[QUOTE=JoeyZ;40308515]I love the fluid quality of this, it reminds me of Yoshitaka Amano's work[/QUOTE]
Hah, well thanks, Also, Yoshitaka's work is really amazing, I hadn't heard of him before but I'm liking his work already.
Another scrapped one. I didn't like this new paper at all, going to return the rest tomorrow.
[IMG]http://i.imgur.com/yn3REEf.jpg[/IMG]
Now to either find a sketchbook quality a3 paper or return to my a4 sketchbook. Except the shitty tower, I really liked this one...
[img]http://cdn.memegenerator.net/instances/400x/18808749.jpg[/img]
This doesn't have much to do with anything but I was working on a Mars picture to do my painting from and I ended up not liking anything I found online so I combined and edited two pictures of mars (from opposite sides haha) etc and ended up with this and I just like how it looks (albeit, technically it's mirrored for lighting purposes). If you saw a painting of this you'd know it was Mars right? I'm trying to make Venus, Mercury, and Mars all easily distinguishable.
[IMG]http://i.imgur.com/GH5bNaL.jpg[/IMG]
I have a whole sketchbook I sort of want feedback on. Would anyone actually go through about 150 pages? Sorry if this sounds dumb/ridiculous.
[QUOTE=VTG;40320882]I have a whole sketchbook I sort of want feedback on. Would anyone actually go through about 150 pages? Sorry if this sounds dumb/ridiculous.[/QUOTE]
Scan the book to somewhere like picasa and set the permissions so that anyone with the URL can browse, paste it here an I'm sure someone will take a look.
Got myself a bamboo tablet. Oh boy oh boy oh boy.
Iteration continues. Is it too colorful now? I tried to make the colors correspond to the character.
[t]http://filesmelt.com/dl/pb3.png[/t]
It's better. I think you should change the color for 'Hand to Hand'. 'Combat' should have more of a lighter shade imo. Also, I think you should try out different fonts to make each color phrase look more unique and distinguished.
Haha, I started by using different fonts and it looked [I]awful.[/I]
[QUOTE=Larikang;40322707]Haha, I started by using different fonts and it looked [I]awful.[/I][/QUOTE]
The different fonts looked fine to me with the colour unifying them before ( although I didn't like your original font for hand to hand) right now your word placement is not working at all with the image flow. It looked better in the original for the most part.
[editline]17th April 2013[/editline]
[url]http://facepunch.com/showthread.php?t=1250372[/url]
I recommend visiting this thread also, this is very up their alley. They can be a bit harsh to non professionals though, just be willing to take the critique for what it is, no sugar included.
Man I can't stand typography.
[img]http://i.imgur.com/uhwpMoJ.jpg[/img]
so this guy needed backgrounds for an animation
[img]http://i.imgur.com/hX0AY4Z.png[/img]
[img]http://i.imgur.com/qIxyJDS.png[/img]
On the upper picture, the boxes in the middle have a completely different perspective and vanishing points from the isles. Same with the shelves on the right side. It could be very cool picture if all the perspective stuff was taken care of.
[QUOTE=PLing;40322993]On the upper picture, the boxes in the middle have a completely different perspective and vanishing points from the isles. Same with the shelves on the right side. It could be very cool picture if all the perspective stuff was taken care of.[/QUOTE]
The pic I used as loose reference had some kind of funny bubble lens, and I had put the middle shelves and some other stuff on myself, which is probably why that looks wonky.
That's not to mean my sense of perspective is flawless, far from it really
thanks for the input
[QUOTE=salmonmarine;40323211]The pic I used as loose reference had some kind of funny bubble lens, and I had put the middle shelves and some other stuff on myself, which is probably why that looks wonky.
That's not to mean my sense of perspective is flawless, far from it really
thanks for the input[/QUOTE]
You can always draw the main perspective lines first. It is even easier when doing digital arts.
[QUOTE=salmonmarine;40323211]The pic I used as loose reference had some kind of funny bubble lens, and I had put the middle shelves and some other stuff on myself, which is probably why that looks wonky.
That's not to mean my sense of perspective is flawless, far from it really
thanks for the input[/QUOTE]
Look up a program called "carapace" it's by a guy who works at Epic Games. You can use it to create a perspective grid from any image.
[QUOTE=Larikang;40322500]Iteration continues. Is it too colorful now? I tried to make the colors correspond to the character.
[t]http://filesmelt.com/dl/pb3.png[/t][/QUOTE]
Brighten up "Hand to Hand Combat". It's a little too much on the dark side considering the background, but not by too much.
Colour isn't a bad thing to use at all. I like what you've done with the words "Wife" and "If" because now they pop properly; they popped out before because of the italics and caps/bold respectably, but now it stands out more.
I'm half-tempted to tell you to try and make the dashes between "Hand to Hand" gold like her tiara. Play around some more.
Also: Sculptures are fair game to share in here, right? I've got some finalized projects I'll be picking up soon.
way too much space between 'you can' and 'beat me at' imo, feels unwarranted
the look right pose is too long/unbalanced, he'd fall over :v:
i don't really know where this goes cos it's 3d art, 2d art, and design, but i made a udk level for uni
[media]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=clA9iVDyl78[/media]
i'd say it's about 90% my own stuff. there's a few stock ut3 assets like some railings, pipes, etc. roughly 1-2 months work on around 5-6 months experience. inspired by routine obviously
:v: the end
[editline]18th April 2013[/editline]
Cool stuff
[QUOTE=lexus04;40325369]the look right pose is too long/unbalanced, he'd fall over :v:[/QUOTE]
I know it is, I thought it would be alright since the rat only holds that pose for a very short time and also moves the tail as a counterweight
A weird pen drawing of an owl I did late last year. What do you guys think?
[IMG]http://filesmelt.com/dl/photo_1111.jpg[/IMG]
I think that the feathers have way too much depth in them and other parts are sorta flat.
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