• Im finding harder to keep control.
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Never, he's 34
[QUOTE=Marler;16514028]So when's the prom?[/QUOTE] It's at whitching hour! *evil laugh*
At least you didn't love and lost I've got some scattered pictures lying on my bedroom floor. Reminds me of the times we shared. Makes me wish that you were here. Now it seems I've forgotten my purpose in this life. All the songs have been erased. Guess I've learned from my mistakes. Open the past and present. Now and we are there. Story to tell and I am listening. Open the past and present. And the future too. It's all I've got and I'm giving it up to you. Loose ends tied in knots. Leaving a lump down in my throat. Gagging on a souvenir. Lodged to fill another year. Drag it on and on until my skin is ripped to shreds. Leaving myself wide open. Living out a sacrifice. If you got no one and I've got no place to go, would it be alright? Could it be alright?
I have girl problems too, dont ask me. :/
[quote=Trogdon]Gagging on a souvenir[/quote] Was it your "life partner's" souvenir
hey guys im going to write cryptic and "edgy" comments about a girl on an internet forum in hopes that people will pay attention to me
[QUOTE=Cheesemonkey;16514091]hey guys im going to write cryptic and "edgy" comments about a girl on an internet forum in hopes that people will pay attention to me[/QUOTE] This. explains all.
Don't forget, it is emo kid poem time, children!
[QUOTE=Cheesemonkey;16514091]hey guys im going to write cryptic and "edgy" comments about a girl on an internet forum in hopes that people will pay attention to me[/QUOTE] Thats nowhere close to what were talking about
[QUOTE=jjsullivan;16514105]Thats nowhere close to what were talking about[/QUOTE] just keep telling that to yourself while you write cryptic poetry
I see you outside of my window at night. I'm getting a restraining order. -Amber
[QUOTE=Traxxasred;16513711][img]http://wellness360.files.wordpress.com/2009/05/loser.jpg[/img][/QUOTE] This.
[QUOTE=Cheesemonkey;16514126]just keep telling that to yourself while you write cryptic poetry[/QUOTE] True
[QUOTE=Lankist;16514141]I see you outside of my window at night. I'm getting a restraining order. -Amber[/QUOTE] MY LOVE FOR YOU IS LIKE A TRUCK FULL OF EMPTY AND THE SCENT OF PEOPLE WHY WON'T YOU LOVE ME -aidinigan
[QUOTE=Cheesemonkey;16514216]MY LOVE FOR YOU IS LIKE A TRUCK FULL OF EMPTY AND THE SCENT OF PEOPLE WHY WON'T YOU LOVE ME -aidinigan[/QUOTE] lawl
[QUOTE=Cheesemonkey;16514216]MY LOVE FOR YOU IS LIKE A TRUCK[/QUOTE] i've heard that too much at school.
[QUOTE=Unreliable;16514239]i've heard that too much at school.[/QUOTE] I second this.
Mean people in this thread who hate poetry and are unable to appreciate it.
[b]Only now that I've come to realize that the majority of Facepunch is 16 and younger do these kind of posts make sense...[/b] Anyway, what the fuck? It sounds like you want to kill this girl.
:guitar: serenade her from the side of her house whilst her window is open :shivdurf:
[QUOTE=Red Underground;16514320]Mean people in this thread who hate poetry and are unable to appreciate it.[/QUOTE] He said it wasn't a poem though... i think lemme go back. [editline]3:28[/editline] [url]http://www.facepunch.com/showpost.php?p=16513706&postcount=17[/url]
[QUOTE=Red Underground;16514320]Mean people in this thread who hate poetry and are unable to appreciate it.[/QUOTE] That sentence made no sense. Complete your sentences.
[QUOTE=.Cheezy.;16514327]Anyway, what the fuck? It sounds like you want to kill this girl.[/QUOTE] That's because he's a sociopath who hardly qualifies as verbose.
[QUOTE=aidinigan;16513595]I see it everyday. It's scent consumes me, this foodlust wont go away. The clerk says i visit too much. Maybe i do, i know no-one but him. I dreamed of it last night. It's amber animal fats dripping from my mouth. I cant contol it anymore. Atfter the prom afterparty ill make my move. Oh boy it will be a sight. Ill mix it with Coke and fries in a blender and make shots of it. I hope i can last the week. I love you Double Whopper.[/QUOTE] :munch:
I mean look at his diction. Crimson Lifeforce? Really. Just call it blood, pal. We don't need the half-assed symbolism if you can't think of anything better than that.
[QUOTE=.Cheezy.;16514327][b]Only now that I've come to realize that the majority of Facepunch is 16 and younger do these kind of posts make sense...[/b] Anyway, what the fuck? It sounds like you want to kill this girl.[/QUOTE] Once again, OP has not given a definite description of this, and has even stated that it wasn't intended as a poem, it's all a mystery! :/
[QUOTE=aidinigan;16513668]I dont need to rape her. I know she feels for me, as hard as it is for her to admit it.[/QUOTE] That's what they all say.
[QUOTE=j00g0t0wnd;16513648]She fucking got hit by a bus whilst picking House up from a bar, since Wilson was working. I'm sorry for your loss.[/QUOTE] Final Destination style
[QUOTE=j00g0t0wnd;16513648]She fucking got hit by a bus whilst picking House up from a bar, since Wilson was working. I'm sorry for your loss.[/QUOTE] I used to love House. Too bad it got put on different times. I switched to 30 Rock now. OP, what are your intentions with this girl?
[QUOTE=Unreliable;16514342]He said it wasn't a poem though... i think lemme go back. [editline]3:28[/editline] [url]http://www.facepunch.com/showpost.php?p=16513706&postcount=17[/url][/QUOTE] Does the intention of the artist decide what is art and what isn't? Let me answer myself and say "No it doesn't" [QUOTE=j00g0t0wnd;16514344]That sentence made no sense. Complete your sentences.[/QUOTE] It made perfect sense, I was exclaiming the fact the people in this thread are mean.
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