• Have I improved?
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[QUOTE=Tinter;33452135]The biggest tip I can give you is, move to another genre. Action movies seem stupid when you're so young.[/QUOTE] Ok, Ill do that, but I already have half the movie filmed with all the presets done, so that will happen after this is finished. [editline]26th November 2011[/editline] [QUOTE=Emz;33452171]Evilcop is a Dr! :v:[/QUOTE] Fixed. Thanks for pointing that out, it was a retarded spelling mistake.
I still think if you're going to do it action, focus on making it deliberately cheesy awful and use it to your advantage as a comedy.
[QUOTE=captinchikin;33451948]Some of you guys are helping and some of you arent. Theres one crucial thing though: THE FINAL MOVIE WILL BE BETTER THAN THIS!!!! Once its done, it wont be rushed, and it will have had more effort put into it than all of my other movies. [/QUOTE] cool but a trailer is one of the first impressions of a film, the last thing it should be is rushed, if anything it should be better than the film as a whole. actually when you upload anything to the public, make sure it's literally your best work, how should we know what to improve when we don't know your real capabilities??
[QUOTE=Juniez;33452830]cool but a trailer is one of the first impressions of a film, the last thing it should be is rushed, if anything it should be better than the film as a whole. actually when you upload anything to the public, make sure it's literally your best work, how should we know what to improve when we don't know your real capabilities??[/QUOTE] I dont know, I wasnt thinking straight when I posted this.
Those effects don't blend in well at all, and I get this early 90s vibe from the music and sounds. How's about you pay more attention to capturing what the movie will be ABOUT?
[QUOTE=Tinter;33452135]The biggest tip I can give you is, move to another genre. Action movies seem stupid when you're so young.[/QUOTE] He shouldn't drop it though, I think he should continue it as it will increase his understanding about them. That is, if he researches them.
[QUOTE=No Party Hats;33452995]Those effects don't blend in well at all, and I get this early 90s vibe from the music and sounds. How's about you pay more attention to capturing what the movie will be ABOUT?[/QUOTE] I wanted to do that, but I didnt have enough clips done at the time. This is the first trailer Ive made, dont expect it to be perfect. Hey, just wondering, can anybody offer to make a BETTER trailer? I can send you the clips I have so far, and I'd give editing credit to you! Plus, you guys say this sucked, but ive gotten 8+ more subbers since I joined FP and started posting, so I guess SOMEONE likes it. Probably not the people posting though. [editline]26th November 2011[/editline] [QUOTE=CoolKingKaso;33453034]He shouldn't drop it though, I think he should continue it as it will increase his understanding about them. That is, if he researches them.[/QUOTE] I know, Im not dropping this project, but after it im moving to easier stuff that (maybe) im better at until im older.
the effects are kind of generic and the static camera at 0:04 looks a tad silly in an action scene just my two cents
[QUOTE=thispieiscold;33453101]the effects are kind of generic and the static camera at 0:04 looks a tad silly in an action scene just my two cents[/QUOTE] Your two cents are worth $20. So are most people on this site's opinions, but a few people just insist on raging.
[QUOTE=captinchikin;33451948]Some of you guys are helping and some of you arent.[/quote]The guys who don't help you include yourself, you keep destroying your chances to get help from a lot of peoples [quote]Theres one crucial thing though: THE FINAL MOVIE WILL BE BETTER THAN THIS!!!! Once its done, it wont be rushed, and it will have had more effort put into it than all of my other movies.[/quote]It kinda feels like you said this in other threads too a.k.a. "I know this is bad so don't point out the negative things, the next one will be better" [quote]And also, theres is NOTHING wrong with the acting in it. Im not bragging or trying to make myself feel better, but it seriously doesnt have a problem. My brother (the terrorist) REALLY sucks at acting, but I dont have anyone else.[/quote] First off you say that there is nothing wrong with the acting and then you say it is your brothers fault that he is bad at acting? Seriously kid... I haven't seen a movie from you with actually good acting. [quote]I actually feel like some people are on my side with this.[/quote] There may be some people who are still willing to help you with tips but if you keep beeing such an asshole to everyone they will be gone soon. [quote]I should have put more effort into the trailer, and I know it sucks.[/quote] [B][U]HOW ABOUT ACTUALLY PUTTING MORE EFFORT IN IT IF YOU KNOW IT SUCKS?[/U][/B] [quote]But the video following the trailer will, as I said before, be MUCH better than anything I've ever made. And I admit, most of my videos are bad, but they arent made for people expecting hollywood quality stuff.[/quote] How about not making a thread for videos that are shit(and you even know it which makes it even worse) and make threads for videos that are good. [U]By the way by good I mean that other peoples than you find it good. [/U] [quote]I dont have $4000 for 3ds max. I dont have $500 for a new camera.[/quote]Haha sure thing... But you could actualy afford After Effects for 999$. If you use cracked software you shouldn't lie about that you would buy 3ds max if you could afford it. [quote]The only thing I have is the 1/4 of you giving me REAL advice. Let me make a list of the most useful people on the site, from most useful to not least, but not as useful. If your name isnt here, you have NEVER given me useful advice, it has only been "get out", "stop making threads," or "grow up" Dr. Evilcop Ferroso Emz MikkelMann Klaser Oppenheimer If you want your comments to be useful, write comments like theirs.[/QUOTE] You little shithead... Stop trying to make this people defend you... Let's see why you are so full of shit. [URL="http://www.facepunch.com/threads/1134592?p=32946492&viewfull=1#post32946492"]I'm not on the list[/URL] [URL="http://www.facepunch.com/threads/1137561?p=33124461&viewfull=1#post33124461"]JohnnyOnFlame is not on the list[/URL] [URL="http://www.facepunch.com/threads/1138317?p=33175728&viewfull=1#post33175728"]DOG-GY is not on the list[/URL] This are only the three guys that posted more often, there are tons of other peoples in other threads who tried to help you with criticism...
Yes, they comment the most often, but most of the time its just "get out", or "your a kid", or "stop making threads", Plus I dont use AE cs5, I found AE 7 for $125 on ebay so I bought it. I dont use cracked software, I dont like taking the risk. And yes, From now on, I will NEVER make a thread for ANYTHING with flaws. And its fine when people point out the negative things, and I do improve over time.
I don't like this kid.
Good god the kid is flaming himself
everything has flaws
[QUOTE=DOG-GY;33453537]everything has flaws[/QUOTE] Yes, I know most of it has flaws. [editline]26th November 2011[/editline] [QUOTE=Zarjk;33453431]I don't like this kid.[/QUOTE] I dont like you either. And Ive got the death sentence on 12 systems.
no i'm saying that everything has flaws as in everything ever created by anyone [editline]26th November 2011[/editline] [QUOTE=captinchikin;33453553]I dont like you either. And Ive got the death sentence on 12 systems.[/QUOTE] wow that's almost as bad as your "shut the hell up" comeback on youtube
[QUOTE=DOG-GY;33453596]no i'm saying that everything has flaws as in everything ever created by anyone [editline]26th November 2011[/editline] wow that's almost as bad as your "shut the hell up" comeback on youtube[/QUOTE] Meh Im a SW geek. Im actually starting to like you Doggy.
[QUOTE=captinchikin;33454258]Meh Im a SW geek. Im actually starting to like you Doggy.[/QUOTE] Are you on some kind of drugs?
[QUOTE=ctlilc;33454343]Are you on some kind of drugs?[/QUOTE] No, what makes you think that? Im a Star Wars geek. And Im starting to like him. What makes you think Im on drugs from those sentences?
[QUOTE=Oppenheimer;33451801]Stop being assholes to him, give him some actual advice on how to improve instead of 'GET OUT your videos suck'.[/QUOTE] No point of giving advices if that kid doesn't seem to listen to it [editline]27th November 2011[/editline] also I absolutely hate his drama posts about "how people are flaming him"
[QUOTE=ADT;33454667]No point of giving advices if that kid doesn't seem to listen to it [editline]27th November 2011[/editline] also I absolutely hate his drama posts about "how people are flaming him"[/QUOTE] Actually, I do listen to it. And I dont do drama posts like that. I just try to tell people to stop. Now I just ignore it.
[quote]Actually, I do listen to it.[/quote] Clearly didn't seem to be the case on this and several other threads. And if you want people to stop being 'harmful' to you, stop your circlejerking attitude first
so how's your waifu doing on system 3
[QUOTE=ctlilc;33454343]Are you on some kind of drugs?[/QUOTE] ALL THE DRUGS.
[QUOTE=Brain Tumor;33455105]ALL THE DRUGS.[/QUOTE] stop posting
[QUOTE=DOG-GY;33455202]stop posting[/QUOTE] Very good, sir.
My life doesnt make sense anymore.
By the time you reach the age of >15, you'll be looking at your videos and you say "What the hell was I thinking back then?" Been there, done that. :suicide:
If you don't want tough criticism then don't go on to Facepunch with bad editing in your videos. I know your a kid and so am I but Jesus Christ those effects are TERRIBLE.
[QUOTE=Brain Tumor;33455211]Very good, sir.[/QUOTE] you read but you understand nothing stop POSTING
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