[QUOTE=Xephio;40891031]penis nose and castro[/QUOTE]
it was the game grumps, we're both fans
Ive been drawing lots of people with penis noses recently. I discovered it after screwing up drawing of sawyer from lost. It made him look 10x sleazier and funnier with a penis nose, so i loved it
More lyrics
[QUOTE]It seems the wind has stopped to rest
The air, like the fallen trees, is dead tonight
To have and hold, if only in my mind
Though only dust and ash remain
And I'll never let this get to me (now you're sinking in)
And I'll never let you see right through (through me like the wind)
And I'll burn the forest and the trees (there's nothing left to do)
But I'll never know what's stopping you
The sleeping breeze is stirring now
Was there such wind ever before
Now cherish this, like all in time, a memory
The ashes left after the light
And I'll never let this get to me (if this is all I am)
And I'll never let you see right through (then I will burn it down)
And I'll burn the forest and the trees (and run from all I knew)
But I'll never know what's stopping you[/QUOTE]
[sp]Come at me, Mako[/sp] :v:
[i]It seems the wind has stopped to rest[/i] - This is good, the best line in here I think. Pity you kept going
(kidding:v:)
[i]The air, like the fallen trees, is dead tonight[/i] - This might read ok but I think it might have a bit of a tick vocally since you're comparing singular and plural entities in your simile (it would be preferable to hear the fallen trees ARE dead tonight, incorrect though it might be. Best to rearrange the line in these cases)
[i]To have and hold, if only in my mind
Though only dust and ash remain[/i] - I'm reading the whole piece for context and trying to pick out a narrative, but it seems a bit too loose to hold one together. I don't know if these lines reference a denied union the speaker is lamenting, and if the whole thing is about the death of a lover; bits of it point that way but then there's more generic bits that don't lock into the rest and seem to be there just for the sake of filling up a verse, and so I'm more inclined to think there isn't any notable meaning to any of it at all.
[i]And I'll never let this get to me (now you're sinking in)
And I'll never let you see right through (through me like the wind)
And I'll burn the forest and the trees (there's nothing left to do)
But I'll never know what's stopping you[/i] - Again it's hard to tell (with the first two lines at least) whether this is tying together a narrative or if it's just a boring empty chorus. The latter lines certainly seem pretty vacant and discredit the former.
[i]The sleeping breeze is stirring now[/i] - It's doing two things at once in the present tense, a bit dodge
[i]Was there such wind ever before[/i] - This reads a bit awkwardly and seems out of keeping with the style of the whole rest of the piece
[i]Now cherish this, like all in time, a memory[/i] - I suppose I can see this working vocally but just reading it was a tad confusing. I'm not sure which words to stress etc.
If people have to go back and read a line of yours a second or third time, make sure you intended it that way.
[i]The ashes left after the light[/i] - This is sort of pleasing as a standalone, if nothing unusual, but with the previous reference to ash and trees and burning and so forth it's all getting a bit thin. It seems like the theme you're exploring could have been delivered in far less words than all this, you're scraping butter over too much bread. I suggest envisioning some more complex and gritty concepts to write on - make every line count for something. Having said that, don't be afraid if something doesn't have direct continuity or isn't altogether clear, it's more about imparting an atmosphere and putting a taste in the reader's mouth than giving them exactly what you're saying on a silver platter (in my opinion). Right now I'm biting into this and it tastes like an air sandwich (additionally I'm having trouble with what you're trying to get across, if anything, which is fine as I said but I don't see anything at all that I can delve into here either. I feel like I'm looking at the tip of the iceberg but there's nothing underneath the surface).
[i]And I'll never let this get to me (if this is all I am)[/i] - Maybe the poorest line here, feels really arbitrary.
[i]And I'll never let you see right through (then I will burn it down)
And I'll burn the forest and the trees (and run from all I knew)
But I'll never know what's stopping you[/i] - Arrr, ye had to slip in a rhyme somewhere didn't you you rascal
[IMG]http://i.imgur.com/zopgkDe.jpg[/IMG]
Get a scanner.
Some of the paintings from my concentration for the senior show. Missing 4 and I didn't really have space to arrange them any other way.
[IMG]http://i4.minus.com/igoi3qzw42sFj.jpg[/IMG]
[QUOTE=ChestyMcGee;40893490]
[media]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Q0xJTT49pOY[/media][/QUOTE]
This moment on the preview with everyone standing still and quiet and with this dude waving his lonely flag looks horrifying for some reason.
I occasionally like to draw things, just finished this:
[img]http://img829.imageshack.us/img829/870/highwayflarelights.jpg[/img]
[QUOTE=Mossie;40900455]I occasionally like to draw things, just finished this:
[img]http://img829.imageshack.us/img829/870/highwayflarelights.jpg[/img][/QUOTE]
I like this but it seems a bit dark.
E:
Pardon me - seems to have been my monitor.
Figure drawings from some daguerrotypes:
[url]http://imgur.com/C6OFusF[/url]
[url]http://imgur.com/vF5yYh3[/url]
[url]http://imgur.com/VWh67nQ[/url]
[T]http://fc06.deviantart.net/fs70/f/2013/155/3/2/portrait_by_discomelon-d67t4v7.jpg[/T]
Okay, paying more attention to the proportions with this one; and simplified the tones more to where I could keep track of what I was doing. I think it came out a lot better; although in retrospect the crazy eyes aren't doing it any favors.
[QUOTE=Lilyo;40899244]Some of the paintings from my concentration for the senior show. Missing 4 and I didn't really have space to arrange them any other way.
[IMG]http://i4.minus.com/igoi3qzw42sFj.jpg[/IMG][/QUOTE]
This photo looks like a painting itself.
[QUOTE=MakoSkyDub;40897922][I]It seems the wind has stopped to rest[/I] - This is good, the best line in here I think. Pity you kept going
(kidding:v:)
[I]The air, like the fallen trees, is dead tonight[/I] - This might read ok but I think it might have a bit of a tick vocally since you're comparing singular and plural entities in your simile (it would be preferable to hear the fallen trees ARE dead tonight, incorrect though it might be. Best to rearrange the line in these cases)
[I]To have and hold, if only in my mind
Though only dust and ash remain[/I] - I'm reading the whole piece for context and trying to pick out a narrative, but it seems a bit too loose to hold one together. I don't know if these lines reference a denied union the speaker is lamenting, and if the whole thing is about the death of a lover; bits of it point that way but then there's more generic bits that don't lock into the rest and seem to be there just for the sake of filling up a verse, and so I'm more inclined to think there isn't any notable meaning to any of it at all.
[I]And I'll never let this get to me (now you're sinking in)
And I'll never let you see right through (through me like the wind)
And I'll burn the forest and the trees (there's nothing left to do)
But I'll never know what's stopping you[/I] - Again it's hard to tell (with the first two lines at least) whether this is tying together a narrative or if it's just a boring empty chorus. The latter lines certainly seem pretty vacant and discredit the former.
[I]The sleeping breeze is stirring now[/I] - It's doing two things at once in the present tense, a bit dodge
[I]Was there such wind ever before[/I] - This reads a bit awkwardly and seems out of keeping with the style of the whole rest of the piece
[I]Now cherish this, like all in time, a memory[/I] - I suppose I can see this working vocally but just reading it was a tad confusing. I'm not sure which words to stress etc.
If people have to go back and read a line of yours a second or third time, make sure you intended it that way.
[I]The ashes left after the light[/I] - This is sort of pleasing as a standalone, if nothing unusual, but with the previous reference to ash and trees and burning and so forth it's all getting a bit thin. It seems like the theme you're exploring could have been delivered in far less words than all this, you're scraping butter over too much bread. I suggest envisioning some more complex and gritty concepts to write on - make every line count for something. Having said that, don't be afraid if something doesn't have direct continuity or isn't altogether clear, it's more about imparting an atmosphere and putting a taste in the reader's mouth than giving them exactly what you're saying on a silver platter (in my opinion). Right now I'm biting into this and it tastes like an air sandwich (additionally I'm having trouble with what you're trying to get across, if anything, which is fine as I said but I don't see anything at all that I can delve into here either. I feel like I'm looking at the tip of the iceberg but there's nothing underneath the surface).
[I]And I'll never let this get to me (if this is all I am)[/I] - Maybe the poorest line here, feels really arbitrary.
[I]And I'll never let you see right through (then I will burn it down)
And I'll burn the forest and the trees (and run from all I knew)
But I'll never know what's stopping you[/I] - Arrr, ye had to slip in a rhyme somewhere didn't you you rascal[/QUOTE]
Knew I could count on ya
You da best
[editline]4th June 2013[/editline]
And yeah those lines in the first verse were filler :v:
[editline]4th June 2013[/editline]
generic acoustic song mk.II
[QUOTE]It seems the wind has stopped to rest
The air and the fallen trees are dead tonight
And you my love too far away to know me
Fill me full of empty words
And I'll never let you get to me (this is not who I am)
And you'd never love me if you knew (I am a broken man)
Could you see the forest through the trees (you cannot know what's true)
And I'll never know what's stopping you
That sleeping breeze is stirring now
The wind wakes like never before
Now cherish this like all in time a memory
The ashes left after the light
And how could I let this get to me (now you're sinking in)
And I never guessed you'd see right through (through me like the wind)
So I'll burn the forest and the trees (and run from all I knew)
And I'll be the one who's stopping you
[/QUOTE]
[img]https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/u/1925002/stuffs/shedsometears.png[/img]
i don't even know
not going to lie the first thing I thought was a pair of very well rendered nuts
Not sure if this looks neat or shit but I feel like I'm getting a bit better with hair, or not better but just least feeling more comfortable working on it.
[img]http://puu.sh/38Gm6.jpg[/img]
[QUOTE=Juniez;40907498]not going to lie the first thing I thought was a pair of very well rendered nuts[/QUOTE]
my thoughts too the moment I saw it in a thumbnail :v:
it was pretty much then that I decided against uploading it to facebook
Because why not.
[img]https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/u/30622781/huuuu.jpg[/img]
Better throw something else in here...
[img]https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/u/30622781/dbd.jpg[/img]
The circular lens flares/orbs (not sure which they're meant to be) look pretty shit but that's a reeeally nice work otherwise. The feel is awesome, colors nice, perspective solid.
Decided to take a break from big works and start a study season.
~ a hour
[img]http://i.imgur.com/pe9AHiB.jpg[/img]
First time drawing humans
Some of these are on the old side. (Thumbnailed because some are rather large)
Shade (Halo inspired. Brute, Elite, Skirmisher...thing...with fur, yeah don't ask...)
[thumb]http://i.imgur.com/DU0CocC.png[/thumb]
Young Tnsil (LoZ:TP inspired)
[thumb]http://i.imgur.com/5FkLeca.png[/thumb]
Zack
[thumb]http://i.imgur.com/xQg0yKd.png[/thumb]
Fay, relaxing
[thumb]http://i.imgur.com/qYe6jXk.png[/thumb]
Stop Laughing! (Or you'll get a brick to the head!)
[thumb]http://i.imgur.com/HFaclRv.jpg[/thumb]
Random Lizard
[thumb]http://i.imgur.com/pk01Yh5.png[/thumb]
Rampant (Head sketch)
[thumb]http://i.imgur.com/rDzz8A9.png[/thumb]
Quill Fiend (Or what I thought it looked like, Diablo 3)
[thumb]http://i.imgur.com/G7oPLof.jpg[/thumb]
Mordred (Fuck if I know what he is, it was something inspired by Starcraft)
[thumb]http://i.imgur.com/89u3dzJ.jpg[/thumb]
[QUOTE=nagachief;40914883]Some of these are on the old side. (Thumbnailed because some are rather large)
[/QUOTE]
If your going to draw anthro type work you should take time studying both human and animal anatomy (mostly human) I would recommend a few studies. Do you have a Deviantart or other art site account I could follow you on and give advice? :)
[QUOTE=Rhenae;40914950]If your going to draw anthro type work you should take time studying both human and animal anatomy (mostly human) I would recommend a few studies. Do you have a Deviantart or other art site account I could follow you on and give advice? :)[/QUOTE]
I strictly do SFW artwork.
[URL="http://inkbunny.net/Nagachief"]Ink Bunny[/URL] (Best choice, I update my stuff here first)
[URL="http://www.furaffinity.net/user/nagachief/"]FurAffinity[/URL] (FA account has been collecting dust, so this probably isn't the best choice)
Also, my quality seems to wildly fluctuate. I've got about 4 sketchbooks worth of drawings though. Most don't make it online.
[QUOTE=nagachief;40915082]I strictly do SFW artwork.
[URL="http://inkbunny.net/Nagachief"]Ink Bunny[/URL] (Best choice, I update my stuff here first)
[URL="http://www.furaffinity.net/user/nagachief/"]FurAffinity[/URL] (FA account has been collecting dust, so this probably isn't the best choice)
Also, my quality seems to wildly fluctuate. I've got about 4 sketchbooks worth of drawings though. Most don't make it online.[/QUOTE]
Alrighty, I'll have to watch your FA though since I don't use inkbunny. Is it widely used?
[QUOTE=nagachief;40915082]I strictly do SFW artwork.[/QUOTE]
just because you "strictly do SFW artwork" doesn't mean you shouldn't study human anatomy in order to improve
the drawings you posted lack basic proportions and shapes, you would benefit greatly from anatomical practice
[QUOTE=Chaplin;40916008]just because you "strictly do SFW artwork" doesn't mean you shouldn't study human anatomy in order to improve
the drawings you posted lack basic proportions and shapes, you would benefit greatly from anatomical practice[/QUOTE]
I don't think that is why he was stating it, most people assume all artist who do anthro art draw porn etc. So sometimes you need to clarify if your going to link to your site for it etc because not everyone wants to see that
[QUOTE=nagachief;40915082]I strictly do SFW artwork[/QUOTE]
um just so you know i don't think anyone here considers nude anatomy studies to be nsfw because we're not 12
um pardon me I don't want to see boobies ok that's so yucky
[IMG]https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/u/52116717/shield.jpg[/IMG]
Made this with my school's 3d printer and some superglue.
Based on this [t]http://zeldawiki.org/images/7/7a/Hylianshield.png[/t]
[editline]fsda[/editline]
How's that funny :c
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