[QUOTE=Guy Mannly;22142917]pyrofiliac and meader/pipin were the only ones really worth listening to honestly. The rest had crappy voices.. skellig sounded like he was reading his way through a thesaurus.
as a poet I'd like to advise you that the main focus of writing is making sure your reader (or listener in this case) understands you. Not only is your voice really hard to understand, but I don't think anyone here has the time to look up your whole poem in a dictionary.
[B]TU154M/Shogunner wasn't terrible aside from the god awful autotune. The lyrics were sort of cute.[/B][/QUOTE]
You do realise the Auto-Tune was a joke right? also you think penis is cute?
[editline]01:53PM[/editline]
[QUOTE=TEH_TPMASTER;22157307][url=http://tindeck.com/listen/zpig][img]http://tindeck.com/image/zpig/stats.png[/img][/url]
And here is how I make my comeback.[/QUOTE]
Now that was a fucking incredible improvement.
[QUOTE=MachiniOs;22161965]You do realise the Auto-Tune was a joke right? also you think penis is cute?
[editline]01:53PM[/editline]
Now that was a fucking incredible improvement.[/QUOTE]
:smug:
Thanks, man.
Yeah, nice job!
[QUOTE=TH89;22168284]Yeah, nice job![/QUOTE]
Thank you TH89! :')
My hero has given me a compliment!
Haha.
:colbert:
[QUOTE=TH89;22168339]:colbert:[/QUOTE]
I'll take that as "You're welcome."
If TH89 had super powers and saved me from falling from a burning building, he would be my hero.
[QUOTE=Pepin;22173508]If TH89 had super powers and saved me from falling from a burning building, he would be my hero.[/QUOTE]
If you could do the same for me, you would be my hero.
Well that depends, when are you going to be falling out of a burning building?
Voted for pyro because he dissed me.
[QUOTE=Pepin;22175054]Well that depends, when are you going to be falling out of a burning building?[/QUOTE]
It's done a second time, much better. Post it here, or record it at your house?
Wow, that was really good pyro! :)
[editline]06:28PM[/editline]
No contest.
Duckboy100 won hands down
[QUOTE=angelangel;22178314]Wow, that was really good pyro! :)
[editline]06:28PM[/editline]
No contest.[/QUOTE]
[url=http://tindeck.com/listen/zpig][img]http://tindeck.com/image/zpig/stats.png[/img][/url]
You need to listen to this! :D
Tu154M and Shogunner
lol this was pretty good, not really callin it a rap though ( had to vote for pyro) but you guys had my 2nd vote, you made me laugh.
[QUOTE=Meader;22178219]It's done a second time, much better. Post it here, or record it at your house?[/QUOTE]
Well if you could come over sometime within the next few days I'd say at my house. If you can't make it for a while then just post it.
[QUOTE=TEH_TPMASTER;22157307][url=http://tindeck.com/listen/zpig][img]http://tindeck.com/image/zpig/stats.png[/img][/url]
And here is how I make my comeback.[/QUOTE]
[url]https://dl.dropbox.com/u/99892/TP%20master%20diss.mp3[/url]
before i even start out let me say you're a disgrace
you're butthurt, you didnt even get in second place
i'm like a knight in armor and my rhymes are like a mace
my rapping is akin to shitting all over your face
lets start out with your lyricism that shit is disgusting
you're hesitating on the mic its awful you can trust me
your disses make no sense and at best your rhymes are rusty
compare it to your mothers cunt its dry and kind of crusty
your instrumental sounds like having buttsex in midi
if you went to the hood youd get shot more times than fiddy
go back home to the south you dont belong here in the city
we kicked you out just ask the anti faggotry committee
youre amateur at best at worst youre practically diseased
like your genitals contracting all those awful STDs
your rapping is more handicapped than christopher reeve
its because of all the anal sex you graciously receive
my lyrics are incredible theyll give you a fever
your lyrics are just terrible you buttsex reciever
god hates you and yet you claim that you're still a believer
what the fuck did you believe in? the church of justin bieber?
i really gotta say i wish you better luck next time
but i know that youre so traumatized you won't even attempt rhyme
my lyrics leave you comatose your mother at your bed side
your vital signs are weak because you're right about to flatline
[editline]09:10PM[/editline]
suck my dick
[QUOTE=pyrofiliac;22184814][url]https://dl.dropbox.com/u/99892/TP%20master%20diss.mp3[/url]
before i even start out let me say you're a disgrace
you're butthurt, you didnt even get in second place
i'm like a knight in armor and my rhymes are like a mace
my rapping is akin to shitting all over your face
lets start out with your lyricism that shit is disgusting
you're hesitating on the mic its awful you can trust me
your disses make no sense and at best your rhymes are rusty
compare it to your mothers cunt its dry and kind of crusty
your instrumental sounds like having buttsex in midi
if you went to the hood youd get shot more times than fiddy
go back home to the south you dont belong here in the city
we kicked you out just ask the anti faggotry committee
youre amateur at best at worst youre practically diseased
like your genitals contracting all those awful STDs
your rapping is more handicapped than christopher reeve
its because of all the anal sex you graciously receive
my lyrics are incredible theyll give you a fever
your lyrics are just terrible you buttsex reciever
god hates you and yet you claim that you're still a believer
what the fuck did you believe in? the church of justin bieber?
i really gotta say i wish you better luck next time
but i know that youre so traumatized you won't even attempt rhyme
my lyrics leave you comatose your mother at your bed side
your vital signs are weak because you're right about to flatline
[editline]09:10PM[/editline]
suck my dick[/QUOTE]
Done, once again. You win the game :D
i aims to please
[QUOTE=pyrofiliac;22186319]i aims to please[/QUOTE]
Oh god. This means I have to make another one? I thought we were only allowed a main entry and a rebuttal.
This blows.
I'm going to Cedar Point tomorrow, so you can lick your salty nut sac until I get back on Sunday.
You don't have to make another one. I don't think you could possibly save face at this point.
And wait, you're not really taking offense to this shit, are you?
[editline]10:52PM[/editline]
[QUOTE=pyrofiliac;22186414]I believe you'll be doing the licking and my nut sack will be the recipient of said licking.[/QUOTE]
This.
I can't listen to pyrofiliac's rap without my browser crashing.
Must be some hardcore shit.
[QUOTE=TEH_TPMASTER;22186416]And wait, you're not really taking offense to this shit, are you?
[editline]10:52PM[/editline]
This.[/QUOTE]
There are very few things on the internet that i take seriously. This is not one of those things.
[editline]10:57PM[/editline]
[QUOTE=Comcastic;22186430]I can't listen to pyrofiliac's rap without my browser crashing.
Must be some hardcore shit.[/QUOTE]
should be running opera
[QUOTE=pyrofiliac;22186476]There are very few things on the internet that i take seriously. This is not one of those things.
[editline]10:57PM[/editline]
should be running opera[/QUOTE]
I think we need to definitely need to do a song together sometime. It would make me happy. :D
A rap duet?
Ok I got this one pass the mic
oh wait i guess keys
let me spit this please
now you know ive been here since o eight
you aint got to ask you can take that shit to the bank
lurkin smirkin postin and toastin
you motha fuckas have not seen shit yet
i guess unless you've seen an OIFY thread
now back the fuck off my nuts
you want my celebrity status but you aint gut the guns
you can troll
post polls
smoke some fuckin bowls
you know its 420 every day
in this land of mistary
Oh what's that?
You cut yourself on purpose?
Nigga end ya life cause you aint got a purpose
seriously ya rhymes are fuckin whack
not pointin fingers at no one particular
so get ya panties out ya ass crack jack
now go ahead right my name up on that wall of pussies
you just sit there and keep stuntin that Stussy
while i be out gettin that v that be so juicy
and i'll be hot
not like temperature wise
but more like sexy wise
like owls
with my flow you know me and ya girlfriend can go for hours
peace!
haha gay as hell but i tried.
Rap it.
[QUOTE=pyrofiliac;22184814][url]https://dl.dropbox.com/u/99892/TP%20master%20diss.mp3[/url]
your vital signs are weak because you're right about to flatline
[editline]09:10PM[/editline]
suck my dick[/QUOTE]
Aww, shoulda had a badass outro there.
[QUOTE=Pepin;22187529]A rap duet?[/QUOTE]
Not quite. You realize that almost every rap song is followed by:
FT. "INSERT ARTIST NAME HERE"
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