MSPA: ACT 2 ==> - Hello Cal. - General

[img]http://i454.photobucket.com/albums/qq268/dmayben/tonydonovan.png[/img] My character for the upcoming forum adventure. That's the symbol for Mercury (the planet) not the symbol for "female". I'm a little upset that it looks like that.

fuckin double posts how do they work

[QUOTE=Yahnich;25342162]MSPA site down, impending update?[/QUOTE] It's working for me.

[QUOTE=Bathacker;25342064][img]http://i454.photobucket.com/albums/qq268/dmayben/tonydonovan.png[/img][/QUOTE] Head is too tall, It happens with the sprites sometimes, I'd just shorten it a bit because it looks like he has a huge forehead.

[IMG]http://i454.photobucket.com/albums/qq268/dmayben/tonydonovanshort.png[/IMG] There I fixed it.

Might as well use the double post to put the real one: [IMG]http://i454.photobucket.com/albums/qq268/dmayben/tonydonovan2.png[/IMG]

Yes my friend that looks much better.

[QUOTE=Icebrigade;25342419]Yes my friend that looks much better.[/QUOTE] I agree. Thanks for the tip.

I want in on this fan adventure, I've got two characters that I've been [I]dying[/I] to put to use

I have three characters, two lands, a third party enemy, and a surprising twist to an entire story that I want to try out. Unfortunately I lack the attention span to make an adventure, is sad day.

I've got the starting pages for both of my characters. All I really have devised is the characters and their rooms/respiteblocks themselves, so I was hoping I could make it some sort of open adventure. I've got a third character, but he's boring as fuck on hindsight, and I really don't think I'll do much with him besides just be support. I just need to move these plans into action, which mostly involves me figuring out how long it'd take for me to make a new page after acknowledging a command.

[QUOTE=Awesomecaek;25338440]I have looked a this thing long enough. I might be harsh, but I don't like it a slightest bit. The face is terrible. You are mixing scribbly eyes with strictly drawn eyebrows and mouth, while neither are really nicely done. Firstly, they don't fit with each other, secondly, they both don't look well. Try to remake the eyes using 2 solid shades, instead of scribbly lines MSPA doesn't use scribbly lines (with exceptions). The mouth and eyebrows also lack a real shape. Try to come up with someting better. I also don't get what you are trying to achieve with the green eyebrows and mouth, same with color in eyes. If you want to keep it remotely MSPA like, use only black, or maximally one more decent color. Pre trolls, there was always only black and white. Also, you will most likely want to use hair. The bald head looks very plain, and you will have to come up with really good head wear if you don't want to use hair. Then, the whole color of the outfit isn't exactly nice to look at at all, but I guess that's matter of opinion. What really should get changed, tho, is the black icon on shirt. Better leave black outline and keep the icon white. Those are my 2 cents. You don't have to listen to me, I won't get mad, but I think you deserve my honest opinion.[/QUOTE] [IMG]http://dl.dropbox.com/u/251301/MSP/perrrrhapsthere.png[/IMG] I addressed that issue already yesterday [editline]08:21AM[/editline] now with 100% more fez [editline]08:21AM[/editline] now with 100% more fez

Hell yeah, Fez also what have I missed

jesus this lag is unreal double-post

[QUOTE=Fippe;25343746][IMG]http://dl.dropbox.com/u/251301/MSP/perrrrhapsthere.png[/IMG] I addressed that issue already yesterday [editline]08:21AM[/editline] now with 100% more fez [editline]08:21AM[/editline] now with 100% more fez[/QUOTE] That's certainly better. Good job. How I would like the colors to taste. [img]http://www.sinus.cz/~milan/perrrrhapsthere.png[/img] But that's just me, probably.

I don't know, the rainbow of mismatched colors just seems a bit odd. I think it would make a bit more sense if we understood the personality.

How I would like the colors to taste. [img]http://www.sinus.cz/~milan/perrrrhapsthere.png[/img] But that's just me, probably.

I'll attempt to have fun with the character when I get home. And his personality? Hint of it in the MABeta.

are you guys seriously doing fan-characters come on it's shit like this that gives a series a bad name

They are actually making their own story/multiadvanture. Their own story, with their own characters, with plot of a separate Homestuck session. I am usually against fancharacters and mainly trollsonas, but this is a bit different, and although I am not directly involved, I support them in this.

[QUOTE=TheHydra;25345271]are you guys seriously doing fan-characters come on it's shit like this that gives a series a bad name[/QUOTE] It's all for fun.

[img]http://img36.imageshack.us/img36/7123/wtfhsmine.gif[/img] [img]http://i996.photobucket.com/albums/af85/dragonpaul99/MSPA/NedroidEditJackandKarkat.jpg?t=1286761312[/img] [img]http://img218.imageshack.us/img218/6536/headexplode.gif[/img] [img]http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v115/ormsqueak/bees/Picture8-13.png[/img] [img]http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v115/ormsqueak/bees/Picture6-14.png[/img] [img]http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v115/ormsqueak/bees/Picture5-16.png[/img] [img]http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v115/ormsqueak/bees/Picture4-10.png[/img] [img]http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v115/ormsqueak/bees/Picture9-8.png[/img] [img]http://img229.imageshack.us/img229/5602/vriskablueprintcopy.jpg[/img] WHAT BETTER WAY TO WELCOME THE NEW FP. [editline]09:56PM[/editline] No fuck you Luc [editline]10:02PM[/editline] [img]http://img834.imageshack.us/img834/2002/plot5ch.png[/img] Where are they now? After being critical to the victory of the kids and trolls over Lord English by being the only one able to pilot an unearthed steampunk drill powered armor suit, Crumplehat would get his chapeau blocked, marry Secret Wizard, and form the LOWAS Boat-Transport Company that in no way would traumatized movie-going children for generations to come with flashback-like visions of creepy millipedes and chicken decapitations in a G-rated film what the hell. [editline]10:06PM[/editline] [img]http://i54.tinypic.com/6q8rwl.jpg[/img]

[QUOTE=TheHydra;25345271]are you guys seriously doing fan-characters come on it's shit like this that gives a series a bad name[/QUOTE] yeah guys stop having fun guys hey are you listening to me i said stop having fun

okay.

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Guys are you ready for my Piece of shit character for the adventure? Sure? [img]http://img843.imageshack.us/img843/1117/mspafan.png[/img] Now tear the shit out of it.