• Creative Work That Doesn't Deserve A Thread
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ok [editline]1st May 2014[/editline] well that was weird, I didn't see you quoting anything in that post till I posted my fuckin response was posted :T
[IMG]https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/s/mwdp4mc2wirfdak/neil.gif[/IMG] Creative also means unusual. Not like i'm getting paid for this
[QUOTE=Lilyo;44695119] [IMG]http://i.imgur.com/G80CNo7.png[/IMG][/QUOTE] That woman's body seems a bit masculine because of how the hips look thinner than the shoulders. Might just be me, though.
i think her torso is too long compared to her legs
[QUOTE=Lilyo;44695119] [IMG]http://i.imgur.com/i5G8ZvT.png[/IMG] [IMG]http://i.imgur.com/G80CNo7.png[/IMG] [IMG]http://i.imgur.com/kB0g9ei.png[/IMG] [IMG]http://i.imgur.com/lNdmnYo.png[/IMG] [IMG]http://i.imgur.com/8mzQ1KK.png[/IMG][/QUOTE] Have a look at some pencil work from some artist you like and take note of any rendering or even (maybe more importantly) the style of rudimentary sketches. Obviously your proportions and shapes and forms aren't bad but your mark making is terrible, scribbly/petted and aimless looking I know I've brought this up before and you said you'd learn to draw later or something, but fuck that, if you're actually DOING these drawings in the meantime you might as well change your technique :v:
ugh i hate shading
[QUOTE=lintz;44695010]Light is brightest on the top of the planet, why is there a huge red corona on the left of it then? Binary star system? Wouldn't be that red unless it was a red giant and if it was close enough for the light to still be tinged that red, it would be close enough to cook the whole planet. sorry i look for the feasibility in everything[/QUOTE] It's not meant to be realistic, if anything it's supposed to be reminiscent of a half hellish earth
I've been messing around with digital art stuff and it's tons of fun. [IMG]http://i.imgur.com/SWs8K42.png[/IMG] [img]http://i.imgur.com/BUvHNxt.jpg?1[/img] [img]http://i.imgur.com/JyJPb9l.jpg?1[/img] The last two are based on stock images because I don't actually have any kind of technical abilities.
[IMG]http://i.imgur.com/3x6QulF.gif[/IMG] Protagonist design for a comic, any feedback is really welcome as always! [url=http://i.imgur.com/1TJOPXV.gif]old[/url]
why no shirt? why open trenchcoat? why wound unbandaged?
[QUOTE=lintz;44700645]why no shirt? why open trenchcoat? why wound unbandaged?[/QUOTE] Facial expression to me reads fuckin crazy moherfucker, so that would explain those things
I'm pretty sure 'tapebra' is a hallmark toughgirl characteristic.
The face looks male, so all in all it's very creepy Doesn't help that the style make everything look filthy :v:
back again, with more on that story i've been working on this right here is absolutely nothing concrete, i'm basically linking my running outline i want to write this up as a threateningly big book, and i'm also talking to an artist buddy of mine, we're gonna try and get a comic going, start selling them to local comic shops if it turns out good so yeah, if you want to read the book part, scroll to the bottom, past all the outliney bits [url]https://www.dropbox.com/s/v24cxyfx90ko0u5/ANDROMEDA.docx[/url] any criticism you guys can offer would be greatly appreciated!
Better than what usually washes up in this thread but that isn't saying anything :v: Stilted dialogue, dull writing generally, and an uninspired story and setting Read fifty books and then reconsider your giant book with a more developed palette
[QUOTE=Bynine;44700134][IMG]http://i.imgur.com/1TJOPXV.gif[/IMG] Protagonist design for a comic, any feedback is really welcome as always![/QUOTE] Full length trench coat and no shirt? Also the way the trench coat is torn on the bottom bothers me, since its not at all what fabric does. You could achieve the same effect with a few well placed tears rather than an almost furry looking torn bottom. Try to think about the functionality of the outfit a bit too, and how it looks from other angles. The pants as well much just be leggings, they have no button up or the uper area which has a seam along it where a belt may go. The collar looks okish from here but I can imagine it looking rather odd from the side
[QUOTE=Bynine;44700134][IMG]http://i.imgur.com/1TJOPXV.gif[/IMG] Protagonist design for a comic, any feedback is really welcome as always![/QUOTE] Is that a guy or a girl? S/he has tits but that face tho
On my cold Autumn day I saw a small man who looked worried and kept checking his watch. I had to draw him. [URL="http://tortoisecreates.tumblr.com/post/84502929622/saw-a-man-on-the-train-who-i-just-had-to-draw-im"][IMG]https://31.media.tumblr.com/cf740c67e58ccafc3bb303da7d15dcc3/tumblr_n4xs0kmsew1soc5g0o1_500.png[/IMG][/URL]
[QUOTE=Bynine;44700134][IMG]http://i.imgur.com/1TJOPXV.gif[/IMG] Protagonist design for a comic, any feedback is really welcome as always![/QUOTE] Very Dante-esc design, down to the boots. I dig it.
[QUOTE=SeneorGoat;44702073]On my cold Autumn day I saw a small man who looked worried and kept checking his watch. I had to draw him. [URL="http://tortoisecreates.tumblr.com/post/84502929622/saw-a-man-on-the-train-who-i-just-had-to-draw-im"][IMG]https://31.media.tumblr.com/cf740c67e58ccafc3bb303da7d15dcc3/tumblr_n4xs0kmsew1soc5g0o1_500.png[/IMG][/URL][/QUOTE] Print it with colors and give it to him the next day
I'm glad you guys think she looks crazy and scary! I was going for that. Wasn't quite going for "looks like a man with tits," though, because apparently my female designs tend to end up that way. I don't really know how to make feminine faces, though. Guess I could thin her eyebrows...?
[QUOTE=Bynine;44702170]I'm glad you guys think she looks crazy and scary! I was going for that. Wasn't quite going for "looks like a man with tits," though, because apparently my female designs tend to end up that way. I don't really know how to make feminine faces, though. Guess I could thin her eyebrows...?[/QUOTE] try giving her some eyelashes and make the eyes more oval shaped. Other than that,you should do some studies on female faces
[QUOTE=Bynine;44702170]I'm glad you guys think she looks crazy and scary! I was going for that. Wasn't quite going for "looks like a man with tits," though, because apparently my female designs tend to end up that way. I don't really know how to make feminine faces, though. Guess I could thin her eyebrows...?[/QUOTE] One thing I noticed about feminine faces is that they tend to have shorter skulls and longer necks than men (not too much though). Dunno if it's 100% accurate but it looks more feminine
You're probably mistaking less developed trapezius muscles for longer necks
[QUOTE=MakoSkyDub;44700867]The face looks male, so all in all it's very creepy Doesn't help that the style make everything look filthy :v:[/QUOTE] I don't know, I think it suits. I mean it's definitely more of a masculine face than your average female character's face, but it's not disgustingly so and the character strikes me as more masculine than your average female character. It's still within acceptable boundaries IMO. That being said, it could probably benefit from a smaller, rounder nose and slightly more distinct eye-lashes, but nothing drastic. [IMG]http://i.imgur.com/nDPDBVe.png[/IMG]
Still looks male to me
you could probably exaggerate the hip to be bigger than the torso
Little Something I've been working on today. It's called "The Philisophical Zombie". [img]http://s12.postimg.org/5j87ek44t/10171026_10152353367650902_940009114611969701_n.jpg[/img] [img]http://s12.postimg.org/ocu0bk2ct/Screen_Shot_2014_05_02_at_5_21_54_PM.png[/img]
I don't get it, but it's awesome.
Updated it [url=http://facepunch.com/showthread.php?t=1258652&p=44700134&viewfull=1#post44700134] in the original post[/url] according to a lot of the suggestions. Thanks a bunch, guys! I might make her hips bigger in the future, but right now that's beyond the power of my editing prowess.
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