[QUOTE=Perfumly;17649367]Stephanie Meyer!!!!![/QUOTE]
stfu your face
[QUOTE=Perfumly;17649367]Stephanie Meyer!!!!![/QUOTE]
oh man you 09 mods are so funny ^_________^
have a funny!!!!!!!!!!!!!
exeedeee
[editline]04:55AM[/editline]
[QUOTE=Elanore;17649378]stfu your face[/QUOTE]
Be nice.
[QUOTE=lum1naire;17649379]oh man you 09 mods are so funny ^_________^
have a funny!!!!!!!!!!!!!
exeedeee
[editline]04:55AM[/editline]
Be nice.[/QUOTE]
Do i have to?
[QUOTE=Xenocidebot;17649307]Tired, may as well humor you. To start with:
-Naruto Uzumaki. Not Uzumaki Naruto. You're writing in English, you need to use English naming conventions.
-If you're going to start with "Mornings, X's least favorite time of the day.", you really ought to write in a way that expresses the drudgery of that time for the character in question. You open with that, then list what she does like it's a freaking documentary. You're not letting us experience this chick's morning, you're giving us a shopping list. First, she has to x, second, she has to y, third, she has to *yawn*.
Fuck that noise.
Try something like:[/QUOTE]
I lol'd at the end.
[QUOTE=lum1naire;17649379]oh man you 09 mods are so funny ^_________^
have a funny!!!!!!!!!!!!!
exeedeee
[editline]04:55AM[/editline]
Be nice.[/QUOTE]
You sassin me???
[QUOTE=lum1naire;17649379]oh man you 09 mods are so funny ^_________^
have a funny!!!!!!!!!!!!!
[/QUOTE]
I thought it was funny.
[QUOTE=Elanore;17649378]stfu your face[/QUOTE]
be nice ok
sry
[b]Edit:[/b]
While we are on the subject of animes, me and my friend wrote a song about it! [MEDIA]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=IRDUjsrprI8[/MEDIA]
[QUOTE=Perfumly;17649414]You sassin me???[/QUOTE]
No, sir!
[img]http://www.gayfriendmatch.com/images/gfm/thumbnails/gayNaruto515412196708605820.jpeg[/img]
[editline]04:59AM[/editline]
[QUOTE=Perfumly;17649441]sry
[b]Edit:[/b]
While we are on the subject of animes, me and my friend wrote a song about it! [MEDIA]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=IRDUjsrprI8[/MEDIA][/QUOTE]
that's a p amazing song
[QUOTE=Perfumly;17649441]sry
[b]Edit:[/b]
While we are on the subject of animes, me and my friend wrote a song about it! [MEDIA]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=IRDUjsrprI8[/MEDIA][/QUOTE]
Taht was beatufil. I cired mi eys out.
Pokemon is fucking KOOL though.
[QUOTE=DOG-GY;17649495]Taht was beatufil. I cired mi eys out.
Pokemon is fucking KOOL though.[/QUOTE]
PETA thinks not!
I have some advice, don't make anymore.
Not Just because Naruto is generic and kinda gay,
but the fact that you and 1500 other headband wearing weeaboos are doing the same thing.
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My advice is to not write naruto things anymore. When I was in highschool this kid wore a naruto headband all the time at school it was pretty gay. One time I knocked on it and he angried at me.
ME AS WELL
There's some naruto fan on my debate team. wears a fucking headband too.
(P.S. I find it kinda funny that even though I got banned, I got all agrees.)
[QUOTE=Hellghast;17685062]ME AS WELL
There's some naruto fan on my debate team. wears a fucking headband too.
(P.S. I find it kinda funny that even though I got banned, I got all agrees.)[/QUOTE]
Being banned has no relevance to what the community thinks, it's just the rules.
No I know, I know you have to follow the rules set to you by the higher ups. Not angry at you at all, and frankly it wouldn't matter if I was.
best piece of advice for any aspiring writer: don't write naruto fanfiction
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writ fanfic on how naruto fuk girl
I think that because much of your plot hinges on Naruto actually being a girl, you should have revealed that secretly more... dramatically, and led us to it, rather than just tossing it out. That's an important plot point; give the revelation the attention it deserves.
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