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Yay or nay? [img_thumb]http://www.roflsaurus.com/users/Hammertime/20091204-IMG_1287.jpg[/img_thumb] Not much happening in the photo itself, I know, it was prettier IRL :P Maybe if I had a tripod I could take it in HDR, because now there's not much balance I think... Shot out of the window of the conservatory, I couldn't zoom any closer and as you might see, getting up the hill would be possible but I didn't have time. I'll go back some other time... (but they are right when they say the best time to take pictures is indeed sunrise/set)
[QUOTE=Hammertime;18734048]Yay or nay? [img_thumb]http://www.roflsaurus.com/users/Hammertime/20091204-IMG_1287.jpg[/img_thumb] Not much happening in the photo itself, I know, it was prettier IRL :P Maybe if I had a tripod I could take it in HDR, because now there's not much balance I think... Shot out of the window of the conservatory, I couldn't zoom any closer and as you might see, getting up the hill would be possible but I didn't have time. I'll go back some other time... (but they are right when they say the best time to take pictures is indeed sunrise/set)[/QUOTE] Adjust curves and colors. Then it shall be balanced.
How then? I think the colours are correct like I saw them, there's just too much black...
[QUOTE=Hammertime;18734455]I think the colours are correct like I saw them, there's just too much black...[/QUOTE] You can actually remove that. So don't think you know it all you just started taking pictures from the look of it. Oh and by the way maybe next time you could manually expose it with your camera instead of Aperture Priority mode.
Lord m's pushing me into studying figures, hopefully at least one hour a day. Here's what I've got so far. [img]http://filesmelt.com/downloader/4_dec.png[/img]
The legs are too short on all three of the last figures.
[QUOTE=jetlitheone;18734654]You can actually remove that. So don't think you know it all you just started taking pictures from the look of it. Oh and by the way maybe next time you could manually expose it with your camera instead of Aperture Priority mode.[/QUOTE] I don't say I know it all, I just think I like the colours as they are, no need to fuck around with 'em. I took like ten shots of this with different exposures and when the foreground was visible, it wasn't very pretty (trash, ugly colours, etc). I think the composition just has to be different, like I said there's just too much black, it's too dark, that's what I think. How would I remove that btw? Your post wasn't very clear...
[QUOTE=xamllew;18735046]The legs are too short on all three of the last figures.[/QUOTE] Yeah I can see that now, they do look rather short.
[IMG]http://i48.tinypic.com/r7279c.png[/IMG] Some unfinished sketch Critics are welcome, if anyone sees anything wrong with it ( I'm not used to drawing perspective shit )
she's married :3: also, hand's still to small i think :( [img]http://img705.imageshack.us/img705/9695/page01.jpg[/img] Another one [img]http://img514.imageshack.us/img514/8707/page2j.jpg[/img] and another :D [img]http://img264.imageshack.us/img264/7413/page03v.jpg[/img] What do you guys think?
i think i made the frames too fast :saddowns: [IMG]http://i45.tinypic.com/2dbw31k.gif[/IMG]
very nice! but in the first one the face is also way too small, and it looks like she has really fat thighs. love your style though :D [editline]12:34AM[/editline] my post was at post above HV by the way [editline]12:34AM[/editline] [QUOTE=HookerVomit;18736577]i think i made the frames too fast :saddowns: [IMG]http://i45.tinypic.com/2dbw31k.gif[/IMG][/QUOTE] what's it supposed to be? :P
slowed a bit... :\ im just experimenting [IMG]http://i47.tinypic.com/vxzs3o.gif[/IMG]
yeah but with what...? most animated... things also have more than 2 frames :P
3D gifs.. I forget what camera it is that takes those kinds of pictures but I love it..*googling* [editline]08:43PM[/editline] like this: [img]http://9.media.tumblr.com/tumblr_ku3juc4y5K1qzwrk6o1_400.gif[/img] [editline]08:43PM[/editline] lmao omfg.
[QUOTE=TrueWolF;18736089]she's married :3: also, hand's still to small i think :( [img]http://img705.imageshack.us/img705/9695/page01.jpg[/img] Another one [img]http://img514.imageshack.us/img514/8707/page2j.jpg[/img] and another :D [img]http://img264.imageshack.us/img264/7413/page03v.jpg[/img] What do you guys think?[/QUOTE] repoating because I hate posting my art and have it land on the last post of a page. :( and thanks for the critique Autumn :)
[QUOTE=HookerVomit;18736577]i think i made the frames too fast :saddowns: [IMG]http://i45.tinypic.com/2dbw31k.gif[/IMG][/QUOTE] I think the problem is with how you took the two photos rather than than the frame rate. You don't want to turn the camera at all. Keep it as parallel as possible to your subject, and use your viewfinder. Take one picture looking through the viewfinder with you left eye, then take the second picture looking through with your right eye. Try to move the camera as little as possible, and as if it were on a rail, and just slide it left to right two inches. Basically what you are trying to do is look at two pictures, one from each eye, at the same time. Test it out, and I hope this helps.
[img]http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2681/4158496039_ed02ec601a.jpg[/img]
[IMG]http://img193.imageshack.us/img193/939/tracktonowhere2.jpg[/IMG] This is another one of my personal favorite photos. It reminds me of "Life After People", let me know what you think.
[img]http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2674/4159673126_4e16e68a17.jpg[/img] Blurred out the edges a bit. idk if I like it but yea
undo the blur, it looks fake pic is kinda cool though
Enjoying the new light with my friend at 2 am :dance: [url=http://www.flickr.com/photos/daijitsu/4159883936/][img]http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2637/4159883936_76605e3ac8.jpg[/img][/url] also, ended up doing the entire deadly sins set today, hahaha. I was surprised I got so many friends to come up for the pictures, one drove nearly an hour to get here. flickr set: the Eight Evil Thoughts [origin of seven sins] [url]http://www.flickr.com/photos/daijitsu/sets/72157622935320980/[/url] [editline]1:11[/editline] think I should toss the set to a thread? I'm feelin' risky today.
[QUOTE=Atomic_punch;18732125]I don't know why but I really like this photo. [IMG]http://img37.imageshack.us/img37/4402/picture572o.jpg[/IMG] Any thoughts?[/QUOTE] Reminds me of this [media]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=iJSecyeo2Kw[/media]
[QUOTE=daijitsu;18742560]Enjoying the new light with my friend at 2 am :dance: [url=http://www.flickr.com/photos/daijitsu/4159883936/][img]http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2637/4159883936_76605e3ac8.jpg[/img][/url][/QUOTE] it's quite a nice photo, but i don't think you should have her bra strap hanging off her shoulder, it looks cheap and slutty. her pose is quite seductive enough already, and in my opinion you could get a better photo by working from that, instead of using the bra strap, or if you do want to have her bra straps hanging down, then maybe try placing her hands near it, so it looks like she's actually controlling it instead of it just looking like it fell down. good job on the lips!
[QUOTE=Hammertime;18734048]Yay or nay? [img_thumb]http://www.roflsaurus.com/users/Hammertime/20091204-IMG_1287.jpg[/img_thumb] Not much happening in the photo itself, I know, it was prettier IRL :P Maybe if I had a tripod I could take it in HDR, because now there's not much balance I think... Shot out of the window of the conservatory, I couldn't zoom any closer and as you might see, getting up the hill would be possible but I didn't have time. I'll go back some other time... (but they are right when they say the best time to take pictures is indeed sunrise/set)[/QUOTE] It's too much black, needs to have more attention to the light breaking through, rather than light not breaking through, if you know what I mean. [QUOTE=MrMISCHIEF;18738506][IMG_thumb]http://img193.imageshack.us/img193/939/tracktonowhere2.jpg[/IMG_thumb] This is another one of my personal favorite photos. It reminds me of "Life After People", let me know what you think.[/QUOTE] I like everything about it, only thing that annoys me is how the left rail is being cut off but not the right. But I'm really unsure if it would help to center the composition because a lot of the goodness comes from the skewed inwards line it makes.
[QUOTE=dgg;18745020]It's too much black, needs to have more attention to the light breaking through, rather than light not breaking through, if you know what I mean. [/QUOTE] I completely agree :)
Let me introduce you to Mr. Rage [img]http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2590/4160479808_0d0b3a2798.jpg[/img]
[QUOTE=Ferosso;18078997]This was actually a part of a series, but I just edited this pic not 10 minutes ago, and it never was in the set, so I guess it goes here: [url=http://www.flickr.com/photos/sebastianpichardphoto/4055281925/]Photo on Flickr[/url] [img]http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3109/4055281925_2336b30baf_b.jpg[/img][/QUOTE] New desktop picture.
[QUOTE=dgg;18745020]I like everything about it, only thing that annoys me is how the left rail is being cut off but not the right. But I'm really unsure if it would help to center the composition because a lot of the goodness comes from the skewed inwards line it makes.[/QUOTE] Funny, I noticed that myself after posting it. Something i would have fixed if I noticed earlier. I was looking for it, and only found my raw photos, The one I edited was more rail symmetrical.
I'm working on a song: [url]http://www.esnips.com/doc/ccba6660-3aa8-4bec-ac46-56400a2179f0/Laurens-Goethals---Union-(WIP[/url]) WIP
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