My First Solo Song

[BloodyDragon]

should get a better mic

[OogalaBoogal]

Pop shield!

[gman_seeman]

:Dawkins102:I thought this was facepunch.

[CadetBailey]

this beat is fucking awesome man i cant stop listening i put this on my ipod

[GeeBee]

[QUOTE=gman_seeman;17096039]:Dawkins102:I thought this was facepunch.[/QUOTE]

what's that supposed to mean

[editline]11:50AM[/editline]

[QUOTE=CadetBailey;17098670]this beat is fucking awesome man i cant stop listening i put this on my ipod[/QUOTE]

thanks man

[editline]11:50AM[/editline]

[QUOTE=BloodyDragon;17092234]should get a better mic[/QUOTE]

already did man ;)

[Faunz]

Sounds like a rap doctor evil would sing in austin powers.

[GeeBee]

[QUOTE=Faunz;17102656]Sounds like a rap doctor evil would sing in austin powers.[/QUOTE]

that's not a very nice comment considering i made this song for a close friend that took her own life..

[GrubFlyer]

Stop making shitty rap and get a job and move out of the ghetto already.

I take no pity on the people of the ghetto, you wear the "gangster" look, i expect you to die.

[Brodi]

I enjoyed it, very nice work man.

And GrubFlyer is just pissy because it's that time of the month, don't pay attention to him.

[GeeBee]

[QUOTE=GrubFlyer;17102863]Stop making shitty rap and get a job and move out of the ghetto already.

I take no pity on the people of the ghetto, you wear the "gangster" look, i expect you to die.[/QUOTE]

... reported for flaming

[editline]04:46PM[/editline]

[QUOTE=Brodi;17103065]I enjoyed it, very nice work man.

And GrubFlyer is just pissy because it's that time of the month, don't pay attention to him.[/QUOTE]

thanks man :) im much better now. might post one of my newer tracks soon

[TheDKer]

Who is the guy in the video

[GeeBee]

its me, why?

[dustbusta]

I really like that beat. Did you make it yourself?

[GeeBee]

no it's one i got off the internet :/

[Perfumly]

wtf is an internet

[WhackChack]

Work on your pronounciation or however that's spelled. Half of the time it's impossible to hear what you are saying.

[TurbisV2]

You sound like a 14 year old.

[GeeBee]

[QUOTE=TurbisV2;17108271]You sound like a 14 year old.[/QUOTE]

i was 15 when i made this

[GrubFlyer]

[QUOTE=GeeBee;17103198]... reported for flaming

[/QUOTE]

That's not flaming, its telling you how it is.

[GeeBee]

[QUOTE=GrubFlyer;17123296]That's not flaming, its telling you how it is.[/QUOTE]

i asked for constructive criticism if you dont like my music get out of my thread plz

[GeeBee]

bump for C&C

[Nutnoze]

Not bad, only thing I'd say is that a good mic is a must if you're making a song where vocals are the most important part.

[Bulaba0]

[QUOTE=GeeBee;17135925]i asked for constructive criticism[b] if you dont like my music get out of my thread plz[/b][/QUOTE]

Then you're not asking for constructive criticism.

I personally didn't like it very much, but I gave my biggest concern.

[Joxalot]

After all, it's pretty good

[GeeBee]

[QUOTE=Bulaba0;17158232]Then you're not asking for constructive criticism.

I personally didn't like it very much, but I gave my biggest concern.[/QUOTE]

im reporting you for trolling

[Joxalot]

You know... I'm not into this music style, but I think people should, at least, consider the music and make the c&c based on the style, and not on personal taste

For the OP: Just ignore the hateposts and get the attention on the real C&C

[Dr. Disciple]

[QUOTE=GrubFlyer;17102863]Stop making shitty rap and get a job and move out of the ghetto already.

I take no pity on the people of the ghetto, you wear the "gangster" look, i expect you to die.[/QUOTE]
Because all people that rap are from the ghetto and one deserves to die if they are not from the ghetto and are raping..
Ignorance

Good beat but your lyrics seem a bit laggy I suggest something smoother that fluctuates with your voice better

Try this:
[url]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=QJSdvXam0FY[/url]
[url]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=XBJPB9A1iHk[/url]