It makes it sound like you invented the concept of a double-breasted jacket on the spy.
Obviously those aren't your actual intentions (which is why you're also getting hearts), but I anticipate that's why the post is getting boxes.[/QUOTE]
Ok. If anyone thinks that I was passive aggressively trying to say 'this was my idea', I wasn't. I know that claiming that would be dumb (for too many obvious reasons). Sorry if that's how it came off. Guess I didn't expect that since I wasn't really attached to the concept that I made.
[QUOTE=OverPovered;47394718]I smoothed out the harsh edges.
[t]http://puu.sh/gPoez.png[/t]
Satisfactory?[/QUOTE]
It looks more like soap bubbles than actual clouds.
Took the given advice, and here are the results.
- cloud shape has been altered
- occlusion is inverted
- the cloud has a gradient going from bottom to top
[t]http://puu.sh/gPI6F.png[/t]
Bonus: I applied the occlusion as well as the gradient map on an illum. mask, here is what it looks like:
The crevices are always bright, regardless of lighting situation
[t]http://puu.sh/gPIbR.png[/t]
[IMG]http://i.imgur.com/gIkaKdP.png?1[/IMG]
Sketchfab viewer: [url]https://skfb.ly/DCpW[/url]
Still very much a work in progress. Any thoughts?
I'd lower the gradient, make it not so garish. Also the clouds shouldn't have any phong, rimlight only.
[QUOTE=TheJukebox;47396213]I'd lower the gradient, make it not so garish. Also the clouds shouldn't have any phong, rimlight only.[/QUOTE]
I removed the phong from the clouds, and I lowered the intensity of the gradient.
[t]http://puu.sh/gPKTI.png[/t]
[QUOTE=OverPovered;47396387]I removed the phong from the clouds, and I lowered the intensity of the gradient.
[t]http://puu.sh/gPKTI.png[/t][/QUOTE]
i thought the gradient looked nice as it was, like a dark thundercloud
[QUOTE=ikes;47396427]i thought the gradient looked nice as it was, like a dark thundercloud[/QUOTE]
Still kinda comes off like that.
[QUOTE=OverPovered;47396387]I removed the phong from the clouds, and I lowered the intensity of the gradient.
[t]http://puu.sh/gPKTI.png[/t][/QUOTE]
It's still too bubbly.
[t]http://i.imgur.com/R8VIAUR.jpg[/t]
[QUOTE=OverPovered;47396387]I removed the phong from the clouds, and I lowered the intensity of the gradient.
[t]http://puu.sh/gPKTI.png[/t][/QUOTE]
I'm seeing drastic improvements every time you post an update. It's awesome.
Right now the thing that makes it look the most odd is that it still looks like its comprised of a bunch of spheres. I would suggest adding indents and bulges to anything you identify as a sphere to make it more natural.
[QUOTE=kingkiller;47397176][IMG]http://i.imgur.com/oFvnGV7.png[/IMG]
[IMG]http://i.imgur.com/nOtCFhg.png[/IMG]
:)[/QUOTE]
Are you even reading the feedback you're getting
[QUOTE=InfectedPotato;47397255]Are you even reading the feedback you're getting[/QUOTE]
people keep mentioning all the unnecessary clutter so he just assumed he's supposed to add more to cover it up
[QUOTE=InfectedPotato;47397255]Are you even reading the feedback you're getting[/QUOTE]
No... I do not know what to do
[QUOTE=kingkiller;47397427]No... I do not know what to do[/QUOTE]
You should read the feedback you've gotten.
Didn't he say that concept was just a mod thing at most, not intended to be put on the workshop? Because if so, it looks cool, no problem. Maybe I'm thinking of something else, though?
[QUOTE=Mort Stroodle;47397489]Didn't he say that concept was just a mod thing at most, not intended to be put on the workshop? Because if so, it looks cool, no problem. Maybe I'm thinking of something else, though?[/QUOTE]
Looks like one of those saxton hale mod characters. great for the gamemode maybe, but "eh" in an actual game environment.
[QUOTE=OverPovered;47396387]I removed the phong from the clouds, and I lowered the intensity of the gradient.
[t]http://puu.sh/gPKTI.png[/t][/QUOTE]
Can you jigglebone it so that it stays upright? Admittedly I'm not even sure if that's possible, but thought I'd suggest it.
[QUOTE=Gadget | TF2M;47393681]Also for [URL="http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=413828397"]SFM[/URL].[/QUOTE]
this, we need more people like you for sharing it to SFM
[QUOTE=Radaghast;47394376][IMG]http://i.imgur.com/ntGZuBP.png[/IMG]
[I]Croco' hunter[/I][/QUOTE]
make it brown instead of green
[QUOTE=kingkiller;47397176][IMG]http://i.imgur.com/oFvnGV7.png[/IMG]
[IMG]http://i.imgur.com/nOtCFhg.png[/IMG]
:)[/QUOTE]
ㅇㄴ
[video=youtube;n_3v-_p3ESo]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=n_3v-_p3ESo[/video]
Moonwalk conga-esk taunt for the spy:
3-4 animations:
1)Spy puts a hat
2)Start tipping the hat
3)Beginning of the moonwalk
4)Quitting animation: Spy twirl ,and throw the hat.
(The moonwalk isn't copyrighted) (Would requiere probably a self-made music)
[IMG]http://i.imgur.com/LbwIQSF.jpg[/IMG]
Also remade the pirate beard
[QUOTE=Radaghast;47398201][video=youtube;n_3v-_p3ESo]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=n_3v-_p3ESo[/video]
Moonwalk conga-esk taunt for the spy:
3-4 animations:
1)Spy puts a hat
2)Start tipping the hat
3)Beginning of the moonwalk
4)Quitting animation: Spy twirl ,and throw the hat.
(The moonwalk isn't copyrighted) (Would requiere probably a self-made music)[/QUOTE]
How would you handle the hat if he's already wearing one? It would be hilarious if he put another hat on top of his current one, but that's just not possible.
[QUOTE=_charon;47398759]How would you handle the hat if he's already wearing one? It would be hilarious if he put another hat on top of his current one, but that's just not possible.[/QUOTE]
I litteraly forgot that , maybe the animation can be replaced with the spy lowering his head
And the quitting animation replaced with just the Twirl.
Added some perspective shots to the "Flare" gun
[img]https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/u/39556064/concepts/Weapons/BuckShotFlareGun3S.jpg[/img]
[QUOTE=Radaghast;47398201][video=youtube;n_3v-_p3ESo]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=n_3v-_p3ESo[/video][/QUOTE]
What the FUCK is going on with Michael's NECK in the first half of that video? He's the original NOPE.avi!
Finished it up
[img]https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/u/39556064/concepts/SpyLeyendeckerSuit2.jpg[/img]
[QUOTE=blaholtzen;47399596]Finished it up
[img]https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/u/39556064/concepts/SpyLeyendeckerSuit2.jpg[/img][/QUOTE]
Definitely a very nice set, the only thing I really can mention is that the cigarette holder is going to look mighty silly with spy's default smoke coming out of the middle of the stick.
I recall seeing the improved Sniper bodygroup posted few Emporiums ago, can someone update it?
[IMG]http://puu.sh/gQoRR/3ad161397d.png[/IMG]
[IMG]http://puu.sh/gQoMf/81b6e55ccf.png[/IMG]
[I]Hobbo & Co [/I]
A collaboration between Ernest & me.
[url]http://imgur.com/a/8Fhzr[/url] My current unclaimed concepts.
Some heart-shaped hand grenades for the American idiot:
[img]http://puu.sh/gQrgZ.png[/img][img]http://puu.sh/gQrqa.png[/img]
intended as a mod, not for submission. Up for grabs.
[IMG]http://puu.sh/gQq4G.png[/IMG]
Sadly for all parties concerned, I am still alive.
I've been a bit depressed lately, so I thought to break up my low mood, I ought to draw something different. A snowplowed payload cart, to be precise, for the [URL="http://forums.tf2maps.net/showthread.php?t=24237"]TF2 Mapper's Arctic Pack[/URL]. If you would like to offer a helping hand for asset production, feel free to browse and offer to do so.
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