don't be overly racist
also delivery is everything
this is the next best comedian
Try to have fun.
[QUOTE=Alec W;41917938]dude,
I was just there
i'll try to drive out for your next bit![/QUOTE]
aww yeahhhhh
Not bad for a first time performance. Got a couple of good chuckles out of it.
Also, was the forum Facepunch?
[QUOTE=creepass;41897919]say this joke, it will win them all
" [I]One day there were three tomatoes walking down the street, a mama tomato, a daddy tomato and a baby tomato. Baby[/I] [I]tomato is walking too slowly, so the daddy tomato goes back, steps on him and says 'ketchup!'[/I] "
But tomatos don't talk
how do you do that
btw its from pulp fiction[/QUOTE]
but tomatos don't talk
talk like the average youtube commenter.
[QUOTE=Slacker996;41916288]yo heres a vidya, i dedicate this performance to my mom
[video=youtube;hGr9sKjEXo8]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=hGr9sKjEXo8&feature=c4-overview&list=UUxX7ZshD7rR_nKZjAwJb57A[/video]
great for a first performance imo[/QUOTE]
You did well for your first performance! That being said, you really need to work on your tone (confidence helps), less movement, and less non-words like, "uh", "like", "stuff like that".
[QUOTE=Slacker996;41916288]yo heres a vidya, i dedicate this performance to my mom
[video=youtube;hGr9sKjEXo8]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=hGr9sKjEXo8&feature=c4-overview&list=UUxX7ZshD7rR_nKZjAwJb57A[/video]
great for a first performance imo[/QUOTE]
Really loved the reality show part. I know, its tough on stage at first, but it was a solid performance. Just work on your pacing and presentation. Half the joke is how you deliver it.
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