• My new book
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[QUOTE=dragonhawk;23908586]i'm in 10'th grade and anyone who thinks otherwise is a pompous morron[/QUOTE] Oooooh, pompous? You focused that much on spelling that, that you couldn't spell moron correctly?
[QUOTE=dragonhawk;23908586]i'm in 10'th grade and anyone who thinks otherwise is a pompous morron[/QUOTE] Really? This book is 7th grade level at most. Perhaps you should get your teacher to glance it over and give you criticism?
Oh, OP, what did you report me twice for? I am bloody curious.
[QUOTE=dragonhawk;23908586]i'm in 10'th grade and anyone who thinks otherwise is a pompous morron[/QUOTE] Oh, my bad oh great and mighty grand champion. Should I carry your weapons, shine your boots? Back rub perhaps? :worship:
[QUOTE=CommanderMayhem;23908607]Oh, OP, what did you report me twice for? I am bloody curious.[/QUOTE] You know why. besides I reported you at least 15 times.(Why thef**k doesn't it work)
What grade is the guy who wrote the Mitchell bio in?
Why would we deny that you are in 10th grade? I would only deny that you have the intelligence of an average 10th grader.
[QUOTE=dragonhawk;23908631]You know why. besides I reported you at least 15 times.(Why thef**k doesn't it work)[/QUOTE] No. I honestly don't, know why the [b]fuck[/b] you reported me. It is [b]FUCKING[/b] weird. And 15 [b]fucking[/b] times? [b]Fucking[/b] overkill. That's right I swear on the internet I am a hardass
[QUOTE=CommanderMayhem;23908632]What grade is the guy who wrote the Mitchell bio in?[/QUOTE] 10'th grade but he's a year older than me
[QUOTE=CommanderMayhem;23908632]What grade is the guy who wrote the Mitchell bio in?[/QUOTE] -snip-
[QUOTE=dragonhawk;23908631]You know why. besides I reported you at least 15 times.(Why thef**k doesn't it work)[/QUOTE] A post needs to be reported by two people before the mods see it.
[QUOTE=dragonhawk;23908631](Why thef**k doesn't it work)[/QUOTE] because he didn't do anything wrong. I'm surprised you haven't gotten banned for report abuse or something
ok where is the ignore command!? I am tired of you trolls trolling me, trolling yourselves, and trolling each other just shut the heck up
[QUOTE=dragonhawk;23908674]ok where is the ignore command!?[/QUOTE] You can run away from the criticism but you can't hide it!
[QUOTE=dragonhawk;23908674]ok where is the ignore command!?[/QUOTE] Somewhere, I dunno look for it.
What's the book about? Summary.
OP, don't ask for critiism if you can't handle it.
[QUOTE=dragonhawk;23908674]ok where is the ignore command!?[/QUOTE] If you were to ignore the people who were giving you criticism that irritated you, this thread would be reduced to one page.
[QUOTE=Errorproxy;23908697]What's the book about? Summary.[/QUOTE] Aliens, apparently, but the bio has a whole lot to with WoW and Anime and shit.
[QUOTE=Errorproxy;23908697]What's the book about? Summary.[/QUOTE] Aliens fanfiction.
[QUOTE=dragonhawk;23908674]ok where is the ignore command!? I am tired of you trolls trolling me, trolling yourselves, and trolling each other just shut the heck up[/QUOTE] Heck? It's cool to swearon the internet bro! I do it, and I'm a real hardass.
[QUOTE=Errorproxy;23908697]What's the book about? Summary.[/QUOTE] It's about a genetic experiment who escapes from a laboratory and follows the storyline of the alien movies. He is ageless, regenerative, smart, and very resourceful.
OP, you may have better luck in the creationism corner. You should try asking a mod to close this thread and starting a new thread there.
OP, A- I did read the book, and it is horrible. The story structure resembles a dead cat, the grammar is bad, and the spelling comes from a 6th grader. B- You aren't taking any criticism. A lot of the comments here would help you, but you choose to say they are flaming you and ignore them. C- Commander Mayhem and the like aren't breaking rules. Criticizing you is not the same as flaming. If he said. "You are a fucking idiot, leave Facepunch" then it would be justified, but he didn't, so you are needlessly reporting. The only one getting banned in this thread is you.
[QUOTE=CommanderMayhem;23908720]Heck? It's cool to swearon the internet bro! I do it, and I'm a real hardass.[/QUOTE] from the look of the avatar you have... You really aren't
[QUOTE=ManningQB18;23908747]OP, A- I did read the book, and it is horrible. The story structure resembles a dead cat, the grammar is bad, and the spelling comes from a 6th grader. B- You aren't taking any criticism. A lot of the comments here would help you, but you choose to say they are flaming you and ignore them. C- Commander Mayhem and the like aren't breaking rules. Criticizing you is not the same as flaming. If he said. "You are a fucking idiot, leave Facepunch" then it would be justified, but he didn't, so you are needlessly reporting. The only one getting banned in this thread is you.[/QUOTE] sorry i wasn't paying attention what did you say?
[QUOTE=dragonhawk;23908748]from the look of the avatar you have... You really aren't[/QUOTE] Are you bigoted towards bi-dexters?
[QUOTE=spiderleet;23908759]You need some classes in character development too..[/QUOTE] man you guys need classes in anger management. [editline]09:46PM[/editline] [QUOTE=wonkadonk;23908766]Are you bigoted towards bi-dexters?[/QUOTE] Dexter's laboratory was canceled. (hint hint) again with the off topic. My book is a work of art.
[QUOTE=dragonhawk;23908748]from the look of the avatar you have... You really aren't[/QUOTE] :iceburn:
Here, OP I feel bad about mocking your writing, have a piece of my shitty writing to mock. I wrote this for a music class that I did not give a shit about had to write a family friendly poem with onomatapieas I couldn't be arsed to put effort into it I think I failed Beep! Beep! I wake up in the morning at quarter to four, Rawr! Scratch! That sound... Oh no! The undead are at my door! Schreech! The window pops open with a bit of strength, Growl...the zombies are in my room. At arms length! Ahhhh! Jump out my window, and hit the ground with a thud! RoooAR! More zombies are coming! They can smell my blood! Huff!Puff! I sprint away, I need to get away fast. Huff puff... I hope these breaths wont be my last. Ding Dong! I ring my neighbours bell. Creaaak.... He opens the door... he's a zombie, how swell. Click!Click! BANG! I hear a gun, I'm not alone! Click!! Click! I run away, escaping his moan. Eek! Oh no! I was to late! I left the poor man to his fate! But since he's dead, Im sure he wont mind, I'll take the gun, and kick some zombie behind. Click! Click! Bang! Bang! This apocalypse is better with a gun. Click. Click. In fact im even thinking im having a little fun. The zombie hits the ground, making a splatter! But over the distance, I hear radio chatter. Sprint up the hill, it's quite a hike, I hear a voice yell, WE Are oscar Mike! Beep! Beep! Beep! The armies, here, in a jeep. Ratatatat! The gun mows down zombies, they fall to a heap. GO GO GO GOGO the sarge lets out a roar. Go go go ! Delta two one four! Thanks a lot army, i was nearly dissected. Huh? Put the gun down. Im not infected!
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