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[img]http://fc09.deviantart.net/fs71/f/2014/344/c/b/hattori_by_fuzguy433-d89f04g.png[/img]
did you make that out of animals too
[QUOTE=Garb;46689866]did you make that out of animals too[/QUOTE] You're so funny! No
The city I live in got a bunch of Nissan Leafs for government cars, and is having a contest to design a wrap for them. I've been working on a design for them based off of the classic Nissan/Datsun racing livery. (Sorry for the shitty cell phone pic, this is pretty much just the sketch) [t]http://i.imgbox.com/ET8S9XNV.jpg[/t]
How do I improve this? I feel like I go about making stuff like this all wrong for some reason. [IMG]http://i.imgur.com/Fay519q.png[/IMG]
your smoke is really weird imo
Lilyo, I'd say your background (not space, whatever is beyond the landing platform) is too contrasted and thus confuses the depth and focus of the scene. Frankly I'm all for loosely done concept art styled pieces, but I think there's too little definition to the point where it's a bit too confusing for me overall.
I decided to upload 3 pics recently [t]http://fc07.deviantart.net/fs71/f/2014/345/b/4/sand_snail_by_cobbaltco-d89hbz1.jpg[/t] [t]http://fc09.deviantart.net/fs71/f/2014/344/6/7/bluestone_by_cobbaltco-d89evgr.jpg[/t] [t]http://fc01.deviantart.net/fs70/f/2014/344/3/a/cuchara_by_cobbaltco-d89ev8p.jpg[/t] [sp]I swear mom, i'm not high[/sp]
[QUOTE=gonzalolog;46692737]I decided to upload 3 pics recently [sp]I swear mom, i'm not high[/sp][/QUOTE] The second one has awesome colors! Meanwhile I've been working on the 3rd character for the little game: [img]http://i.imgur.com/yliOIas.png[/img] And also the final color scheme for the previous character: [t]http://i.imgur.com/d2IyYdt.png[/t]
[QUOTE=Lilyo;46690796]How do I improve this? I feel like I go about making stuff like this all wrong for some reason. [IMG]http://i.imgur.com/Fay519q.png[/IMG][/QUOTE] do you thumbnail before you go this large? if you start with a big canvas working at thumbnail quality that's def part of the problem. the comp has a lot of issues that wouldn't be there if you worked small and did more than one thumb of the same scene to work the kinks out. maybe you do that but it looks like you compose from scratch at that size? which makes improving the basics of the picture at this point a pain in the ass. [editline]12th December 2014[/editline] case in point look at it in the quote above - the awkward tangents, broken perspective, value problems etc all leap out. work at 300x300
[QUOTE=Lilyo;46690796]How do I improve this? I feel like I go about making stuff like this all wrong for some reason. [IMG]http://i.imgur.com/Fay519q.png[/IMG][/QUOTE] more dramatic angle? [editline]12th December 2014[/editline] camera angle, make it look more up?
It's been a while since I posted here. Or TBH drawn anything at all. Can't find the motivation. Made a little speed painting for fun, not my greatest, but not my worst. [t]http://i.imgur.com/cZgFolJ.jpg[/t] Thumbed because huge. [sp]Sorry for signing it, added it to my facebook.[/sp]
I'm depressed i guess [t]http://fc02.deviantart.net/fs71/f/2014/346/f/b/tinta_by_cobbaltco-d89l20p.jpg[/t] [URL="http://i.imgur.com/3zxdJOJ.jpg"]Reference[/URL]
[img]http://i.imgur.com/BA4HJri.gif[/img] had to recreate the ending of the matrix for a film project
[QUOTE=FreakySoup;46700751][img]http://i.imgur.com/BA4HJri.gif[/img] had to recreate the ending of the matrix for a film project[/QUOTE] The overall flying effect looks pretty decent. I'd try and make it look like the shockwaves traveled over the ground though, and not as a screen effect. A simple mask and perspective adjustment should do the trick. Overall I'd say it looks convincing enough to work and not feel too distracting. Good job.
[QUOTE=FreakySoup;46700751][img]http://i.imgur.com/BA4HJri.gif[/img] had to recreate the ending of the matrix for a film project[/QUOTE] You should also try to remove that delay before the person takes off, seeing as it is not true to the matrix's ending (if I recall correctly he would take off just as his feet left the ground, no pause in mid air)
Did you consider using Google Maps imagery (with some billboard clouds, etc) to recreate that final top-down shot where he zooms up from the ground and whizzes past the camera?
I didn't draw this but it's FAN ART of my work.. and yeah Thanks Japan [IMG]https://pbs.twimg.com/media/B4uuwpnCEAA4A6S.jpg[/IMG]
[QUOTE=Eric95;46703900]I didn't draw this but it's FAN ART of my work.. and yeah Thanks Japan [IMG]https://pbs.twimg.com/media/B4uuwpnCEAA4A6S.jpg[/IMG][/QUOTE] of which work exactly?
Quick hurricane studies. [img]https://33.media.tumblr.com/e896f518ff9126c103276048c9e87869/tumblr_ngit1znqpn1rttuq5o1_r2_1280.jpg[/img] [img]https://33.media.tumblr.com/d9c72c58189dc339c59e0468fb609157/tumblr_ngit1znqpn1rttuq5o2_r3_1280.jpg[/img]
[QUOTE=wewt!;46704136]of which work exactly?[/QUOTE] Senpai Club, a parody anime that i work on. We have a Japanese fanbase and they sure are interesting [video=youtube;9cEwgrwuR4U]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9cEwgrwuR4U[/video]
[QUOTE=antianan;46704180]Quick hurricane studies. [img]https://33.media.tumblr.com/e896f518ff9126c103276048c9e87869/tumblr_ngit1znqpn1rttuq5o1_r2_1280.jpg[/img] [img]https://33.media.tumblr.com/d9c72c58189dc339c59e0468fb609157/tumblr_ngit1znqpn1rttuq5o2_r3_1280.jpg[/img][/QUOTE] They seem more like tornadoes, though. Really weird shape on the second one. [editline]13th December 2014[/editline] It's like the sky is puking or pooping
[QUOTE=antianan;46704180]Quick hurricane studies. [img]https://33.media.tumblr.com/e896f518ff9126c103276048c9e87869/tumblr_ngit1znqpn1rttuq5o1_r2_1280.jpg[/img] [img]https://33.media.tumblr.com/d9c72c58189dc339c59e0468fb609157/tumblr_ngit1znqpn1rttuq5o2_r3_1280.jpg[/img][/QUOTE] I like the unusual shapes Feels a bit abstractish Like how a Studio Ghibli tornado might look
hai [img]http://i.cubeupload.com/l6Q0sW.png[/img]
[QUOTE=Adeptus;46705330] It's like the sky is puking or pooping[/QUOTE] [t]http://i.imgur.com/B899e8G.jpg[/t] Forgive me, Antianan
[QUOTE=Adeptus;46705330]They seem more like tornadoes, though. Really weird shape on the second one. [editline]13th December 2014[/editline] It's like the sky is puking or pooping[/QUOTE] he probably meant tornadoes english is his second language afaik
[QUOTE=MakoSkyDub;46707703]he probably meant tornadoes english is his second language afaik[/QUOTE] It's not even my bad english actually, it's my bad education. I sincerely thought tornado and hurricane are the same thing :( And hey, english is not even my second language, it's my third language huh. I learned german in school.
so when you heard about "hurricane (insert name)" wrecking whole cities and so on in international news, you thought they meant individual giant tornadoes with names?
[QUOTE=MakoSkyDub;46709345]so when you heard about "hurricane (insert name)" wrecking whole cities and so on in international news, you thought they meant individual giant tornadoes with names?[/QUOTE] Actually, i thought that tornado is a part of a hurricane, along with high winds and stuff.
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