• My new book
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[QUOTE=GhostG45;23907617]If you're even a decently skilled writer you wouldn't need to totally rely on the spell checker to begin with. If you're really having that much trouble with grammar and spelling, read the damn piece over yourself and correct your mistakes, don't blame it on the program you're using because you're too lazy to check your own work. OpenOffice is free, just download it. Or just download Mozilla Firefox, Google Chrome, or another browser that has a built in spell-checker and write it online. Anything is better than [i]Notepad.[/i][/QUOTE] Hell, you could even use Google Docs. You don't even need to download anything then.
[QUOTE=Dashiel;23907632]Hell, you could even use Google Docs. You don't even need to download anything then.[/QUOTE] It looks like you have been banned before
So have you, amazingly. I don't see your point.
[QUOTE=Dashiel;23907679]So have you, amazingly. I don't see your point.[/QUOTE] i have been banned 3 times you on the other hand have been banned constantly WAIT! it's off topic, where were we... OH yeah, MY BOOK IS AWESOME
[QUOTE=TheDiddler;23907122]Make this an audiobook.[/QUOTE] Fuck literally as i was scrolling down the page i was thinking [B]AUDIOBOOK[/B] [editline]03:44AM[/editline] [QUOTE=dragonhawk;23907692]i have been banned 3 times you on the other hand have been banned constantly WAIT! it's off topic, where were we... OH yeah, MY BOOK IS AWESOME[/QUOTE] hes been here since 06' shut up.
[QUOTE=dragonhawk;23907692]i have been banned 3 times you on the other hand have been banned constantly WAIT! it's off topic, where were we... OH yeah, MY BOOK IS AWESOME[/QUOTE] You also have 129 posts. :downs:
[QUOTE=Auster;23907698]Fuck literally as i was scrolling down the page i was thinking [B]AUDIOBOOK[/B][/QUOTE] When i was writing it i thought it would make a nice audio book. But it would be a horrible movie.
[QUOTE=dragonhawk;23907692]i have been banned 3 times you on the other hand have been banned constantly [/QUOTE] Yes and I've been here 3 years longer than you and have approximately 5852 more posts than you, I don't see your point and I don't see why you're calling me out on my ban history just because you won't accept the fact that you shouldn't be using Notepad to write a story :downs:
Too much aliens references?
Why is that bad
[QUOTE=dragonhawk;23907662]It looks like you have been banned before[/QUOTE] Alright, that's it. You're such a hypocrite. You've been banned before, too. People are making honest suggestions, and you're ignoring all of the advice you've been given.
Cause aliens was already made. And it's a lot better than this.
No i see your points. You guys are just distributing the suggestions through insults
[QUOTE=dragonhawk;23907767]No i see your points. You guys are just distributing the suggestions through insults[/QUOTE] The truth fucking hurts, man!
I only insulted you once you started being ignorant and ignoring everyone who gave you good advice.
[QUOTE=dragonhawk;23907724]When i was writing it i thought it would make a nice audio book. But it would be a horrible movie.[/QUOTE] yes it would be a horrible moive, called preadators vs aliens like tahts never been done before.
[QUOTE=TheDiddler;23907781]The truth fucking hurts, man![/QUOTE] This too. Edit: My automerge!
[QUOTE=dragonhawk;23907744]Why is that bad[/QUOTE] Changing the name of Harry Potter to Perry Snotter doesn't make it a new book series. The same goes with cramming your "book" with Alien references.
[QUOTE=dragonhawk;23907767]No i see your points. You guys are just distributing the suggestions through insults[/QUOTE] This is facepunch. [editline]03:48AM[/editline] [QUOTE=Dashiel;23907787]This too. Edit: My automerge![/QUOTE] :smug:
But you're still not following the advice. I admit that maybe they should be a bit nicer about it, but you seem too proud to even follow kind advice.
[QUOTE=GhostG45;23907617]If you're even a decently skilled writer you wouldn't need to totally rely on the spell checker to begin with. If you're really having that much trouble with grammar and spelling, read the damn piece over yourself and correct your mistakes, don't blame it on the program you're using because you're too lazy to check your own work. OpenOffice is free, just download it. Or just download Mozilla Firefox, Google Chrome, or another browser that has a built in spell-checker and write it online. Anything is better than [i]Notepad.[/i][/QUOTE]Not to mention the fact that, while spellcheckers are great for spelling, their grammar-checking abilities suck. Protip to becoming a writer: [sp]Read. A LOT.[/sp]
It is people like dragonhawk that make me realize why murderers exist.
[QUOTE=GhostG45;23907791]Changing the name of Harry Potter to Perry Snotter doesn't make it a new book series. The same goes with cramming your "book" with Alien references.[/QUOTE] You sir miss the point entirely. See the book follows Truely's story nothing else
[QUOTE=dragonhawk;23907818]You sir miss the point entirely. See the book follows Truely's story nothing else[/QUOTE] So why is it supposedly based off of Alien vs. Predator?
Please do replace all "Truely" with "Real name goes here"
I like aliens versus predator and i wanted to make my own version [editline]08:52PM[/editline] [QUOTE=adamater;23907836]Please do replace all "Truely" with "Real name goes here"[/QUOTE] Truely is the guys name
[QUOTE=Trogdon;23907292]here's a narration of chapter one that I did while reading it for the first time [url]http://filesmelt.com/dl/truely_origins.mp3[/url][/QUOTE] Oh Christ, I'm about to die :cawg:
Oh god, this "book" is terrible. The kid has no idea how to properly write conversations. It's a bunch of "blah blah blah," guy 1 said. "blah blah blah," guy 2 said. "blah blah blah," guy 1 replied. "blah blah blah blah," guy 2 said. Whereas it should go: Herp derp derpy derp "blah blah blah," said guy 1. "blah blah blah," replied guy 2, "blah blah blah." "blah blah blah blah." Once you establish who's partaking in the conversation, you no longer need to reiterate who is saying what. People will automatically assume that they are taking turns talking, since that is how most conversations go down.
[QUOTE=SPESSMEHREN;23907816] Protip to becoming a writer: [sp]Read. A LOT.[/sp][/QUOTE] I don't know. That seems for people who want to write something and not for people with something to write, know what i'm saying?
I respect your opinions, just don't be so harsh The idea i get from you guys ripping on my book is borat humping a computer [editline]08:57PM[/editline] [QUOTE=dragonhawk;23907871]I respect your opinions, just don't be so harsh The idea i get from you guys ripping on my book is borat humping a computer[/QUOTE] or if you'd rather i could post the whole f**king book right here
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