• Have I improved?
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[QUOTE=krazipanda;33480610]add a grainy filter and a 90's boston accent make people wear old clothes, but have every child be an actor. get a good story bam, traditional 90's movie but hilarious[/QUOTE] Oh...kay then. Ill try that after sniper.
[QUOTE=krazipanda;33480610]add a grainy filter and a 90's boston accent[/QUOTE] So people in Boston started talking different at year 2000?
[QUOTE=FPKawaii;33480672]So people in Boston started talking different at year 2000?[/QUOTE] Idk I guess according to him.
There is quite a lot of ways for you to improve your videos. For example you should use good music like, "let the bodies hit the floor" and make sure to use all the effects in windows movie maker.
[QUOTE=Sexy Eskimo;33480867]There is quite a lot of ways for you to improve your videos. For example you should use good music like, "let the bodies hit the floor" and make sure to use all the effects in windows movie maker.[/QUOTE] You think I cant see sarcasm?
[QUOTE=captinchikin;33480906]You think I cant see sarcasm?[/QUOTE] We would never think that you can't understand sarcasm... [QUOTE=captinchikin;33480374]sounds cool. I actually liked it. Lets have a contest, we should see whos is better.[/QUOTE] insta win for him whitout even posting...
[QUOTE=ctlilc;33481275]We would never think that you can't understand sarcasm... insta win for him whitout even posting...[/QUOTE] Well, lets see about that. Personally, I think he might win just because you guys think Im a dick. But could we all please just rate the video itself, not age or anything?
no one cares about age stop bringing it up
[QUOTE=DOG-GY;33481699]no one cares about age stop bringing it up[/QUOTE] Maybe you don't, but a lot of people brought it up before I did. I wont bring it up anymore. AE keeps freezing.... anyone else have the same problem?
no
[QUOTE=captinchikin;33481725]Maybe you don't, but a lot of people brought it up before I did. I wont bring it up anymore. AE keeps freezing.... anyone else have the same problem?[/QUOTE] The onlyone who realy brought the age up was you... you tried to use it as an excuse... If you have a problem learn to google it.
[QUOTE=DOG-GY;33481788]no[/QUOTE] Must be my POS computer then. [editline]28th November 2011[/editline] [QUOTE=ctlilc;33481816]The onlyone who realy brought the age up was you... you tried to use it as an excuse... If you have a problem learn to google it.[/QUOTE] On my first thread a bunch of people were saying that I was a kid and sure I tried to use it as an excuse, but its not the age, its the fact that I dont make much money at this age. And I fixed the problem BTW, without google.
Currently uploading my video to Youtube. This should only take hours...
[QUOTE=FPKawaii;33482565]Currently uploading my video to Youtube. This should only take hours...[/QUOTE] So am I my friend.... Alright, its done, but I reread Kawaiis post, and it said he was making "more than a test". I thought it originally said "more than my last test", like a better test. So, not to let it go to waste, heres a flash with like 1 hour put into it, but know that I have all the brightness levels down and shit, I can do something like this in 2 minutes :D. Also, if theres a problem with this, please dont be like: "Your videos suck, stop posting them, go kill yourself!", tell me whats wrong with them! If I know whats wrong with the flash, then I can fix it for SNIPER. Oh yeah, I almost forgot the link: [url]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=0VpNuNoCo9o[/url]
First thing's first, don't use a miniature clear M16 as a prop.
[QUOTE=FPKawaii;33483135]First thing's first, don't use a miniature clear M16 as a prop.[/QUOTE] Its an MP5, and the video wasnt about the prop, it was about the muzzle flash. Second thing?
1 hour was put into that?
[QUOTE=DOG-GY;33483181]1 hour was put into that?[/QUOTE] I knew you were going to make a comment like that. Yes, but it was messing with stuff AND waiting for AE to unfreeze. 13 times. :(. I can do one in like 2 minutes thats BETTER than that because I already got one piece of advice: Grain it, so it looks like its actually there and not just put on there.
[QUOTE=captinchikin;33483151]Its an MP5, and the video wasnt about the prop, it was about the muzzle flash. Second thing?[/QUOTE] You have very little dynamic lighting, and it's limited to the wall only instead of the shooter and gun as well. Also, smoke and blur is a big part in selling a muzzle flash, as well as the gun's action cycling and shells ejecting. You also have way too much recoil for a single shot, so work on acting recoil. Watch some range videos.
[QUOTE=FPKawaii;33483222]You have very little dynamic lighting, and it's limited to the wall only instead of the shooter and gun as well. Also, smoke and blur is a big part in selling a muzzle flash, as well as the gun's action cycling and shells ejecting. You also have way too much recoil for a single shot, so work on acting recoil. Watch some range videos.[/QUOTE] Actually, the lighting IS on the shooter and the gun. There is also a shell ejection. So, lets see: Make things more noticeable, and add grain. Anything else?
[QUOTE=captinchikin;33483246]Actually, the lighting IS on the shooter and the gun. There is also a shell ejection. So, lets see: Make things more noticeable, and add grain. Anything else?[/QUOTE] Also, what's this grain you keep talking about?
[QUOTE=FPKawaii;33483256]Also, what's this grain you keep talking about?[/QUOTE] Grain. You know, it pops out every other pixel? Just look in the effects menu in AE.
[QUOTE=captinchikin;33483270]Grain. You know, it pops out every other pixel? Just look in the effects menu in AE.[/QUOTE] So why would you want to make your video look lower quality?
[QUOTE=FPKawaii;33483295]So why would you want to make your video look lower quality?[/QUOTE] Not the video, the muzzle flash. If the video is low quality, you should have the muzzle flash match it. Just to add to the realism. Look at the Youtube comments, one of my subscribers told me to make it match the video.
yeah the same user that had no idea what you meant by grain ummmm
[media]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=gUTPGQsX5iU&feature=channel_video_title[/media] Here it is. I rushed/didn't pay attention to detail in some spots, such as in the first shooting scene you can see smoke extend into the black area, and the entire pistol shooting part being messed up due to not noticing a big fuckup in the way I filmed it. EDIT: And excuse the fact that it was shot in my messy as fuck storage/war room, it's been raining the last few days, and the forecast shows nothing but rain and snow for the rest of the week.
FPKawaii ones is better although there wouldn't bee so much smoke from a shot since we use smokeless gunpowder nowadays. Reasons why his is better? Your recoil looks like you have a seizure... why whould you ever begin to shake like this after a weapon pushed you back for a couple of cm? @Kawaii good overall, liked that you had a definded start in the Video so it didn't look like you just pasted some effects over the clip. The only minus is the smoke. The smoke wouldn't go upwards but instead in a cone form at the shooting direction. Remember here! You go after a "film realistic" not a "real realistic" look so less is sometimes more. If you use massive amounts of smoke you have to limit the time it is showing on the screen or otherwise it will look strange and will fill out the screen. Your profile is to small ([URL="http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=lIPGgo71wXU&t=1m49s"]i mean the arms[/URL]) because you played airsoft with no recoil.
haha you suck
[QUOTE=ctlilc;33487447]FPKawaii ones is better although there wouldn't bee so much smoke from a shot since we use smokeless gunpowder nowadays. Reasons why his is better? Your recoil looks like you have a seizure... why whould you ever begin to shake like this after a weapon pushed you back for a couple of cm? @Kawaii good overall, liked that you had a definded start in the Video so it didn't look like you just pasted some effects over the clip. The only minus is the smoke. The smoke wouldn't go upwards but instead in a cone form at the shooting direction. Remember here! You go after a "film realistic" not a "real realistic" look so less is sometimes more. If you use massive amounts of smoke you have to limit the time it is showing on the screen or otherwise it will look strange and will fill out the screen. Your profile is to small ([URL="http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=lIPGgo71wXU&t=1m49s"]i mean the arms[/URL]) because you played airsoft with no recoil.[/QUOTE] In honesty, I don't like my effect either, too much flash and strange smoke for a suppressed gun. The profile thing is actually correct for a tactical shooter, as in, someone looking for accuracy would use to regular "chicken wing" stance, but for closer engagements, where stability isn't needed as much, the more modern stance is preferred to preserve elbows. To explain my video having strange flow (shoot three boolet, reload, shoot 12415412 boolets) I originally planned to have more shooting at the start, but I filmed it at a very awkward angle so I cut it out (though, no one commented on this yet).
[QUOTE=DOG-GY;33483918]yeah the same user that had no idea what you meant by grain ummmm[/QUOTE] No, it was a guy named animationS on youtube. He told me to get the quality to match. Is there any other way to do this than grain? I mean, seriously, if there is, tell me. [editline]29th November 2011[/editline] [QUOTE=ctlilc;33487447]FPKawaii ones is better although there wouldn't bee so much smoke from a shot since we use smokeless gunpowder nowadays. Reasons why his is better? Your recoil looks like you have a seizure... why whould you ever begin to shake like this after a weapon pushed you back for a couple of cm? @Kawaii good overall, liked that you had a definded start in the Video so it didn't look like you just pasted some effects over the clip. The only minus is the smoke. The smoke wouldn't go upwards but instead in a cone form at the shooting direction. Remember here! You go after a "film realistic" not a "real realistic" look so less is sometimes more. If you use massive amounts of smoke you have to limit the time it is showing on the screen or otherwise it will look strange and will fill out the screen. Your profile is to small ([URL="http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=lIPGgo71wXU&t=1m49s"]i mean the arms[/URL]) because you played airsoft with no recoil.[/QUOTE] Alright, thanks for the help. I'll work on my recoil by watching some firing range videos. Also, I dont understand, should I or shouldn't I add smoke like he did? Also, lets just pretend that the recoil was fine on both. Whos EFFECT is better? My vote: Even. Just saying, he did more extra stuff like smoke, but on mine the flash is actually noticable.
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