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Doodled a cuttlefish [Img]http://I.imgur.com/Y4c552G.png[/img] [editline]17th July 2013[/editline] Bonus [Img]http://I.imgur.com/QyvpYCY.png[/img]
hi chaps i don't normally do this kind of thing so sorry if i'm intruding, but i thought we're all quiet friendly here and all of the nerdy variety, so i thought it'd be okay to post this i'm raising money for a charity called specialeffect who make game controllers for disabled people, usually for people with muscle control issues. usually they take the form of rugged, large controls such as analogue sticks you can use with your chin/elbows/knees, that kind of thing, but i've also played DiRT3 with just my eyes to control the car which was pretty fuckin incredible anyways, we're doing a 24hr gaming marathon as a fundraiser for them. there's more info here [url]http://www.justgiving.com/nicefacegames[/url] it's a really great cause so anything you can give, even if it's only a single £/$/thing would be incredible thanks a lot xo
I finished my game if anyone cared. [url]http://lifelessechro.com/[/url] i'll leave the internet until i'm feeling alive again.
[img]http://img196.imageshack.us/img196/3576/un93.png[/img]
That actually seems like a good idea.
[IMG]http://i234.photobucket.com/albums/ee143/afnoporo/hw_zps1aa2cb96.png[/IMG] [IMG]http://i234.photobucket.com/albums/ee143/afnoporo/harruup_zps4bfcd2a7.png[/IMG] [IMG]http://i234.photobucket.com/albums/ee143/afnoporo/heads_zpsc7cac509.gif[/IMG] "Planning on jumping in that hole? Reminder: that's illegal. Standing in the freezing snow? Illegal. You're rate of breathing is a bit to high to be considered lawful."
wh-what
[QUOTE=MakoSkyDub;41492029]I guessing you're under an obligation not to show anyone your internship stuff?[/QUOTE] I haven't gotten around to asking yet, but I believe this will be the case for the time being Which sucks because frankly it's some of the very best compositional work I've ever done =[
[IMG]https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/u/34397004/Node/theloose.png[/IMG] why doesn't img width=n work on this forum.
The night was dry and warm. No mist rose from my infrequent breath as I took down another 50 milliliters of hard liquor. This time, it was whiskey. Waves of drunkenness crept up my spine to reach my mind as my blood became a certain percentage less so, and was replaced by alcohol. I'd been struggling to write for a long time (one could even say years) and the liquor wasn't helping. The single servings of alcohol seemed to help me transcend my mind and reach higher planes, ones that were unfortunately not of the linguistic variety. Emotion ran high, but literary skills began to fail me as more and more alcohol found its way into my mind. I feel my thoughts begin to slow as liquor rises from below. The individual bonds between this language we call English begin to fray as night turned into day. Still, no words had found their way onto the page. I could take myself to Hell and back but the words were litter along the track. Harnessing the mind's creativity is to go for loss of words and back again as the mind goes from incoherent to a sort of transcendental take on reality. This self-destructive trend called creativity takes me from the world I live in and puts me back again, sometimes worse for wear. Either way, it seems like when dealing with liquor that my mind was full, but simultaneously empty. I could travel through time, but go nowhere on the page as alcohol and tobacco turned night to day. As much as I begged them to just "go" as I set my fingers to the keys, at homerow is where they'd eventually stay as my mind went out to play. And when I returned, there would be this empty page - this insult of the mind, to stubbornly testify that where I had gone was nowhere at all. It's five in the morning, and still the only thing on the page is me thinking how nothing has been left to stay, aside from my mourning of the lack of words to be written today. Is it a failure when words fail to appear by midnight, or does the spinning of the earth not dictate the flow of creativity? Sometimes, I feel as if my toils are all for naught, and then I go and smoke some more. Where my mind travels, who's to say when all that is left in the morning is an empty page?
You repeat words [i]far[/i] too much, also you could have made your point in a few lines instead of paragraphs of tedious descriptive diarrhea [editline]18th July 2013[/editline] [QUOTE=Cellusious;41499269]I finished my game if anyone cared. [url]http://lifelessechro.com/[/url] i'll leave the internet until i'm feeling alive again.[/QUOTE] That post is a pretty melancholy way to introduce the game, cheer up bruv :v: Downloaded, will probably continually post feedback when I get time to play it (I have a huge list of to-play games that I never make any progress on but I'll bump this to top priority)
Reposting some older ones because I've finally scanned them! Super excited. Click for 2000px goodnes. [IMG_thumb]http://i.imgur.com/dhvApsB.jpg[/IMG_thumb] [IMG_thumb]http://i.imgur.com/6ii2TJS.jpg[/IMG_thumb] [IMG_thumb]http://i.imgur.com/XvTs91b.jpg[/IMG_thumb] [IMG_thumb]http://i.imgur.com/W4Hj6Hx.jpg[/IMG_thumb] And a new one! My home ^_^ [IMG_thumb]http://i.imgur.com/Ea8OtKM.jpg[/IMG_thumb]
Love it but in the third picture the distance looks awfully short between the truck and the mountain compared to how small the buildings on it are.
do more gradient overlay things, the previous one u did looked great
[img]http://i.imgur.com/jvasJWE.png[/img] [editline]18th July 2013[/editline] C&C please
[QUOTE=salmonmarine;41508519][img]http://i.imgur.com/jvasJWE.png[/img] [editline]18th July 2013[/editline] C&C please[/QUOTE] Salmonmarine has leveled up
[QUOTE=MakoSkyDub;41504804]You repeat words [i]far[/i] too much, also you could have made your point in a few lines instead of paragraphs of tedious descriptive diarrhea [/QUOTE] Eh, it was a free-write. I was trying to demonstrate to myself when I sobered up that drinking and writing wasn't the best of ideas, so I paired them together to see what happened. I ended up going on a wild mental ride while typing nothing on the page, so I drank the last tiny bottle and wrote that.
[QUOTE=MakoSkyDub;41504804]You repeat words [i]far[/i] too much, also you could have made your point in a few lines instead of paragraphs of tedious descriptive diarrhea [editline]18th July 2013[/editline] That post is a pretty melancholy way to introduce the game, cheer up bruv :v: Downloaded, will probably continually post feedback when I get time to play it (I have a huge list of to-play games that I never make any progress on but I'll bump this to top priority)[/QUOTE] i think i can cheer a bit up now, [url]http://indiestatik.com/2013/07/18/lifeless-echro/[/url] [url]http://www.polygon.com/2013/7/18/4534740/echro-one-lets-you-battle-hedgehogs-in-underground-caverns[/url]
[img]http://fc09.deviantart.net/fs71/i/2013/199/d/3/orchid_by_xephio-d6e2u6x.png[/img] despite not really being good at it yet i really like painting and think ill do it as much as digital drawing, HOPEFULLY
[IMG]http://fc03.deviantart.net/fs70/f/2013/131/a/6/nuz2_by_simonheros-d64xm23.jpg[/IMG]
another artwork for my band's mascot. [img]http://25.media.tumblr.com/c89bc960f5464e4f978424f0ad3906ff/tumblr_mq5syzJMbk1snm6fco1_1280.png[/img]
[QUOTE=salmonmarine;41508519][img]http://i.imgur.com/jvasJWE.png[/img] [editline]18th July 2013[/editline] C&C please[/QUOTE] Good progress, it reads well but my critic would be the shading on the aircraft, some of the shading reminds me, maybe due to the colors palette and lack of reflections, the cut-out filter.
[QUOTE=bunguer;41515001]Good progress, it reads well but my critic would be the shading on the aircraft, some of the shading reminds me, maybe due to the colors palette and lack of reflections, the cut-out filter.[/QUOTE] did anyone understand this post
sorry
[QUOTE=MenteR;41515020]did anyone understand this post[/QUOTE] What I meant is that the choice of colors plus how the shading is, seems like a cut-out filer was applied. With some smudging in some places.
[QUOTE=Rexxasaurus;41515022]It's been a while since I've actually come on FP, but I'm somewhat lost with a piece of work I'm doing right now. I've been drawing for a while now (just over a year), but I'm still a novice with my drawings and using photoshop. Here's the one I'm currently working on now. I plan on fixing up the hands and trying out some painting with it. [IMG]http://i.imgur.com/iTbwLnE.jpg[/IMG] Just whatever advice you guys can give me would be fantastic, thanks![/QUOTE] I vaguely know that bulge.. But seriously dude, learn some anatomy and proportions [URL]http://www.fashion-teaching.com/wp-content/uploads/2011/01/2251.jpg[/URL] [URL]http://www.idrawdigital.com/wp-content/uploads/2009/01/prop_male.gif[/URL]
add on a dragon penis
here are some recent sketchbook pages check out loads more on my webzone [url]www.jensalarsenaas.tumblr.com[/url] [img]http://25.media.tumblr.com/ad74edfbc55ebb15277c897040edc54a/tumblr_mq44tuR6As1rjj02zo2_1280.jpg[/img] [t]http://24.media.tumblr.com/6cdd666f5bac65e6f76c621708fe90a1/tumblr_mq44tuR6As1rjj02zo5_1280.jpg[/t][t]http://24.media.tumblr.com/2351658eea192da99cee45a1968ae115/tumblr_mq44tuR6As1rjj02zo8_1280.jpg[/t][t]http://24.media.tumblr.com/5d369b50248f61f2b2dd1cce7f5fde10/tumblr_mq44iulBxo1rjj02zo10_1280.jpg[/t] [img]http://24.media.tumblr.com/6071f31aa1b23c0474224ca00db7f1b2/tumblr_mq44tuR6As1rjj02zo10_1280.jpg[/img]
[QUOTE=rikimaru6811;41515362]I vaguely know that bulge.. But seriously dude, learn some anatomy and proportions [URL]http://www.fashion-teaching.com/wp-content/uploads/2011/01/2251.jpg[/URL] [URL]http://www.idrawdigital.com/wp-content/uploads/2009/01/prop_male.gif[/URL][/QUOTE] I wasn't really going for that, actually :v Anyway I don't know who else to ask when it comes to critique, but yeah I'm struggling with the proportions. Thanks for the links :smile:
[img]http://24.media.tumblr.com/eee242dcf9185ee14d4ddba4400444aa/tumblr_mq66cfJsC81r85bmyo1_1280.jpg[/img]
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