[img]http://ooft.net/upload/592459p.png[/img]
[img]http://ooft.net/upload/811818p.png[/img]
[editline]03:47PM[/editline]
Strange, I didn't upload in JPG and I still got JPG artifacts in the first picture.
Get rid of the dark lines across the vest. Make them much lighter, but noticably darker than the colors used on it.
[QUOTE=40kplayer;23987436]Get rid of the dark lines across the vest. Make them much lighter, but noticably darker than the colors used on it.[/QUOTE]
To be honest I like it more this way.
I don't really understand, but like this?
[img]http://ooft.net/upload/284194p.png[/img]
[img]http://ooft.net/upload/831404p.png[/img]
yes much better.
[QUOTE=Cookie_Monster2;23987616]yes much better.[/QUOTE]
I assume the second one right? I noticed what you meant when I moved closer to the screen :v:
I do believe it is the second one that looks best.
Also, try to do something like that for the outline of the vest as well.
I think the first one looks better.
The first one the lines on the vest are to bright. If you darken them a little then, yes the first one would look better, but right now the second one is better
I think they look fine as bright as they are on the first one. It gives it contrast.
Not to the above i spose
No the soldier's armor on the last page
[QUOTE=Matt PL;23988317][IMG]http://filesmelt.com/dl/sprite_tank1.PNG[/IMG]
constructive critism naow[/QUOTE]
Make the tanks lonker and bigger.
Matt, you really need to put more detail into your armies, right now, they're just a hunk of grey stuff.
And for the love of god stop using that dropship, it's horrible to be honest.
No offence meant. :ohdear:
[img]http://filesmelt.com/dl/sprite_Ls12.png[/img]
First sprite ever, CC the fuck out of it.
[QUOTE=Cookie_Monster2;23988414]Make the tanks lonker and bigger.[/QUOTE]
It's an light tank, that's why it's a bit small(to deal with infantry only etc.)
[editline]04:43PM[/editline]
[QUOTE=ReconUnit;23988472]Matt, you really need to put more detail into your armies, right now, they're just a hunk of grey stuff.
And for the love of god stop using that dropship, it's horrible to be honest.[/QUOTE]
The dropship is a placeholder, and last time I tried to make something not grey it ended in making a hulk sniper(and a M1 carbine before what ended nicely though).
[IMG]http://ooft.net/upload/41008r.png[/IMG]
I cant think of anything to add
I like to make weird designs rather than the generic stuff you see
Resource Generator/Teleporter
[editline]06:00PM[/editline]
What's the thing to the far right?
Update
-added mech walker unit
[img]http://img340.imageshack.us/img340/4572/nooarmay.png[/img]
[B]Experimental Mech:[/B] Athough the Ratherman was reliable, it could not go face to face against the more powerful Valentian tanks. Military officials requested a vehicle that could outmaneuver and out gun the heavy tanks of Valentia. Answering this request, Daniel Ratherman has created several of these walker prototypes. Armed with two side cannons and a mounted AT gun, it can pick out and eliminate several targets at once. Yet to be field tested.
Looks like its going to fall over backwards.
[QUOTE=40kplayer;23987733]Also, try to do something like that for the outline of the vest as well.[/QUOTE]
Made some changes as you said to the last guy.
[img]http://ooft.net/upload/838184p.png[/img]
Won't pester this thread anymore.
[QUOTE=KommradKommisar;23988926]Looks like its going to fall over backwards.[/QUOTE]
Yeah, needs a counterbalence.
[QUOTE=darkwing9912;23988848]Resource Generator/Teleporter
[editline]06:00PM[/editline]
What's the thing to the far right?[/QUOTE]
1. Please read, i said designs, not ideas
2. artillery
[QUOTE=trifon;23988948]1. Please read, i said designs, not ideas
2. artillery[/QUOTE]
Well you said your out of ideas.
[QUOTE]I like to make weird designs rather than the generic stuff you see[/QUOTE]
That's a personal preference.
Yeah... so can you give design ideas
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