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Helloooo Thought I'd make my first post in this section since you all seem to respond to feedback properly, or respond in some way. This is the project I'm on at the minute deadline is in 2 days! Though this was made ages ago. [t]http://i.imgur.com/Uf4WPuQ.jpg[/t] [editline]12th December 2013[/editline] Also this which I managed to do the night before submission. [t]http://www.3dhit.co.uk/uploads/post-20322-0-41871200-1383575617_thumb.jpg[/t]
[QUOTE=OrkO;43153373]yeah well i appreciate the advice, i know it's far from perfect and i don't want to seem like an attention whore or something i just want to improve its also my first in a very long time. occasionally i just get compulsions to draw, then draw a thing or two, usually faces, then end up fairly disappointed and don't draw for a long time again i think i lack the dedication to significantly improve my skill[/QUOTE] Honestly you should try another reference to more easily see anything that people can give advice, because Selena Gomez's face is a bit too unique [sp](baby-faced)[/sp] to constructively criticize. Just try someone with a more normal face I guess.
ok maybe, i just really wanted to draw selena gomez for some reason
Don't worry, I've been painting pretty faces nonstop for months. There are a lot weirder things you could be doing.
[QUOTE=Charimon;43153422]Helloooo Thought I'd make my first post in this section since you all seem to respond to feedback properly, or respond in some way. This is the project I'm on at the minute deadline is in 2 days! Though this was made ages ago. [t]http://i.imgur.com/Uf4WPuQ.jpg[/t] [editline]12th December 2013[/editline] Also this which I managed to do the night before submission. [t]http://www.3dhit.co.uk/uploads/post-20322-0-41871200-1383575617_thumb.jpg[/t][/QUOTE] Never use Papyrus it's terrible
Some doodles [IMG]http://i.imgur.com/xTy7QVW.jpg[/IMG] [IMG]http://i.imgur.com/yvcBATC.jpg[/IMG] [IMG]http://i.imgur.com/MJ9LQ8a.jpg[/IMG] [IMG]http://i.imgur.com/BgTw9uT.jpg[/IMG]
[t]https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/u/10565588/pictures/art.png[/t] Ssdfsdf I've fallen in love with drawing in this project.
[QUOTE=MakoSkyDub;43154479]Never use Papyrus it's terrible[/QUOTE] Yeah I guess lack of sleep makes you make wreckless decisions... [editline]12th December 2013[/editline] [t]https://scontent-a-lhr.xx.fbcdn.net/hphotos-prn2/1501682_10152052864263818_1353569396_n.jpg[/t] Also here's my first ever maquette.
The arms are fucked but apart from that it's actually very good
[IMG]http://i.imgur.com/IQF195z.jpg[/IMG] Since my parents starts to prevent me from using pc cuz they think game have destrooyed my life :v I started to draw on paper again, dunno if i fucked up the anatomy this time, I made this when I was in school. *coolstorybro*
I am drawing for hobby in free time. Here some of my last works. [img]http://cs320629.vk.me/v320629639/5553/WxHzhw7a1eg.jpg[/img] [img]http://cs14111.vk.me/c312619/v312619639/53fb/WUH0yWXdO08.jpg[/img] [img]http://cs409418.vk.me/v409418808/6ac2/4NjsaN5DkM0.jpg[/img] [img]http://cs320620.vk.me/v320620639/4fa1/sRYrhRSXT6k.jpg[/img] [img]http://cs9242.vk.me/v9242639/25e6/h7tGHwmZ0a0.jpg[/img]
viideeooooogaaaymes [img]https://24.media.tumblr.com/b8d76a16168899b452e8e7673c7b6282/tumblr_mxpbanXok31s32mjoo1_1280.jpg[/img]
What a great font that isn't
i think it looks cool as shit
The selected text in red (?) is hard for mea to reada :(
oh shit is this a colour blindess issue? wow i'm so sorry i never even considered this. makin video games man this shit is hard there's so much to think about
I unno, it just blends in for me :\ If it is related to my colorblindness I'm not offended or anything :) I little white or black stroke might remedy it :)
thanks for the feedback! we'll try adding some sort of little border to the text. i've looked at the values of the scene too and, while obviously i can't replicate the effects of various colourblindness in photoshop, i think it can be fixed by changing the composition - even for me it's clear that the text that is in front of the cabin doesn't stand out enough
It's mostly the red overlaid on either green or brown that does it. Don't worry though, I could still manage it regardless, it's no big deal!
[QUOTE=Biscuit-Boy;43159670]It's mostly the red overlaid on either green or brown that does it. Don't worry though, I could still manage it regardless, it's no big deal![/QUOTE] There is no reason to have text obfuscated like that in a settings menu because of a poor colour choice, so yes, it is a big deal. I don't think having a border would be the correct solution either, I'm pretty sure it would ruin the way the type looks. I suggest just moving the whole menu more to the left into the green trees, leaving the red text in the open field. Maybe change where those trees in the far away background stand as well to avoid them interfering with the text. The white on green looks good, and dark-red on pink-peach looks good.
[QUOTE=ChestyMcGee;43159512]thanks for the feedback! we'll try adding some sort of little border to the text. i've looked at the values of the scene too and, while obviously i can't replicate the effects of various colourblindness in photoshop, i think it can be fixed by changing the composition - even for me it's clear that the text that is in front of the cabin doesn't stand out enough[/QUOTE] actually u can [editline]12th December 2013[/editline] [url]http://www.adobe.com/uk/accessibility/products/photoshop.html#colorblind[/url] [editline]12th December 2013[/editline] i like that menu chesto the only bad thing i see is the smoke not really fitting with the rest of the scene's low poly lines idk if that's something you can really change though at all
[QUOTE=ChestyMcGee;43159205]oh shit is this a colour blindess issue? wow i'm so sorry i never even considered this. makin video games man this shit is hard there's so much to think about[/QUOTE] I am not colour blind, but it's not easy on the eye. If you convert it to greyscale you will see the values in some places are very close. [img]https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/u/5062494/junk/chesty_screenshot_values.png[/img] Colour does differentiate them, but if you want it to stand out and be easy on the eye then you should make sure the text's values contrast with the background in all areas.
[IMG]https://31.media.tumblr.com/c7371603dd05f095d872b2361b6e3982/tumblr_mxpjvnjcBb1qih1sso1_500.png[/IMG] a quick crystal maiden drawing, literally my first time drawing in 3 years :\
Been doing armor studies lately, joining Unmotivated Losers replenished my motivation. [T]http://fc03.deviantart.net/fs70/f/2013/346/a/3/armor_by_ollipasanen-d6xoh2w.jpg[/T][T]http://th07.deviantart.net/fs71/PRE/f/2013/338/4/e/armor_by_ollipasanen-d6wp7sc.jpg[/T]
Tell me more about this "Unmotivated Losers" you speak of!
[QUOTE=Biscuit-Boy;43161060]Tell me more about this "Unmotivated Losers" you speak of![/QUOTE] It's a deviantArt group: [url]http://unmotivatedlosers.deviantart.com/[/url] You have to submit at least one piece of artwork every week, else you will get kicked. We also have google hangouts twice a day where we share screens (assuming you are painting digitally) and just chat around. Also the group's chat is quite active. I think the group is full at the moment, but you can always contact the founder of the group.
Well, if there's ever an opening and the group would tolerate me being shit at art, I'm interested!
[QUOTE=Jallen;43160555]I am not colour blind, but it's not easy on the eye. If you convert it to greyscale you will see the values in some places are very close. [img]https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/u/5062494/junk/chesty_screenshot_values.png[/img] Colour does differentiate them, but if you want it to stand out and be easy on the eye then you should make sure the text's values contrast with the background in all areas.[/QUOTE] One thing you could do is put a black stroke on it. Apparently white text with a black stroke can be read on any colour without difficulty. Don't know if it applies to other colours but it's worth a shot.
I started studying animation and we did a thing with lip syncing and I thought to myself, y'know who loves shoddy animation? [I]you guys![/I] [media]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=rI5YfoQG1Xs[/media] Plus it's Cave Johnson so that has to count for something...
or just make the red text brighter....
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