[QUOTE=Hazrd24;30437907]Is this bright enough or should I brighten it up a bit more
Ugh I think I made it too shiny[/QUOTE]
Well, caves are usually moist and water reflects light.
In most situations it doesn't matter how bright the level is as long as the player knows where they are going.
[QUOTE=Hazrd24;30437907]Is this bright enough or should I brighten it up a bit more
[img]http://img96.imageshack.us/img96/1521/crash0095.jpg[/img]
Ugh I think I made it too shiny[/QUOTE]
The cave walls are a little too shiny, it's very noticeable in the dark areas, but don't change the lighting. It's perfect, it has a very grim eeriness to it.
[QUOTE=The Blue Scotti;30436748]That's awesome! Keep up the good work![/QUOTE]
Palette swapping the logo?
[QUOTE=Sparkwire;30434095][img]http://sparkwire.thanez.net/surreptitiousivan/grappling%20hook/grapplinghookdraw.gif[/img]
whoop whoop[/QUOTE]
err why would you pull it out like that, at least make him hold the handle, the way he's just like pressing down on it looks dumb
Sparkwire's amazing and all, but my buddy Acrono showed me some of his animations and I suggested he ask JLea about animating for IS. He doesn't want to post his shit here, so I'll do it behind his back.
[img]http://filesmelt.com/dl/first_draw_sig552.gif[/img]
[img]http://filesmelt.com/dl/Sig_552_reload1.gif[/img]
I like 'em
His overall pistol animations are a bit questionable, but it looks good IMO
[QUOTE=Penis Colada;30439631]err why would you pull it out like that, at least make him hold the handle, the way he's just like pressing down on it looks dumb[/QUOTE]
he's not lifting it up if that's what you're insinuating (the frontal portion is higher up), he's pushing down on the flamethrower grip
Those handgun animations are old, I'm planning to redo them entirely.
do you mind if i can give you crits on all of them?
[QUOTE=Aurora93;30440589]do you mind if i can give you crits on all of them?[/QUOTE]
Not at all.
[img]http://gyazo.com/07d9cdfac8a5fccb941ed92c46edb41a.png[/img]
Good positioning?
[img]http://filesmelt.com/dl/first_draw_sig552.gif[/img]
This one I don't really have any problems with. It looks nice and it's fluid.
[media]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=2ZqyNn8scfc[/media]
The way it looks like he's inserting the mag feels like he only put it in halfway. There needs to a teensy bit less upwarded motion and a teensy more backwards motion. Also, when releoading, feel free to show more of the gun (i.e. turn it leftwards more towards the camera)
[img]http://filesmelt.com/dl/Sig_552_reload1.gif[/img]
There needs to be way more motion on the mag removal and insertion parts. After the mag insertion the way he goes to grip the gun is a little bit weird and cheap - the fingers need to curl a bit. When he's holding the gun to cock it, I think the guns should be pitched a little higher OR when he's cocking you could can do it similarly to the first one and closer to the idle animation. The cocking animation is too fast, too.
[media]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=zHrJDRLlVrY[/media]
It may be just fraps or whatever it is you're using to record, but it seems like there's too few frames on the bringout animation. There needs to be way more upward animation on the recoil. When he's using the slide stop in the reload animation has to be the weirdest part in my opinion: The position he's holding it just too awkward. I'd suggest probably having that part much more similarly positioned to the idle animation.
[media]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=UFFuWQ9DZ8o[/media]
I think you probably know why this is bad but the problem may be partially the model itself
Why are you giving feedback on firearms source stuff in an ivans secrets thread?
[QUOTE=Sparkwire;30440813][img]http://gyazo.com/07d9cdfac8a5fccb941ed92c46edb41a.png[/img]
Good positioning?[/QUOTE]
Move the thumb a micro millimeter to the right.
[QUOTE=Sparkwire;30440960]Why are you giving feedback on firearms source stuff in an ivans secrets thread?[/QUOTE]
it's just general crits on animations
Yeah, I'd say the guns don't feel weighty but they certainly look good enough :smile:
also ty for the website crits, I will adjust accordingly
[QUOTE=Sparkwire;30440426][img]http://sparkwire.thanez.net/surreptitiousivan/IED/beep%20boop.gif[/img][/QUOTE]
Beep boop?
More like beep boop I am robot boop beep
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those caves look pretty great by the way
[QUOTE=Sparkwire;30440426][img]http://sparkwire.thanez.net/surreptitiousivan/IED/beep%20boop.gif[/img][/QUOTE]
This looks weird, those things are heavy and he's holding it with one hand like it's nothing
He should hold it like this
[img]http://i.cubeupload.com/s86NvZ.png[/img]
Excuse my artistic talent
Me + a friend found one of those at an old factory when were were 10 (just the shells) and were just walking around with it until my friends dad was like.... :pwn: what the fuck. dunno what happened to it after that.
[editline]14th June 2011[/editline]
[img]http://dl.dropbox.com/u/41968/ivans/retard.JPG[/img]
[editline]14th June 2011[/editline]
We have a confirmed G3 for game. It's fully modelled + skinned (and looks real nice), just cant show it visually yet because its for a uni project.
This mod still needs a VSS. :colbert:
[QUOTE=JLea;30441715]
[img]http://dl.dropbox.com/u/41968/ivans/retard.JPG[/img][/QUOTE]
Man that is some [i]strong[/i] acid
But...that's not what acid does
saliva
[editline]14th June 2011[/editline]
/ ketamine
[QUOTE=JLea;30444015]saliva[/QUOTE]
people get high off saliva
whoa
Well their website says there will be a VSS..
g3 sounds good too
g3's are the coolest looking rifles
it's like a manlier mp5
it literally is
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