[QUOTE=Hattiwatti;33455569]By the time you reach the age of >15, you'll be looking at your videos and you say "What the hell was I thinking back then?"
Been there, done that. :suicide:[/QUOTE]
Im already looking at my previous video, the MW3 one, and saying that. My new video PROBABLY wont make me think that though. I actually have already looked at what I filmed and have chosen to redo all of the clips.
[editline]27th November 2011[/editline]
[QUOTE=DOG-GY;33455736]you read but you understand nothing
stop POSTING[/QUOTE]
Do I have to stop posting? Ive learned, and I promise not to be retarded :D
Wheres the improvement?
[QUOTE=DarkCisco;33467312]Wheres the improvement?[/QUOTE]
I guess the real question is, whats STILL wrong with it, and how can I fix it? The thread is titled wrong, my mistake. The movie following the trailer will be the improvement.
[editline]27th November 2011[/editline]
[QUOTE=All0utWar;33455699]If you don't want tough criticism then don't go on to Facepunch with bad editing in your videos. I know your a kid and so am I but Jesus Christ those effects are TERRIBLE.[/QUOTE]
I dont mind tough criticism, but once again, half these posts arent criticism at all.
That sucked, but i suck too, here have a horrible video :)
[video=youtube;G5fcGoHXG-o]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=G5fcGoHXG-o[/video]
After seeing all your failed attempts at action films, I decided to spend about an hour today learning to make my own muzzle flashes in After Effects.
[media]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=sMSrUY5TXZM[/media]
Not very good, but 70's chase music makes it better than OP's by default.
[editline]27th November 2011[/editline]
After seeing all your failed attempts at action films, I decided to spend about an hour today learning to make my own muzzle flashes in After Effects.
[media]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=sMSrUY5TXZM[/media]
Not very good, but 70's chase music makes it better than OP's by default.
[QUOTE=captinchikin;33460985]Do I have to stop posting? Ive learned, and I promise not to be retarded :D[/QUOTE]
uhm was i talking 2 u
Two minute details:
Get better props. Evike and AirsoftGI have airsoft AEGs you can buy. Not only are they good for props, but you can go out and play airsoft with them.
Get better costumes: Go to an army surplus store and pick up some camouflage and vests. That way your actors won't look like angry skiers that took a trip through the salvation army.
[editline]27th November 2011[/editline]
Look at Kawaii's video. Pretty sure that's a KWA AR-15, you can get something similar to that for ~130-180.
[QUOTE=milkandcooki;33469830]Look at Kawaii's video. Pretty sure that's a KWA AR-15, you can get something similar to that for ~130-180.[/QUOTE]
It's a Combat Machine.
[QUOTE=FPKawaii;33470024]It's a Combat Machine.[/QUOTE]
Your effects are way better than his.
are we gonna see a "making of" video of OP
I hope we don't see ANY more videos until he's moved into the late 90's era of effects.
GUYS, there were basically NO effects in this trailer! I learned how to do the shatter things the right way too! No Party Hats, The video will be better. I can do better than FP, although that looks REALLY nice BTW, great job, but Ive never followed tutorials. I always teach myself stuff, and I guess thats been my mistake. So I know what important things I missed: A good sound effect and smoke. Aside from that I got everything right. Also, Milkandcooki, I would do that, but Im only 14 and I get $7 a month. I dont have that kind of money. All my guns are airsoft guns though.
[QUOTE=captinchikin;33474199]GUYS, there were basically NO effects in this trailer! I learned how to do the shatter things the right way too! No Party Hats, The video will be better. I can do better than FP, although that looks REALLY nice BTW, great job, but Ive never followed tutorials. I always teach myself stuff, and I guess thats been my mistake. So I know what important things I missed: A good sound effect and smoke. Aside from that I got everything right. Also, Milkandcooki, I would do that, but Im only 14 and I get $7 a month. I dont have that kind of money. All my guns are airsoft guns though.[/QUOTE]
If you are 14, you can legally get a job as a paper boy.
That means around 50 a month, that is enough to get some more realistic stuff.
[QUOTE=MitchvW;33474322]If you are 14, you can legally get a job as a paper boy.
That means around 50 a month, that is enough to get some more realistic stuff.[/QUOTE]
Yeah, but I already have realistic stuff. Plus, I already checked, and I can't in my neighborhood. Plus, we are finishing the shoot this weekend, so I wont have enough time.
dont know if anyone mentioned this earlier but stop using counter-strike sound effects, they actually sound really bad
[QUOTE=Hill0;33475056]dont know if anyone mentioned this earlier but stop using counter-strike sound effects, they actually sound really bad[/QUOTE]
was mentioned before
[IMG]http://images.wikia.com/memoryalpha/en/images/4/4c/Khan!!!.jpg[/IMG]
Everyone's reaction to this video.
This is what you need to improve on:
1) Im assuming youre not rendering in the native settings your footage is recording in, unless your camera is THAT shitty. Check the native footage width and height and adjust accordingly in your render settings.
2) What is this a preview of? You show absolutely NOTHING related to the title of the so-called "film". I see two kids running around (I use the term "kids" loosely), one with a handgun, the other with a shotgun. Yet the "movie" is called Sniper... Uh, okay?
3) The bricks, what does that serve purpose to?
4) The shots are terribly chosen. Learn to breakdown the shots properly.
Practice, practice, practice. That's the best advice of all. Learn to become a perfectionist. If youre not happy with your work, what makes you think the general audience will? Just cause your mother or father tell you so?
[QUOTE=ctlilc;33475183]was mentioned before[/QUOTE]
Weird, I never saw it. Ill use different sounds though.
[QUOTE=captinchikin;33474199]GUYS, there were basically NO effects in this trailer! I learned how to do the shatter things the right way too! No Party Hats, The video will be better. I can do better than FP, although that looks REALLY nice BTW, great job, but Ive never followed tutorials. I always teach myself stuff, and I guess thats been my mistake. So I know what important things I missed: A good sound effect and smoke. Aside from that I got everything right. Also, Milkandcooki, I would do that, but Im only 14 and I get $7 a month. I dont have that kind of money. All my guns are airsoft guns though.[/QUOTE]
By your age I fixed computers, 25$ for 30 minutes of work.
On a side note, the muzzleflash effects on your videos are still bad.
[QUOTE=VendlandFx;33479143]This is what you need to improve on:
1) Im assuming youre not rendering in the native settings your footage is recording in, unless your camera is THAT shitty. Check the native footage width and height and adjust accordingly in your render settings.
2) What is this a preview of? You show absolutely NOTHING related to the title of the so-called "film". I see two kids running around (I use the term "kids" loosely), one with a handgun, the other with a shotgun. Yet the "movie" is called Sniper... Uh, okay?
3) The bricks, what does that serve purpose to?
4) The shots are terribly chosen. Learn to breakdown the shots properly.
Practice, practice, practice. That's the best advice of all. Learn to become a perfectionist. If youre not happy with your work, what makes you think the general audience will? Just cause your mother or father tell you so?[/QUOTE]
Yeah, Im exporting the ram previews. Luckily I found my external HDD so the final movie will be better. Im actually going to remake the trailer before the movie is done but before its uploaded. The only reason this made no sense is because the sniper actor was in Florida when we filmed so she wasnt in it. I should have looked this over, I regret even making a trailer for this without proper clips. In that case, Im deleting THIS trailer.
[editline]28th November 2011[/editline]
[QUOTE=JohnnyOnFlame;33479747]By your age I fixed computers, 25$ for 30 minutes of work.
On a side note, the gunflash effects on your videos are still bad.[/QUOTE]
I could, I actually tried once. I refurbished my dead grandpas old laptop and sold it to my neighbor for $250. That was a while ago, and nobody needs computers to be fixed that I know.
Why can't you just realize that you suck?
[QUOTE=Singo;33479869]Why can't you just realize that you suck?[/QUOTE]
I dont suck, I just never put enough effort in.
[QUOTE=captinchikin;33479929]I dont suck, I just never put enough effort in.[/QUOTE]
May I make a suggestion?
Here we go it's a big one hold onto your pants.
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[B][I]Put Effort In.[/I][/B]
[QUOTE=NateDude;33480093]May I make a suggestion?
Here we go it's a big one hold onto your pants.
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[B][I]Put Effort In.[/I][/B][/QUOTE]
I will. Trust me, if theres one thing I can do to make this one better, its just that. And I will.
[QUOTE=captinchikin;33479929]I dont suck, I just never put enough effort in.[/QUOTE]
You know if you put more effort into your work, and it showed, I'm sure that people'd be more reasonable. Ask for advice, don't act like an asshole while doing so.
[QUOTE=Deaver;33480152]You know if you put more effort into your work, and it showed, I'm sure that people'd be more reasonable. Ask for advice, don't act like an asshole while doing so.[/QUOTE]
I know I can seem like an ass at times, but I never mean it. I wish you could tell someones tone in typing, but it just doesnt work that way. I lost a best friend for that reason PLUS his moms arrogance.
Because some of you guys said nice things about my video last page, I'm making another one today (as in, one that is a bit more than a test). Expect it by the end of the day if you care.
[QUOTE=FPKawaii;33480356]Because some of you guys said nice things about my video last page, I'm making another one today (as in, one that is a bit more than a test). Expect it by the end of the day if you care.[/QUOTE]
sounds cool. I actually liked it. Lets have a contest, we should see whos is better.
add a grainy filter and a 90's boston accent
make people wear old clothes, but have every child be an actor. get a good story
bam, traditional 90's movie but hilarious
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