Skyrim: New city project - Games

[QUOTE=Pvt. Martin;34874675]Could you put like what kind of emotion I'm portraying for each line please?[/QUOTE] Sure, putting together some quick lines/character concepts for Fussy and Broguts right now though.

[QUOTE=PredatorKing;34874706]Sure, putting together some quick lines/character concepts for Fussy and Broguts right now though.[/QUOTE] Take your time.

I really want to contribute, what is there to add? I'll pick up the creation kit tomorrow and have something done then I could also write lines for characters

[QUOTE=Pvt. Martin;34874703]How many characters [b]do[/b] we have for this city anyway?[/QUOTE] I've only seen your shopkeeper so far, but including the ideas for the announcer, that aspiring hunter, and cookie, That makes 4 so far that have gotten past the "You know what would be cool?" phase.

Broguts, here's some lines for you: [quote]Arena Master: Something's wrong in the Luftahraan arena. The only organization to sponsor it is Aengoth's Enchantments. At first he was pissed off, but after numerous failed attempts at finding the cause, and now with his customers (both spectators and fighters) dwindling by the day and with a complete lack of further financial support, he's more than a bit disenfranchised with it all. 'Ere ya go lad(or lass), one arena reinment, *sigh* [Mood drops noticeably] sponsored by Aengoth, owner of Aengoth's enchantments. [Going through the motions, although a touch of sarcasm is present in his voice.] 'E is the best in town, you should visit him for, yadda yadda yadda, you get the idea. *sighs again* Listen, just get out there and decapitate someone for me, will you?' (Player: Wait wait wait, isn't Aengoth that borderline hobo with the market stall) '*third sigh's the charm* [Nearly to the point of rambling, but has enough sense to cut it short before he gets there] If you make it out alive, I'll give you the long version, but the gist of it is: He paid a single septim for his sponsorship, and he still paid the most out of anyone in this entire city.' (Player: I see/that's nice/go fuck yourself) [Steeling himself back up, trying to put a bit of authority into his voice]'Well, enough sob stories, get out there, and make sure you're the only one who comes back!' Mad Hobo: Desperate, frustrated, has a superiority complex. He's discovered some rather nasty secrets, and his goal in life is to spread the word about them. Damn shame he's too busy ranting and raving to let out even a single sensical sentence. His lines should have a certain sharp, paranoid edge to them, as befitting any mad hobo. [Shouting in desperation to any nearby] 'None of this is real! OPEN YOUR EYES AND SEE THE TRUTH, SHEEPLE!' '[Scared mumbling] Can't lose focus, can't lose focus, can't lose focus...' '[Fucking terrified mumbling] No, no, no, can't be like the dwemer, can't be like the dwemer. [Voice normalizes for a moment, he seems completely calm] Too bad what happened to them. [Shouting at the top of his lungs in joyful defiance of... something] WON'T HAPPEN TO ME!'[/quote]

[QUOTE=drunkenmoose;34874670]I'm going to have a chance to deliver some lines tomorrow morning around 10 AM PST. I had the psyker voice, and I was practicing a great Nosferatu-style voice from Vampire: The Masquerade. I'll also do my normal voice for reference. Also, what format should we save our demos?[/QUOTE] Reposting without remorse or shame due to this being the bottom of the page, along with my sample. I had an idea of an oddities shop keeper, lower city denizen, creeper in the royal court, etc. [media]http://soundcloud.com/drunkenmoose/psyker[/media] If it's fine to explore as a possibility, could I have some lines to run through for tomorrow?

I'm also prepared to do some VA. Whipped up a homemade pop filter to stop the loud bursts of sound that come from 'p's and the like. I might try that blanket trick too. I'm willing to give a number of voices a try tomorrow. Maybe give the count a go, perhaps try out for captain of the guard or anyone really. I can do hammy if need be. Any requests?

I can do lines if you want. I am 16 if there's any children

Fussy, sorry it took so long, but here's a good few lines for that nord hunter character. [quote]Aspiring Nord Hunter: Just barely out of his teens. Inexperienced, but he has one hell of a lot of heart (and luck for that matter), and shares the blood of a number of Tamriel's champions. Ever cheerful, and proud of his family's bloodline. Has a certain love of chit-chat and story-telling to him, especially when said stories are about his extended family. '[Could almost be called bragging, were it not for his calm tone and how he's presenting this as nothing more than idle chatter. Think of the way someone would mention how their father was a war hero when in polite company and you'll be spot-on.] You know, an ancestor of mine was involved in the fall of Dagoth Ur, back, what was it, two centuries ago? [Nostalgic] Man, if only you were able to hear my father talk about it, he goes on for hours.' [This time, he's certainly boasting, but not wanting to look like a proud dick, restrains himself a bit] 'Have you heard about the time I shot a deer from a good hundred meters away? Man, I was treated like a king that night.' 'You know, a cousin of mine is involved in this mining expedition over in Hammerfell. [Admiration] You wouldn't believe the stuff he's uncovered.'[/quote]

you guys want these? [img]http://jaanus.cc/pictures/cutleryarrows.png[/img]

[QUOTE=Jaanus;34875118]you guys want these? [img]http://jaanus.cc/pictures/cutleryarrows.png[/img][/QUOTE] we want all of them

Pvt. Martin, here's a new version of Aengoth's lines that should be a bit clearer. [url]http://pastebin.com/2JSAN0cu[/url] [editline]26th February 2012[/editline] [QUOTE=drunkenmoose;34875001]Reposting without remorse or shame due to this being the bottom of the page, along with my sample. I had an idea of an oddities shop keeper, lower city denizen, creeper in the royal court, etc. [media]http://soundcloud.com/drunkenmoose/psyker[/media] If it's fine to explore as a possibility, could I have some lines to run through for tomorrow?[/QUOTE] [i]'There is a lot of heated discussion at the local tavern over a group of people called 'Telepaths'. They have been hired by certain City-State kings. Rumor has it these Telepaths read a person's mind and tell their lord whether a follower is telling the truth or not.'[/i] Fuck yes. I'd love to put together a character like that. Although I can't help but worry that I'm doing too much of this stuff at once, and at too early a stage in this mod's development. But in any case, a few sample lines couldn't hurt, so I'll throw a couple together.

[QUOTE=PredatorKing;34875205] [i]'There is a lot of heated discussion at the local tavern over a group of people called 'Telepaths'. They have been hired by certain City-State kings. Rumor has it these Telepaths read a person's mind and tell their lord whether a follower is telling the truth or not.'[/i] Fuck yes. I'd love to put together a character like that. Although I can't help but worry that I'm doing too much of this stuff at once, and at too early a stage in this mod's development. But in any case, a few sample lines couldn't hurt, so I'll throw a couple together.[/QUOTE] IMO, it's better to get a lot of shit established and ready to expand upon before they are needed than try to start and sort things out when they are needed.

If you guys are adding a arena, you should really add a great-great-grandson of the annoying fan too. Only this time make him actually killable (or don't :v:) . And maybe the player can use him as a slave to fetch stuff like food, drinks and arrows for him.

No one is editing? [B]I'll do sth.[/B] [editline]26th February 2012[/editline] [B]DONE![/B] [url]http://www.1337upload.net/files/3uusimaa.zip[/url] +Started smithy (named it Hammer & Sickle). Feel free to continue it. +add water pool to the sewers. Feel free to continue sewers too. Interiors what needs characters: PUB,Pontikka cave,Cooper house? and House1. Can someone do? They might also lack navmesh.

This looks really awesome! I'd quite like the opportunity to do some voice acting if possible. I'm generally good at posh voices, so I was thinking I could do a Thalmor resident or generally any of the higher classes. Here's a rushed little bit I did as a random Thalmor agent sent to the city- sorry the recording is a bit shitty, my mic is temporarily out of service so I had to use my webcam recorder: [media]http://soundcloud.com/shozamar/thalmor/s-Ijwov[/media] But yeah, if and when you get to a stage when you need voice actors, I'm all up for it.

If no one is editing then [b] I'm editing the esp.[/b]

Hmm. I should collect list of avaible voice actors and model/texturemakers to the OP?

[QUOTE=oskutin;34877430]Hmm. I should collect list of avaible voice actors and model/texturemakers to the OP?[/QUOTE] Yeah, there's a lot of voice talent here, do something like: [quote=Outcast_X] [media]http://soundcloud.com/xane225/luftahraan[/media] [media]http://soundcloud.com/xane225/old-man[/media][/quote] [editline]26th February 2012[/editline] [QUOTE=shozamar;34877306]This looks really awesome! I'd quite like the opportunity to do some voice acting if possible. I'm generally good at posh voices, so I was thinking I could do a Thalmor resident or generally any of the higher classes. Here's a rushed little bit I did as a random Thalmor agent sent to the city- sorry the recording is a bit shitty, my mic is temporarily out of service so I had to use my webcam recorder: [media]http://soundcloud.com/shozamar/thalmor/s-Ijwov[/media] But yeah, if and when you get to a stage when you need voice actors, I'm all up for it.[/QUOTE] Wow, I'd love to hear you with a proper mic.

Boris the Trickster, the leader of a band of thieves called the "Sewer Serpents" [media]http://soundcloud.com/dinoman_24/sewerserpentboris#[/media] [editline]26th February 2012[/editline] God I sound terrible :C

[QUOTE=Zillamaster55;34877939]Boris the Trickster, the leader of a band of thieves called the "Sewer Serpents" [media]http://soundcloud.com/dinoman_24/sewerserpentboris#[/media] [editline]26th February 2012[/editline] God I sound terrible :C[/QUOTE] Sewer Serpents rule! I'm sorry, I just can't help but think that's a tunnel snakes reference. [QUOTE=oskutin;34875878]No one is editing? [B]I'll do sth.[/B] [editline]26th February 2012[/editline] [B]DONE![/B] [url]http://www.1337upload.net/files/3uusimaa.zip[/url] +Started smithy (named it Hammer & Sickle). Feel free to continue it. +add water pool to the sewers. Feel free to continue sewers too. Interiors what needs characters: PUB,Pontikka cave,Cooper house? and House1. Can someone do? They might also lack navmesh.[/QUOTE] I've got an hour or so today, I can navmesh House1 and work on Cookie.

After Pelf.

We could have another enchanted wares merchant that sells ice swords. It goes into a big quest line and [sp]you find out it is a big gang war involving corrupt guards (That's the reason the bakers sweet roll is stolen and the guards just laugh about it) and the criminal underground etc. [/sp]

I have a feeling that the farms are going to be the most neglected areas out of the whole city. :v:

If you want I might be able to voice act.

[QUOTE=zeldar;34878309]I have a feeling that the farms are going to be the most neglected areas out of the whole city. :v:[/QUOTE] Well the city is mostly depending on outside help, so the farms are just basic sustenance. It shouldn't be more than just a couple bushels of wheat and a cow. [editline]26th February 2012[/editline] [QUOTE=Birdman101;34878083]Sewer Serpents rule! I'm sorry, I just can't help but think that's a tunnel snakes reference. [/QUOTE] It is :v:

First floor is pretty much finished I think. Third needs detail. I have no idea what to put on the second floor. I made a new bathroom and a new oven too. [t]http://dl.dropbox.com/u/13781308/2012-02-26_00001.jpg[/t] [t]http://dl.dropbox.com/u/13781308/2012-02-26_00002.jpg[/t] [t]http://dl.dropbox.com/u/13781308/2012-02-26_00003.jpg[/t] [t]http://dl.dropbox.com/u/13781308/2012-02-26_00004.jpg[/t]

[QUOTE=Pelf;34878519]First floor is pretty much finished I think. Third needs detail. I have no idea what to put on the second floor. I made a new bathroom and a new oven too. [t]http://dl.dropbox.com/u/13781308/2012-02-26_00001.jpg[/t] [t]http://dl.dropbox.com/u/13781308/2012-02-26_00002.jpg[/t] [t]http://dl.dropbox.com/u/13781308/2012-02-26_00003.jpg[/t] [t]http://dl.dropbox.com/u/13781308/2012-02-26_00004.jpg[/t][/QUOTE] This is the bakery, I presume? I'd tone down on some of the bread, though, it's supposed to be a struggling city. But it looks absolutely amazing, don't get me wrong. Better than anything I could do :v:

Decond could have dining hall and storage? [editline]26th February 2012[/editline] [QUOTE=Zillamaster55;34878545]This is the bakery, I presume? I'd tone down on some of the bread, though, it's supposed to be a struggling city. But it looks absolutely amazing, don't get me wrong. Better than anything I could do :v:[/QUOTE] That amount of bread is not enough to feed them all :v: [editline]26th February 2012[/editline] And the really poor lives underground.

So lemme get this straight, In Quest-Giving NPCs, we have: The Jarl In Facepunch created NPCs, we have: The Shop owner The Perv In lore characters we have: None