You fucked the essay up with the first word " I ", you're never supposed to use it in an essay
sigh... since no one recognized it, (and I might as well get b& for this).
Read the first word of every paragraph XD
This is why I wrote it on univ while I was BORED.
And this is why the structure sucks too.
K, 12 hours ban, plz.
If my teacher were to grade this, it would be an epic fail, profanity is un-needed, spelling mistakes are in the thousands, lrn2write before actually writing.
The fuck is wrong with you, OP?
I wrote a report on games recently, too.
Except mine was about the violence and how it can possibly impact children, amongst other things. None of this CEO-conspiracy shit.
Well, it was about all types of media, but close enough.
Get more friends
EDIT:
Blah blah broke my automerge etc.
[QUOTE=kayOkay;21510011]sigh... since no one recognized it, (and I might as well get b& for this).
Read the first word of every paragraph XD
This is why I wrote it on univ while I was BORED.
And this is why the structure sucks too.
K, 12 hours ban, plz.[/QUOTE]
You're so funny and classy. :hurr:
[QUOTE=kayOkay;21510011]
Read the first word of every paragraph XD
This is why I wrote it on univ while I was BORED.
And this is why the structure sucks too.[/QUOTE]
Stop saying you're at uni when you clearly aren't. You're either 12 or a brilliant argument for making it harder to get into university.
omg so funnie!!!!!
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If you bothered to post it on Facepunch, it's not University Essay Grade material.
[QUOTE=kayOkay;21510011]sigh... since no one recognized it, (and I might as well get b& for this).
Read the first word of every paragraph XD
This is why I wrote it on univ while I was BORED.
And this is why the structure sucks too.
K, 12 hours ban, plz.[/QUOTE]
You wrote all that shit for THAT?
[QUOTE=jota de;21510353]You wrote all that shit for THAT?[/QUOTE]
Ever been bored in a full amphitheatre with your iPod's battery down?
You do stupid shit.
Anyway, I lol'd writing that, reason enough to do it. If you didn't get the joke when the moment was favorable, my bad.
On a side note, I major in biotechs, and my English is rather good, I think. (that essay part was shitty, I know)
Can I elect you as class prankster? You are like a demon of humor.
[QUOTE=kayOkay;21510488]Ever been bored in a full amphitheatre with your iPod's battery down?
You do stupid shit.
Anyway, I lol'd writing that, reason enough to do it. If you didn't get the joke when the moment was favorable, my bad.
On a side note, I major in biotechs, and my English is rather good, I think. (that essay part was shitty, I know)[/QUOTE]
You wrote all that shit on an Ipod and didn't stop to think that it wasn't funny?
You're an idiot.
If image macros weren't bannable, I would think the animated .gif of the fat kid strolling along thinking "Haters gonna hate" would fit this thread absolutely perfectly.
I applaud you, OP, for taking the time to write all that crap for the first-word-of-each-paragraph message. I don't agree with it, but I applaud you. :golfclap:
[QUOTE=Canuhearme?;21504019]Amazingly biased.[/QUOTE]
Is that a picture of Big Brother for your Avatar? I love the irony.
Hahahahaha well done, seriously.
That was sneaky.
Heh, I seems nobody on Facepunch can't take a joke, eh?
Good one,kayOkay
[QUOTE=Braww;21515580]Heh, I seems nobody on Facepunch can't take a joke, eh?
Good one,kayOkay[/QUOTE]
No one would be interested to read all of that crap, grade and correct it, only to find out what the OP was trying to deliver in the first place in his latest attempt at crude humour.
The first time it was used here the story itself was both interesting and amusing to read, and the joke was actually delivered incredibly well using its near to full potential. This doesn't cut it, not even close.
OP wasted a lot of people's time.
I stopped reading when the "OMG CHIEF EXECUTIVE OFFICERS ARE CAPITALIST BASTARDS" part came
[QUOTE=GreenDolphin;21503969]Quoted.
Also I'm sorry but I can't take any of this essay seriously if you say you are currently at university. Things such as continuous spelling mistakes, unneeded profanity and others are pretty much what sticks out to me the most. The quality of your essay is pretty much what your average 12 or [B]13 year old would write[/B], not a 21 year old at uni. And your essay, even for a draft, is way too short for uni material.
I sincerely hope you're just trolling. If not, tell me which university you attend. I'm serious by this, I actually might stand a chance of surving my own education then.[/QUOTE]
I'm offended. My essays were way better than that at 13.
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[QUOTE=kayOkay;21510488]Ever been bored in a full amphitheatre with your iPod's battery down?
You do stupid shit.
Anyway, I lol'd writing that, reason enough to do it. If you didn't get the joke when the moment was favorable, my bad.
On a side note, I major in biotechs, and my English is rather good, I think. (that essay part was shitty, I know)[/QUOTE]
Oh, how pithy.
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