• My first draft of a christmas card for my dad.
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Comments/suggestions appreciated. The photo is of his shoes he left out. [IMG]http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a379/aaronnoraa/christmascard.jpg[/IMG]
The merry Christmas seems kind of like an after thought to me. I suggest making the rest of the card a more Christmas theme as well. Personal opinion aside, it looks relatively good.
add some kind of christmasy border, maybe a wreath type thing or lights. make the merry christmas bigger too
Leave the Merry Christmas for the inside?
Looks disgusting. Shoes covered in shit. Not something I would like to get on christmas. [highlight](User was banned for this post ("Encourage and Advise" - Perfumly))[/highlight]
Johanz has a point, but I think it has a nice feel to it actually :) It just doesn't feel or look like a christmas card. You could solve that by doing as Vox said, putting the Merry Christmas on the inside of the card.
It's a good picture but what does any of it actually have to do with Christmas? I suggest you write something more Christmas-related and make the card feel 'cosy'as well as leaving "Merry Christmas" for the inside as Vox said.
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