Katawa Shoujo v2 - "Why can't I hold all these feels?" - Games

Oh sorry. It's just that you said that the writers never send you anything. So I thought by now it was dead. :v: My mistake.

I can probably send you a shitload of content for Broujo by Wednesdayish, I need to finalise and proofread this shit

[QUOTE=niloc117;34871668]Anyone else doing the running chart? Just finished week 6[/QUOTE] Thinking of starting something like it once it stops being cold outside (at least when it stops freezing every morning).

[QUOTE=Doomish;34875311]I'll be honest, my writing is quick and messy (like a proper sexual encounter with Akira should be, hence the story). It's scatterbrained and I like it that way. Sometimes I use foul, harsh language, sometimes I hit the backspace key and retype things because of how badly they flow. I just write whatever I feel like; and right now I am not spending time with my girlfriend, and therefore feel like a horny bastard. When I'm in a somber mood, I write for Little Faith. I have a mindset preserved specifically for certain stories. When I'm just bored, I churn out stuff like, well, Akira fapfics. People have asked me why I write so quickly, and it's because I don't really have anything better to do.[/QUOTE] Make sure that encounter is placed deep in the story, where someone's already into it, I read that except being more focused on criticism instead of the story (as someone immersed would) and that scattered feel looked more like dodgy writing. I can see how it'd be a good resource when immersed, though, just make sure the readers are, by that point.

Alright before I go to sleep Ima post a very small draft excerpt from this thing I'm working on. [quote]"Let's go kill some motherfucking cripple zombies", Kenji spurts rebelliously, using his free hand to hold his shotgun perpendicular to the floor and pump in a swift motion, just like in the movies. He disengages his locks fairly fast, kicks open his door and marches out, with me following close behind. Shizune apparently was not taken care of through the previous encounter, with her mangled corpse attempting to move itself towards us from across the hall in vain, the gaping hole on her face dripping and oozing blood and other liquids as she does her best to utter a groan. As futile as that may be, a hole somewhere in her throat bubbles and releases a sound which ends up sounding like a sickening wet gurgle. The explosion of gunfire startles me and the blast of gunpowder on my face gets me to jump a little as Kenji unloads a single bullet into Shizune's head, bursting her cranium and sending her brain matter across the wall, and she is finally dead. Well, dead again.[/quote]

comma between the well and the dead.

Comma after door(?)

No you kids don't know nuffin about grammar, all of that is fine

[QUOTE=Novangel;34875567]Doomish you should write for my Akira sex scenes cos I just can't write fapfics at all.[/QUOTE]I like this.

[QUOTE=CheeseMan;34879637]No you kids don't know nuffin about grammar, all of that is fine[/QUOTE] I make a point of specifically ignoring grammar rules in my writing because I am a rebel, and now I'm becoming good at making a well-flowing style out of abhorrent grammatical mistakes. [editline]26th February 2012[/editline] ABHORRENT GRAMMATICAL MISTAKES. "Blah blah blah[B]." So [/B]and so said. I RUN THIS SHIT

[QUOTE=Doomish;34880286]I make a point of specifically ignoring grammar rules in my writing because I am a rebel, and now I'm becoming good at making a well-flowing style out of abhorrent grammatical mistakes. [editline]26th February 2012[/editline] ABHORRENT GRAMMATICAL MISTAKES. "Blah blah blah[B]." So [/B]and so said. I RUN THIS SHIT[/QUOTE] I like to color outside the lines. I know you're not supposed to, but I like being myself.

S-Sometimes... I only step on the darker ones...

[QUOTE=ILY;34880927]I like to color outside the lines. I know you're not supposed to, but I like being myself.[/QUOTE] What is a color?

[QUOTE=Lazyboy0337;34881084]What is a color?[/QUOTE] Looks like we have a comedian over here. I spell it like "colour" too, but when I'm dragging a quote from something, I'm not going to change the spelling.

I'm sorry, but I didn't [i]see[/i] what you did there.

I was inspired by Doomish to write my own fanfic: [quote]"Hisao... there's something I need to ask you," Miki said tentatively. Hisao looked at his lover with questioningly, but saw the certainty in her eyes, even if there was little confidence in the way she'd said it. "What is it, Miki? I'd do anything for you," Hisao responded. He saw the confidence grow in her at the sound of his words. Then she looked at Hisao and said... "I need about... tree fiddy." [/quote] *narrator voice* What will happen next?! How did it come to this?! Find out the answers and more when I actually finish it!

[QUOTE=Chuckl3s;34882017]I was inspired by Doomish to write my own fanfic: *narrator voice* What will happen next?! How did it come to this?! Find out the answers and more when I actually finish it![/QUOTE] Good! Keep working hard and practice a lot and you'll get even better! I have high hopes for you! [IMG]http://www.r-a-dio.com/ks/sprites/emi/close/emi_excited_laugh_gym_close.png[/IMG] [editline]26th February 2012[/editline] [QUOTE=Lazyboy0337;34881084]What is a color?[/QUOTE] [IMG]http://puu.sh/ivaX[/IMG]

Internet Explorer because fuck you.

[QUOTE=LifeIsGood;34882344]Good! Keep working hard and practice a lot and you'll get even better! I have high hopes for you! [IMG]http://www.r-a-dio.com/ks/sprites/emi/close/emi_excited_laugh_gym_close.png[/IMG][/QUOTE] Y'know, excessive encouragement is worse than no encouragement. I mean, you'd feel pretty insulted if someone just ran to you and started congratulating you for being able to wipe your ass and with good reason.

[QUOTE=LifeIsGood;34882344] [IMG]http://puu.sh/ivaX[/IMG][/QUOTE] [img]http://img1.uploadscreenshot.com/images/orig/2/5606473073-orig.png[/img] heh

[QUOTE=MountainWatcher;34882480] I mean, you'd feel pretty insulted if someone just ran to you and started congratulating you for being able to wiping your ass and with good reason.[/QUOTE] [img]http://www.r-a-dio.com/ks/sprites/rin/rin_negative_crying.png[/img] Sorry, I couldn't resist.

[QUOTE=MountainWatcher;34882480]...started congratulating you for being able to wiping your ass and with good reason[/QUOTE] I think Rin would like to have a word with you

[QUOTE=Doomish;34883198]I think Rin would like to have a word with you[/QUOTE][IMG]http://upload.wikimedia.org/wikipedia/commons/thumb/8/87/Bidet_side.jpg/250px-Bidet_side.jpg[/IMG] She must have a custom one made to be operable with her feet.

[QUOTE=Yoozil;34884528][IMG]http://upload.wikimedia.org/wikipedia/commons/thumb/8/87/Bidet_side.jpg/250px-Bidet_side.jpg[/IMG] She must have a custom one made to be operable with her feet.[/QUOTE] I think they would have at least a few of those around Yamaku.

[QUOTE=Im Crimson;34885108]I think they would have at least a few of those around Yamaku.[/QUOTE] Would actually be stupid if a school that dealt with physically handicapped people didn't have those.

It also would be stupid not to have racing gloves.

[QUOTE=Lazyboy0337;34885208]It also would be stupid not to have racing gloves.[/QUOTE] Emi obviously would not know where to find such things. Especially not in the equipment shed.

[QUOTE=Doomish;34875459]tl;dr: :eng101:[/QUOTE] i gotta admit, i didn't get as much motivation from this post as i thought i would. i appreciate it though, and i do notice that i've been writing a lot more lately anyways.. p.s., you should've used misha pics instead of emi :v:

[url=http://ks.renai.us/viewtopic.php?f=52&t=5844]I have posted the first chapter (out of two) of my side story, Lightning[/url]. Read it and feel bad for poor Misha at your leisure.

definitely not reading that nope nope nope