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how is the second one suposed to fly, its like taping a piece of paper to a rock
[QUOTE=<VET>Jasper;17418327]how is the second one suposed to fly, its like taping a piece of paper to a rock[/QUOTE] Rocket boots? [QUOTE=Die_Hard;17417418]Gundam Wing: Endless Waltz pissed me off because the changed the Gundam's designs for no reason Wing Zero (TV version) [IMG_thumb]http://filesmelt.com/downloader/grd.jpg[/IMG_thumb] Wing Zero (OVA/movie version) [IMG_thumb]http://filesmelt.com/downloader/xxxg-00w0.jpg[/IMG_thumb] &#3232;_&#3232;[/QUOTE] I don't see a difference, they still look gay.
gg released Bakemonogatari 11. yaaay
[QUOTE=Teh Mang;17418359]gg released Bakemonogatari 11. yaaay[/QUOTE] Here I was thinking about going to go to bed... Oh well.
[QUOTE=<VET>Jasper;17418327]how is the second one suposed to fly, its like taping a piece of paper to a rock[/QUOTE] I think the wings had little jet things in them or something. Maybe. This was like ten years ago.
[QUOTE=dgg;17418349]Rocket boots? [/QUOTE] you're so silly everyone knows rocket boots dont exist
[QUOTE=<VET>Jasper;17418424]you're so silly[/QUOTE] Yeah, I know. Who could possibly think of using rocket boots? Ahahahahaha. Oh man... Sometimes... Sometimes I just kill myself. ... Seriously :suicide:
yeah it was a pretty great joke
I still say Wing Zero is overly powerful (spoiler video) [media]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=L4DJTGsK26c[/media]
[QUOTE=Die_Hard;17418630]I still say Wing Zero is overly powerful (spoiler video) [media]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=L4DJTGsK26c[/media][/QUOTE] "It's a mobile suit, It's transforming, It's a gundam!" lol for some reason the way they said that made me lol
[QUOTE=Fire Kracker;17418920]"It's a mobile suit, It's transforming, It's a gundam!" lol for some reason the way they said that made me lol[/QUOTE] I lol'd at it too, because it makes no sense :v:
[QUOTE=<VET>Jasper;17418508]yeah it was a pretty great joke[/QUOTE] I know. I should be a standup comedian or something. No wait. I should make a webcomic. And in that webcomic I would parody all other webcomics that parody all webcomics out there. It'll be a great hit! Damn, I'm a genius. Well, [B]Bakemonogatari 11[/B] Bloomers, meow. I don't know what to say. [img]http://imgkk.com/i/P8WbBZ.jpg[/img]
How do you guys respond to badly drawn manga from a beginner that merly does it as a hobby?
[QUOTE=loony383;17419164]How do you guys respond to badly drawn manga from a beginner that merly does it as a hobby?[/QUOTE] I respond to it nicely and constructively and then I'm gonna say work on the textures.
[QUOTE=loony383;17419164]How do you guys respond to badly drawn manga from a beginner that merly does it as a hobby?[/QUOTE] They'll probably say it's good because you made it. I'll either ignore it or criticize the hell out of it (constructive criticism of course, but I don't bother formulating it kindly).
[QUOTE=loony383;17419164]How do you guys respond to badly drawn manga from a beginner that merly does it as a hobby?[/QUOTE] I'm guessing you're asking this because you're thinking of posting some. [editline]03:51PM[/editline] I'm going to be as honest as possible while using as much hyperbole as possible.
[QUOTE=NachoPiggy;17419193]I respond to it nicely and constructively and then I'm gonna say work on the textures.[/QUOTE] Sounds good, I have only done a few bits a few months ago and started again last weekend. Latest: [img]http://imgkk.com/i/crycq_.jpg[/img] Problems I can see with this: Eyes could do with being slightly larger, choulders smaller and more symetrical, body slightly wider in general and fix the snall notch on the right side of the clothing and add the line to indicate the arm on the right side. [editline]10:53PM[/editline] Constructive critism is good
[QUOTE=kamikaze470;17403917]They don't actually fight, the entire thing is fake. [editline]02:32AM[/editline] I'm going to guts you like a cornish gay hen.[/QUOTE] [b]game[/b] hen.
Learn to re-size Loony... [img]http://imgkk.com/i/crycq_.jpg[/img]
[QUOTE=loony383;17419257]Sounds good, I have only done a few bits a few months ago and started again last weekend. Latest: [media]http://impulse82.net/files/S6000045.JPG[/media] Problems I can see with this: Eyes could do with being slightly larger, choulders smaller and more symetrical, body slightly wider in general and fix the snall notch on the right side of the clothing and add the line to indicate the arm on the right side. [editline]10:53PM[/editline] Constructive critism is good[/QUOTE] Shoulders look weird yeah, eyes should be a bit closer to each other, other that, not bad.
[QUOTE=dgg;17419327]Learn to re-size Loony... [/QUOTE] Ta, I don't think of stuff like that, should be common sense really...
She looks a bit :downs:
[QUOTE=Warriorx6;17419351]She looks a bit :downs:[/QUOTE] This. Head seems a bit wide too.
[QUOTE=loony383;17419257]Sounds good, I have only done a few bits a few months ago and started again last weekend. Latest: [img_thumb]http://imgkk.com/i/crycq_.jpg[/img_thumb] Problems I can see with this: Eyes could do with being slightly larger, choulders smaller and more symetrical, body slightly wider in general and fix the snall notch on the right side of the clothing and add the line to indicate the arm on the right side. [editline]10:53PM[/editline] Constructive critism is good[/QUOTE] That you're drawing manga doesn't change the fact that you're trying to illustrate a human being, try and look at one before you go and try and draw one next time.
[QUOTE=Kabuto;17419406]This. Head seems a bit wide too.[/QUOTE] I think that is mostly because of the eyes being a tad small, if I make them bigger I think it should make it look better (along with correcting the shoulders and body width) [editline]11:01PM[/editline] [QUOTE=kaskade700;17419410]That you're drawing manga doesn't change the fact that you're trying to illustrate a human being, try and look at one before you go and try and draw one next time.[/QUOTE] I'm not really going for realism at all though, so in what way should I look at real people? Do you mean proportions or somthing else?
Okay, honestly, this is not good. Not good at all. Her eyes are two square blocks with some thick lines on the top of them and is almost fully covered by the iris. Does not look good, rather scary. Make the iris smaller. Rounden up the shape of the eyes to make them look actually organic, not robotic. And for the love of God! Put them more into the face, don't give her the downs man! Her nose is not visible, make it visible or totally remove it, don't make it a mix. The head shape is fucked up. The way the sides of the head continus to go skewed straight up collides with the hair going around it and is way too low compared to how the head looks. Why is the one side higher than the other on the hair? It doesn't make sense. Her shoulders are way too high up and way too big and round. Basically, learn to draw a human like every [U]good[/U] anime artists knows how to before cartoonifying it.
I'm afraid if [U]I[/U] say anything about it I'll get banned for flaming...
[QUOTE=chunkymonkey;17419484]I'm afraid if [U]I[/U] say anything about it I'll get banned for flaming...[/QUOTE] Ahahahahahahaha.
[QUOTE=loony383;17419431]I'm not really going for realism at all though, so in what way should I look at real people? Do you mean proportions or somthing else?[/QUOTE] In everything. A human eye is round, even when depicted in a manga-like style. So why the fuck did you just draw a straigh line? Shoulderes aren't tennisball shaped, you torso isn't half the vertical lenght of your head. Your proportions are also wayyyyyy off. To put it bluntly, everything is somewhat off, the drawing is flat because shading apparently doesn't exist unless you try and bee "realistic" or something.
[QUOTE=dgg;17419468]Okay, honestly, this is not good. Not good at all. Her eyes are two square blocks with some thick lines on the top of them and is almost fully covered by the iris. Does not look good, rather scary. Make the iris smaller. Rounden up the shape of the eyes to make them look actually organic, not robotic. And for the love of God! Put them more into the face, don't give her the downs man! Her nose is not visible, make it visible or totally remove it, don't make it a mix. The head shape is fucked up. The way the sides of the head continus to go skewed straight up collides with the hair going around it and is way too low compared to how the head looks. Why is the one side higher than the other on the hair? It doesn't make sense. Her shoulders are way too high up and way too big and round. Basically, learn to draw a human like every [U]good[/U] anime artists knows how to before cartoonifying it.[/QUOTE] Not blaming the refrence image I used, but that's generally where I got most of that stuff from. I'll try what you said and go for human instead of cartoony until I can then cartoonify it becuase then I guess I'll be able to interpreit each thing into cartoon better than just copying somthing else.
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