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[IMG]http://fc08.deviantart.net/fs71/i/2012/074/7/b/cow_house_wip_by_zacharyhogan-d4stg5b.png[/IMG] WIP Forgot to recolour the cow's legs, my bad Also three posts in a row and no automerge what
[img]http://dl.dropbox.com/u/13290261/SC20120314-123841.png[/img]
[QUOTE=Maloof?;35134472][IMG]http://fc08.deviantart.net/fs71/i/2012/074/7/b/cow_house_wip_by_zacharyhogan-d4stg5b.png[/IMG] WIP Forgot to recolour the cow's legs, my bad Also three posts in a row and no automerge what[/QUOTE] The feet lack perspective; they are on the same line. You should lower the right feet.
[QUOTE=kevlar jens;35134960][img]http://dl.dropbox.com/u/13290261/SC20120314-123841.png[/img][/QUOTE] Is that two asses violently shitting at eachother?
[QUOTE=squids_eye;35135242]Is that two asses violently shitting at eachother?[/QUOTE] yes
ewwwwwwww!
[QUOTE=kevlar jens;35134960][img]http://dl.dropbox.com/u/13290261/SC20120314-123841.png[/img][/QUOTE] The shit I've seen
[QUOTE=ADT;35136589]The shit I've seen[/QUOTE] Must be some serious shit
First antler fetish and then scat fetish. What next?
Antler rats shitting each other on a boring terrain, and make it a poster.
add tons of grunge
[img]http://fc05.deviantart.net/fs70/i/2012/057/d/2/gas_attack_by_jonake920-d4r2a53.jpg[/img] I hate hands. Also I got a bit lazy with the walls, the guy in the back and im not 100% happy with the helmet on the closest guy.
Something i made a long time ago. [IMG]http://fc00.deviantart.net/fs70/i/2011/140/b/d/cp_whiteforest_artwork_1_by_nassimooo-d3bl3n8.png[/IMG]
[QUOTE=Detlef;35136819]add tons of grunge[/QUOTE] don't forget to accent it using only one floral brush out of a pack you found on dA oy, what are you doing with deer boy anyways, is it just kind of a thing that happened or are you doing anything more behind the scenes?
I plan to make a tumblr comic
[QUOTE=qwea00;35137003][img]http://fc05.deviantart.net/fs70/i/2012/057/d/2/gas_attack_by_jonake920-d4r2a53.jpg[/img] I hate hands. Also I got a bit lazy with the walls, the guy in the back and im not 100% happy with the helmet on the closest guy.[/QUOTE] Great, amazing, dynamics. Not so great anatomy. Can't really put my finger on it.
[QUOTE=qwea00;35137003][img]http://fc05.deviantart.net/fs70/i/2012/057/d/2/gas_attack_by_jonake920-d4r2a53.jpg[/img] I hate hands. Also I got a bit lazy with the walls, the guy in the back and im not 100% happy with the helmet on the closest guy.[/QUOTE] The closest guy's left and right eye are annoying (being different sizes and all), other than that it's great. I love the sky for some reason. The hands aren't at all bad either, unless you're speaking of the pain it took to get them to look good.
[QUOTE=Asgard;35137247]Great, amazing, dynamics. Not so great anatomy. Can't really put my finger on it.[/QUOTE] I know. Thats the main thing I have to get better at. The arms are a bit weird in this one. I thought about adding some more dirt/mud but decided to leave it out for some reason. [QUOTE=littlefoot;35137305]The closest guy's left and right eye are annoying (being different sizes and all), other than that it's great. I love the sky for some reason. The hands aren't at all bad either, unless you're speaking of the pain it took to get them to look good.[/QUOTE] Thanks for mentioning it. I haven't noticed that before! The hands actually didn't take too long to make in this particular painting. They just don't look exacly the way I want them to. However I'm somewhat proud for not using any reference for these ones.
[QUOTE=Asgard;35137247]Great, amazing, dynamics. Not so great anatomy. Can't really put my finger on it.[/QUOTE] I think the large helmet makes the heads look very big compared to the bodies [editline]14th March 2012[/editline] [QUOTE=qwea00;35137003][img]http://fc05.deviantart.net/fs70/i/2012/057/d/2/gas_attack_by_jonake920-d4r2a53.jpg[/img] I hate hands. Also I got a bit lazy with the walls, the guy in the back and im not 100% happy with the helmet on the closest guy.[/QUOTE] also, 2nd dude's head looks like a horse's foot
[QUOTE=qwea00;35137003][img]http://fc05.deviantart.net/fs70/i/2012/057/d/2/gas_attack_by_jonake920-d4r2a53.jpg[/img] I hate hands. Also I got a bit lazy with the walls, the guy in the back and im not 100% happy with the helmet on the closest guy.[/QUOTE] Also there's not much sense of composition in here. Don't have time to write a critique about it but maybe somebody else can pick up and explain the composition to you
[QUOTE=NassimO PotatO;35137047]Something i made a long time ago. [IMG]http://fc00.deviantart.net/fs70/i/2011/140/b/d/cp_whiteforest_artwork_1_by_nassimooo-d3bl3n8.png[/IMG][/QUOTE] Looks exactly like the TF2 alpine concepts, nice.
[QUOTE=qwea00;35137003][img]http://fc05.deviantart.net/fs70/i/2012/057/d/2/gas_attack_by_jonake920-d4r2a53.jpg[/img] I hate hands. Also I got a bit lazy with the walls, the guy in the back and im not 100% happy with the helmet on the closest guy.[/QUOTE] I love how you did the smoke. Got any other work? Or a DA account I can look around? Would like to see more.
[QUOTE=Emz;35139231]I love how you did the smoke. Got any other work? Or a DA account I can look around? Would like to see more.[/QUOTE] [url]http://jonake920.deviantart.com/[/url] Glad you like it! I make quite a lot of german soldiers but there's some other stuff in there as well.
Your scenery is pretty nice. It'd be cool to see some expansion on the space city concept too.
[QUOTE=squids_eye;35135242]Is that two asses violently shitting at eachother?[/QUOTE] It's an accurate depiction of the internet outside of Facepunch.
Just about the exact opposite I'd say.
[t]http://th08.deviantart.net/fs70/PRE/i/2012/074/2/b/nonobjective_contemporary_abstract_art_by_chaplinsolus-d4svd4k.png[/t] CONTEMPORARY NONOBJECTIVE ABSTRACT ART (WIP) ~2deep4u~ Let's play a game! Can you find the following items? -GLaDOS -A penis -A drill -Wally -A Mass Effect character -A camera lans
Started writing a bit on my newest story, which is gonna be the darkest thing I've ever written. Here's a. . . prologue, I guess. [quote]It was that same dream again. It had been reoccurring for months now. They seemed to be getting more frequent. A nightmare chasing him, and it was slowly catching up. At first, he was in his yard. Airplane toy in hand, he ran around in circles, swinging the toy around him, making flying sounds joyfully with his mouth. The sun was high in the sky. The summer day was warm and crisp. Perfect. He could remember that day because that was the first day he had smelled the mouthwatering smell of the neighbors grilling hot dogs and brats. His brother, not yet grown into his wit and not yet obnoxious, came out with his own airplane toy and his own flight noises, and the two had an aerial battle, giggling and laughing. In the excitement he tripped over his brother’s foot, and his airplane toy went flying into the neighbor’s lawn. Their mother came to the door. “Boys, lunch is ready! Come inside and get washed up.” This was before she had gotten really sad; right after she had started taking the medicine that the doctor gave her. She had her hair tied back and her shirt tucked into her skirt underneath the apron she wore: the stereotypical American housewife. His brother ran inside, ever eager to be the first to obey mom. However, there was a toy to retrieve. As he crossed the driveway into the neighbor’s yard, he heard a scream. A deathly scream, that instantly chilled his blood and froze his bones. He felt, vividly even in the dream, all of his hairs stand on end. There was a weight against his head, that tried its best to keep him looking forward, directly at the airplane that lay upside down in the fresh-cut American grass. The weight seemed to speak to him. Don’t look now, child, don’t do it, you won’t like what you see, please child, no. . . but his head slowly turned as his teeth were set ashiver, while the voice of the weight steadily got louder and louder, and as his mother stood impatiently on the porch repeating “Come, son, come,” his head continued to turn until-- Unlike in reality, the first time he sees her in the dream, she’s standing up. The fire has already started. Her clothes and hair are already burning, and her skin is already melted and charred. She is looking at him, directly at his soul, with eyes that no longer have lids. Her teeth curve in a monstrous smile as her dead lips fail to conceal them. She is coming for him. . . slowly, slowly, not even touching the ground, just floating, the flames moving too slow to be real. . . and now the weight has dropped, it no longer presses his head, but is pinning his feet, he can’t move, can’t run, just has to stare as this monstrous tortured woman floats towards him. Then she’s there. She’s directly in front of him. He can feel the heat of the fire on his lucid face. He doesn’t remember seeing her leave the window or cross the yard. Then she screams again, exploding his eardrums and blowing the weight away, and the soudwaves pick him up and throw him backwards into an ocean. An ocean with no bottom, that he’s much too small to traverse. Each time he bobs upwards and breaks the surface, he screams for his father. He can feel monsters rising from the depths, coming to devour his feet and legs. And he desperately calls, “Daddy! Daddy, please!” But Daddy isn’t there. He hasn’t been there for a long time. And this time, when he breaks the surface, he sees his father’s bed floating free in the water, and he knows that if he can just reach it, Daddy will protect him and the monsters can’t get him any more, no, the bad monsters will leave him alone and he’ll finally be with Daddy again. . . . He crawls his way onto the bed, and feels a warm liquid. He doesn’t think about it, he just focuses on trying to get up onto the bed, and when he finally pulls his little body up and sees his father laying there with his brains and blood spilled on the sheets and the shotgun in his hand, he doesn’t realize what’s happened, he just keeps shaking his dead father’s shoulders and repeating, “Daddy, Daddy wake up, please wake up Daddy, please just wake--”[/quote]
[t]http://i.cubeupload.com/pRKxWw.png[/t] First real sketch that I put a bit of effort into. Please critique any way that you see fit. I would really like to improve at tablet drawing/sketching.
2 hr bears [img]http://fc05.deviantart.net/fs71/i/2012/074/7/3/sweet_moment_by_fadingz-d4sw2om.png[/img]
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