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Finished a rough sketch of Master Chief on a date with Cortana in Olive Garden.
Bonus points if you know where this is from.
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Finished a rough sketch of Master Chief on a date with Cortana in Olive Garden.
Bonus points if you know where this is from.[/QUOTE]
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black knight and phoenix
[img]http://fc04.deviantart.net/fs71/f/2012/064/4/c/black_knight_by_luna133-d4rtq74.png[/img]
that's awesome, detlef :)
i like the subtle chromatic aberration.
not a big fan of his facial hair though. makes him look a bit young for what one would expect a black knight to be.
Eyes seem too far up his forehead.
that might be
been sending it to so many people for critique and no one caught it... bummer!
Really like that piece detlef, especially the subject.
I think it's just me but the horses head seems almost a bit too short? Probably just me though.
[QUOTE=Emz;34994991]I think it's just me but the horses head seems almost a bit too short? Probably just me though.[/QUOTE]
i rated agree but now i think it's just the armour making it look shorter/bulkier
[QUOTE=Detlef;34994762]black knight and phoenix
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Pretty cool although I don't understand why Chromatic Abberation has become the new blur in art recently.
His pose is very stiff though. His right arm and legs seems to be the only part of his body that is naturally posed whilst his left arm and torso is really stiff.
I think the main problem here is that the torso armor has no flexibility on his body which is unnatural, everything is going straight up like a cylinder, his whole torse is completely straight and doesn't care about the pose of the arms. Basically it looks like he's leaning against a chair, but there is nothing to lean on.
His left arm is poking right out, you didn't make it bend. Try holding your arm out as if a bird was going to land on it or is on it, the upper part of the arm can go in any direction it wants, but the lower part of the arm will bend to be able to support the weight of the bird, it will take at least a 20 degree bend which will create a very visble blotch of shadow and new line direction on the arm where it starts bending.
Other than that I like it, a bit busy for my taste, but it works.
just wanted to try out the Chromatic Abberation, never done it before! Tried to keep it very subtle.
thanks for the critique
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I hate not being able to quickly rotate the thing im working on. I also dont use enough hardness on my brushes
Tbh all these things look shit at the resolutions they are at
[quote]Tbh all these things look shit at the resolutions they are at[/QUOTE]
[QUOTE]I also dont use enough hardness on my brushes[/quote]
you have answered your own issue
Love your work Nikola.
nice piece detlef but yeah not a fan of chromatic aberration
its barely there!
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I just wanted to try it out
i know i know
you tried it out
and the feedback is dont do it again
or else
Where did you use Chromatic Abberation in that piece?
Hi. This is creative work that doesn't deserve a thread. It's a graphical composition practice. Yeah.
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Nvm the pic's fine now.
I like the reflections, Is the stomach armor heavy on our right?
[QUOTE=$$>MUFFIN<$$;34996734]Love your work Nikola.[/QUOTE]
Thanks
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Yikes, I don't know why, but something about that eagle reminds me of the Nazi seal.
That or Iron Sky :v:
Horse's face is too boyish jeez detlef draw something new for once omg
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Decided to color this in. What do you guys think of the color scheme?[/QUOTE]
Simply love it. Just the right shade of red with right shade of blue.
Paint eyes to be more eyelike and have more glow and give the metal head bit better highlights.
[QUOTE=Detlef;34994762]black knight and phoenix
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I think the phoenix could be worked a bit more. Through its body doesn't read bright/opaque enough in relation to the wings and tail. The further away wing could use touching up, looking a tad muddy.
another quick one
[img]http://i.imgur.com/JfCOh.png[/img]
lovely style!
[QUOTE=Anax;35003228]another quick one
[img]http://i.imgur.com/JfCOh.png[/img][/QUOTE]
Yeah I really like the style of this as well
Reminds me of a Castle Crasher though
I love when you can get such a solid look with minimal detailing
[QUOTE=Anax;35003228]another quick one
[img]http://i.imgur.com/JfCOh.png[/img][/QUOTE]
I like the dynamic pose but the colours are a bit desaturated and bland.
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