[QUOTE=The Vman;36464679]Yea his silhouette doesn't read well.
It's a hooded dude with a long cape on a hoverbike raising his hand at the golem.
Literally every comment you've made on all my things has to do with the cape.
It'd be nice to hear if you have anything to say about the other 95% of the picture.[/QUOTE]
It's nice. I don't have enough experience to comment on colour but I like the warmth and the lighting.
But the comments about the cape are warranted; because it's not getting any better at all.
In terms of the silhouette comment, maybe it'd be better to work to create forms and silhouettes that do read well. I get that these paintings are probably for a group of designers who are familliar with the subject matter, but I'm not sure anybody would be able to figure out what the figure is doing or really what the figure is. Less important because you're doing it for people who know 'what's going on' but still a pretty primary requirement, in my opinion
Keep it up
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Followup on the cape: you've got this textured, smooth-shading on the golem and environment and then two-tone, vector-style shading on the cape, with angular forms to attempt to create a flowing surface. Stylistically they don't fit together
I drew fanart of jimbo
[t]http://i.imgur.com/nx2oC.png[/t]
also some zords
[t]http://i.imgur.com/OpawY.png[/t]
I've been in a super fast and sketchy mood lately, argh
also mechy thing
[t]http://i.imgur.com/nDPBu.png[/t]
also dinking with a thought on a building I saw
[img]http://i.imgur.com/0Cfdw.png[/img]
I like the jimbo ones
[QUOTE=The Vman;36464679]Yea his silhouette doesn't read well.
It's a hooded dude with a long cape on a hoverbike raising his hand at the golem.
[/QUOTE]
I'm examining it zoomed in and still cannot for the life of me make sense of it
[QUOTE=xmariusx;36458153]Did this for about a week ago.
Locked, Sound on || Locked, Sound off
[IMG]http://img607.imageshack.us/img607/8572/unlocksoundon.png[/IMG][IMG]http://img585.imageshack.us/img585/9886/unlocksoundoff.png[/IMG]
Unlocking || Muting || Unmuting
[IMG]http://img19.imageshack.us/img19/7655/unlocking.png[/IMG][IMG]http://img840.imageshack.us/img840/8906/muting.png[/IMG][IMG]http://img209.imageshack.us/img209/5857/unmuting.png[/IMG]
The plan was too make it functional, but I'm to lazy :)[/QUOTE]
If anyone wants to know what the wallpaper is:
[thumb]http://i.imgur.com/GQTG4.jpg[/thumb]
[QUOTE=MakoSkyDub;36465731]I'm examining it zoomed in and still cannot for the life of me make sense of it[/QUOTE]
This help?
[img]http://img262.imageshack.us/img262/6642/dudeguy.jpg[/img]
[QUOTE=The Vman;36465989]This help?
[img]http://img262.imageshack.us/img262/6642/dudeguy.jpg[/img][/QUOTE]
Is he wearing a massive helmet?
You really shouldn't have to outline/explain anything in a piece of work. Especially, I think, in everyday design where the viewer needs a clear sense of exactly what's going on.
As I said before, this may vary a bit with context. But yeah
[img]http://fc06.deviantart.net/fs71/i/2012/175/9/b/generic_creepy_plague_mask_by_arthuro12-d54p97h.jpg[/img]
Painting I did for a school assignment, had to be quick and I'm not too good at this..
[QUOTE=The Vman;36465989]This help?
[img]http://img262.imageshack.us/img262/6642/dudeguy.jpg[/img][/QUOTE]
I spent 2 minutes trying to figure our what it is, but I think I go I it just now.
A dude with a cloak on a motor bike doing a palm strike?
oooo
i finally see it
yeah probably should redraw that id have never seen it if it werent explained
ahh i get it, but yeah it's pretty confusing
make the bike darker or something, it looks like it's made out of the same thing as him
''Frankly my dear i dont give a damn.''
[IMG]http://th03.deviantart.net/fs71/PRE/f/2012/176/b/8/a_dead_gentleman_by_lieutenantawesome-d54sed3.png[/IMG]
''And i have not done so in a hundred years!''
(kinda reminds me of Mister Royzo)
he say you brade runner
[IMG]http://i.imgur.com/9nFbz.png?1[/IMG]
rough (lazy) study from ref
A v.quick sketch of a steampunk robot:
[IMG]http://dl.dropbox.com/u/23999490/steampunkbot2.png[/IMG]
can someone explain this to me?
[img]http://i.imgur.com/G7CAb.jpg[/img]
I didn't know there could be 2 points lined up vertically. I thought it would always be in the same horizontal line
[QUOTE=Boone_Sedford;36469821]Boogidy boogidy boo
[IMG]https://dl.dropbox.com/u/4565878/facepunch/dead%20guy.jpg[/IMG][/QUOTE]
A Necron from Warhammer 40k?
[QUOTE=D3TBS;36473352]can someone explain this to me?
[img]http://i.imgur.com/G7CAb.jpg[/img]
I didn't know there could be 2 points lined up vertically. I thought it would always be in the same horizontal line[/QUOTE]
building is on a hill
The actual horizon line will be the lower point. The higher point is there because anything on a non-horizontal surface can use a VP that's higher or lower than the horizon line.
got royally fucked off designing that racing car in the garage so decided I'd spend the day working on some of the driver assets
[IMG]https://lh5.googleusercontent.com/-0v_xHHQgWyk/T-eKC_zGjqI/AAAAAAAAANI/qoI2aX_p83U/s1600/Racing%2520Suits.jpg[/IMG]
[IMG]https://lh4.googleusercontent.com/-34-a4NcKz0A/T-eKC-4JfNI/AAAAAAAAANE/tW823GKE9Hg/s1600/Char_Design%2520-%2520Blackford%2520.jpg[/IMG]
threes a good chance in hell that it'll never get made but if i do get the chance to then mark my works i'll be releasing it the exact day codemasters release whatever piece of shit they've cooked up. im not bitter about being forced to leave at all. :rolleyes:
[QUOTE=D3TBS;36473352]can someone explain this to me?
[img]http://i.imgur.com/G7CAb.jpg[/img]
I didn't know there could be 2 points lined up vertically. I thought it would always be in the same horizontal line[/QUOTE]
It's shot looking uphill.
Upper point is the slope, lower point is the water level.
[editline]24th June 2012[/editline]
I just realized I got ninja'd my Maloof
I mist have stayed on the page without refreshing for too long lol.
I blame the cup of water.
[QUOTE=Maya2008;36473544]It's shot looking uphill.
Upper point is the slope, lower point is the water level.[/QUOTE]
well, to be more accurate, the lower point that all the normal lines converge at isn't necessarily water level, so much as just level with the viewer. Also if there's a 3-point perspective, the third point (be it above or below) is straight above or straight below the viewer.
Here, read these-
[url=http://fox-orian.deviantart.com/art/Perspective-Composition-Pt-1-118068853?q=gallery%3Afox-orian%2F9162487&qo=2]Perspective and Composition pt1[/url]
[url=http://fox-orian.deviantart.com/art/Perspective-Composition-Pt-2-125042592?q=gallery%3Afox-orian%2F9162487&qo=3]Perspective and Composition pt2[/url]
[url=http://fox-orian.deviantart.com/art/P-C-Pt-3-For-What-its-Worth-243559214?q=gallery%3Afox-orian%2F9162487&qo=4]Perspective and Composition pt3 (for what it's worth)[/url]
this part is basically what we're looking at, though odd terrain isn't really covered.
[t]http://i.imgur.com/i0SZH.png[/t]
[t]http://i.imgur.com/kBFme.png[/t]
The guy does some good terrain in his pics though. Just remember not everything is on a perfect grid
Just some yellow shotgun guy.
[URL="http://filesmelt.com/dl/RGFINALWATEXT.jpg"][IMG]http://filesmelt.com/dl/RGFINALWATEXTsmall.jpg[/IMG][/URL]
[QUOTE=antianan;36474232]Just some yellow shotgun guy.
[URL="http://filesmelt.com/dl/RGFINALWATEXT.jpg"][IMG]http://filesmelt.com/dl/RGFINALWATEXTsmall.jpg[/IMG][/URL][/QUOTE]
holy shit
[QUOTE=antianan;36474232]Just some yellow shotgun guy.
[URL="http://filesmelt.com/dl/RGFINALWATEXT.jpg"][IMG]http://filesmelt.com/dl/RGFINALWATEXTsmall.jpg[/IMG][/URL][/QUOTE]
wow, looks like official tribes: ascend concept art hahahaha
Alright guys, it's been good. antianan has, in fact, just won art.
Here you go antianan:
[img]http://i.imgur.com/VmiQF.png[/img]
I guess we can all go home now.
[QUOTE=antianan;36474232]Just some yellow shotgun guy.
[URL="http://filesmelt.com/dl/RGFINALWATEXT.jpg"][IMG]http://filesmelt.com/dl/RGFINALWATEXTsmall.jpg[/IMG][/URL][/QUOTE]
[img]http://filesmelt.com/dl/penis11.png[/img]
unintentional i hope
[QUOTE=antianan;36474232]Just some yellow shotgun guy.
[URL="http://filesmelt.com/dl/RGFINALWATEXT.jpg"][IMG]http://filesmelt.com/dl/RGFINALWATEXTsmall.jpg[/IMG][/URL][/QUOTE]
Makes me think of Tribes:Ascend.
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