HIM - Herobrine, Uncovered! - Games

Too much wavy/distorted visuals in my opinion, it feels like the effect was overused in this part. the scene at 5:33 could have been re-shot, the sudden appearance of the skeleton archer should not be in there the episode was a bit too short as well, it felt like I was only watching it for two minutes before it had already ended. also the sounds at about 4:40 are a bit too loud, it's louder than the voice acting which (for me) makes it quite irritating, especially if it takes almost a full minute until the sounds are gone. You've done your best, but I still didn't like it as much as the first episode. You might want to try and do some re-shoots as soon as you've received the voice acting files, just something I'd suggest.

[QUOTE=Stormtrooper0ll;31846860]Too much wavy/distorted visuals in my opinion, it feels like the effect was overused in this part. the scene at 5:33 could have been re-shot, the sudden appearance of the skeleton archer should not be in there the episode was a bit too short as well, it felt like I was only watching it for two minutes before it had already ended. also the sounds at about 4:40 are a bit too loud, it's louder than the voice acting which (for me) makes it quite irritating, especially if it takes almost a full minute until the sounds are gone. You've done your best, but I still didn't like it as much as the first episode. You might want to try and do some re-shoots as soon as you've received the voice acting files, just something I'd suggest.[/QUOTE] Thanks, man... I'll be taking that on-board.

No problem, I'm happy to have been able to give you some feedback you could work with ;)

Part the Third will be the last part. Everything is wrapped up. It'll be released in a week... or three. Don't get your hopes up too early.

[QUOTE=Barrel-Roll;31851681]Part the Third will be the last part. Everything is wrapped up. It'll be released in a week... or three. Don't get your hopes up too early.[/QUOTE] is three weeks too early

4:10 onwards in part 2 is the best minecraft related thing, ever. [editline]21st August 2011[/editline] 5:40 I almost shit myself with laughter.

[QUOTE=Sublata;31852311]is three weeks too early[/QUOTE] For me, yes. [QUOTE=TraderRager;31852427]4:10 onwards in part 2 is the best minecraft related thing, ever. [editline]21st August 2011[/editline] 5:40 I almost shit myself with laughter.[/QUOTE] Those were my favourite scenes as well.

Peek-a-boo! Wow... 2 months since I updated anything with HIM. Probably time to finish up the story. Hokay, guys. 29th of October. Last part. Him: The Legend of Herobrine. Finally. Enjoy!

I don't see why you bumped both of your threads.

[QUOTE=RoboJesus;32788488]I don't see why you bumped both of your threads.[/QUOTE] Because he's going to finish it.

Yeah, better to bump an old thread, never mind [I]how[/I] old it is, than make a completely new one on the same topic.

[QUOTE=evlbzltyr;32804386]Yeah, better to bump an old thread, never mind [I]how[/I] old it is, than make a completely new one on the same topic.[/QUOTE] Exactly, White Stripes guy.

Those women were supposed to represent shitty creepypasta, right?

I saw a skeleton pop up.

[QUOTE=milkandcooki;32867567]Those women were supposed to represent shitty creepypasta, right?[/QUOTE] That was the concept, although most people probably can't tell by now. We changed the script a lot.

Love it, extremely well done. If I had to point out the weakest link in the whole thing it would be the acting though. Specifically, try to make the timing feel more natural, and some parts could be funnier if they were more dry and real feeling, don't overact. Are you recording each line separately? If so, try doing it in several small chunks, so you can play off each other and make it feel natural. But all that is nitpicking, I really love it.

A friend of mine actually encountered herobrine. Then next day at school he was all paranoid and quiet.

[QUOTE=Nipper;32917846]A friend of mine actually encountered herobrine. Then next day at school he was all paranoid and quiet.[/QUOTE] I highly doubt that.

[video=youtube;u4-TVNjcqAw]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=u4-TVNjcqAw[/video] Happy Hallowe'en, guys! Just gimme a sec, I'm still working on HIM III.

Wait... What? This thread's back? That could only mean one thing! [video=youtube;y6vVQxppAYA]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=y6vVQxppAYA[/video] Happy Friday the 13th!