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Does anyone have any critique, or tips on how to improve this image I'm working on? [thumb]http://i.imgur.com/IwODV3f.jpg[/thumb]
nothing to do today so I made this nice and welcoming city : [IMG]http://i564.photobucket.com/albums/ss81/cepink_photo/scrfin_zps227446d7.jpg[/IMG]
[URL="http://gyazo.com/db4e0fcf86748bf638a077ca2ef79ec9"]Testing out pixel program.[/URL]
[QUOTE=cepink;46894898]nothing to do today so I made this nice and welcoming city : [IMG]http://i564.photobucket.com/albums/ss81/cepink_photo/scrfin_zps227446d7.jpg[/IMG][/QUOTE] that building looks like a super corporation sort of, really cool.
[QUOTE=cepink;46894898]nothing to do today so I made this nice and welcoming city : [IMG]http://i564.photobucket.com/albums/ss81/cepink_photo/scrfin_zps227446d7.jpg[/IMG][/QUOTE] Reminds me a little of the Monster Inc. energy company. Either that or my memory of it is way off. :v: [editline]10th January 2015[/editline] Also, perhaps you can get some directional lighting in, to give it a bit more depth and silhouette.
i did this! [video=youtube;KioUv818L4Q]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=KioUv818L4Q[/video]
[URL="https://soundcloud.com/travis-cumming-3/into-the-long-night"]Soudcloud[/URL] I threw together a song, using MAGIX music maker. It's just soundpools being used, but my first attempt nonetheless.
[thumb]http://fc01.deviantart.net/fs71/i/2015/010/b/6/subjective_and_objective_by_ducksink-d8dc24c.png[/thumb]
[QUOTE=salmonmarine;46897177]i did this! -vid-[/QUOTE] The music really made it :v: Seriously tho good job, that's pretty cool! [QUOTE=4yourmalice;46897561][URL="https://soundcloud.com/travis-cumming-3/into-the-long-night"]Soudcloud[/URL] I threw together a song, using MAGIX music maker. It's just soundpools being used, but my first attempt nonetheless.[/QUOTE] Try [URL="http://facepunch.com/showthread.php?t=1250398"]CMIP[/URL]
[QUOTE=krix;46898121] Try [URL="http://facepunch.com/showthread.php?t=1250398"]CMIP[/URL][/QUOTE] Thanks, will do!
so I made these guys for a platformer I'm working on [img]http://i.imgur.com/wHyCOGG.gif[/img]
[QUOTE=No_0ne;46899942]so I made these guys for a platformer I'm working on [img]http://i.imgur.com/wHyCOGG.gif[/img][/QUOTE] What is the purpose of the pixel below each one? Tracking?
[QUOTE=somedev;46899974]What is the purpose of the pixel below each one? Tracking?[/QUOTE] i use it for aligning the frames when i'm putting together the gif in photoshop
[QUOTE=ijyt;46886344]I think one of my biggest regrets is not sticking with art after high school, I think could have gotten pretty good in the past 10 years. But seeing as I'm still looking for a job, I thought I might as well catch up on lost time and I recently (a few days ago) started studying the basics. But I find that a bit tedious, as important as it is, so from today I thought I'd go through the draw threads on /v/ or /tg/ and try and do requests that take my fancy for fun. It pales to the stuff I've seen over the last few pages but hey, critique and all that. (It's a Pangoll Geomancer, guessing someone's character in D&D or Pathfinder). [IMG_thumb]http://u.cubeupload.com/ijyt/WipPango.png[/IMG_thumb][/QUOTE] Finished! /tg/ draw threads are fun to practice with. Still need to work on my colouring and perspective though. [img]http://u.cubeupload.com/ijyt/pangollgeomancerglow.jpg[/img]
[QUOTE=CodeMaster;46891442]Does anyone have any critique, or tips on how to improve this image I'm working on? [thumb]http://i.imgur.com/IwODV3f.jpg[/thumb][/QUOTE] As it stands there's really no place for respite in your piece. Your textures, while visually interesting, overwhelms the entire canvas and right now seems unintentionally messy (where it should be deliberately atmospheric). You should also consider where the context of your work would fit in too; it wouldn't be too helpful as a production/concept piece since there isn't really a way to render that image in a game/film, and if you wanted to go for something scenic and landscape focused, the jet kind of sticks out like a sore thumb. I would just pick a more focused path and go towards that.
-crawling in my sniiip-
[QUOTE=Boone_Sedford;46901515]As it stands there's really no place for respite in your piece. Your textures, while visually interesting, overwhelms the entire canvas and right now seems unintentionally messy (where it should be deliberately atmospheric). You should also consider where the context of your work would fit in too; it wouldn't be too helpful as a production/concept piece since there isn't really a way to render that image in a game/film, and if you wanted to go for something scenic and landscape focused, the jet kind of sticks out like a sore thumb. I would just pick a more focused path and go towards that.[/QUOTE] I think it works fine as a blue-sky or mood painting, where the aim is to define the mood, tone, overall feel of a scene/project without being too clean or defined
i did some stalingrad guys [img]http://i.imgur.com/LrZZCUQ.png[/img]
more stuff [img]http://i.imgur.com/y4lYmjp.gif[/img] [img]http://i.imgur.com/0vspaoq.gif[/img]
Some more time-wasting. [IMG]http://i564.photobucket.com/albums/ss81/cepink_photo/crok_zps3c2e523b.jpg[/IMG]
[img]http://i.imgur.com/YUQj7Tx.png[/img] Edited and reuploaded. An idea for a goddess-like character who can control electricity, advice is welcome as always
[img]http://puu.sh/eocvF/8c629908c8.jpg[/img] you can tell i drew it because it's a coooooooooor gi [editline]11th January 2015[/editline] [t]http://puu.sh/eof0B/0787c4ed97.jpg[/t] what does this mean
Barrel roll to get belly scratched.
Sorta' beginner in pixel art, this is probably my first work ever, took me around 4 hours on everything [img]http://i.imgur.com/hjujQWX.png[/img] Hoping to get better and do some crazy shit cheers
Oh god this is hard to do. Someone quick give me a crit before my brain shits itself [img]http://puu.sh/epEed/d253046d76.jpg[/img]
Shinkawa [IMG]http://40.media.tumblr.com/c6f80a2f753b3301add4433f89d251d0/tumblr_ni2ij7qO7v1tw46sto1_1280.png[/IMG] and Miller [IMG]http://36.media.tumblr.com/92e34680abf15760a7ce0c26627c94ee/tumblr_ni2ie2FjyF1tw46sto1_1280.png[/IMG]
Made another flyer for a friend. [t]https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/u/49828537/paints/Untitled-27.jpg[/t]
[QUOTE=kirederf7;46911078]Made another flyer for a friend. [t]https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/u/49828537/paints/Untitled-27.jpg[/t][/QUOTE] looks awesome dude
What do you guys think of this? I kinda like it but I'll probably go with the clean version. [t]https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/u/49828537/paints/shuttlenaut8.jpg[/t] [editline]12th January 2015[/editline] [QUOTE=Jericho_Rus;46911258]looks awesome dude[/QUOTE] Thanks man, I put some time into this.
[QUOTE=kirederf7;46912613]What do you guys think of this? I kinda like it but I'll probably go with the clean version. [t]https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/u/49828537/paints/shuttlenaut8.jpg[/t] [editline]12th January 2015[/editline] Thanks man, I put some time into this.[/QUOTE] I actually like it even more. Maybe the small text should be a little more "strong" tho'. It isn't easily readable.
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