[QUOTE=Heatvision...;29943739]I don't believe I mentioned racism. He asked me why I sound like a wigger and that was my response. Plus for a person who sounds like shit ive been getting mostly positive reviews so you guys can just stop now. No more opinions needed unless they are constructive criticism.[/QUOTE]
Who are these positive reviews from? Your friends?
[QUOTE=Heatvision...;29943739]I don't believe I mentioned racism. He asked me why I sound like a wigger and that was my response. Plus for a person who sounds like shit ive been getting mostly positive reviews so you guys can just stop now. No more opinions needed unless they are constructive criticism.[/QUOTE]
Just because your mom likes it doesn't mean its actually good.
Haha why are you guys mad? Stop trying to troll me you fail at it
[QUOTE=Heatvision...;29943853]Haha why are you guys mad? Stop trying to troll me you fail at it[/QUOTE]
Trolling = having negative opinions about something you made?
Huh.
[QUOTE=Heatvision...;29943853]Haha why are you guys mad? Stop trying to troll me you fail at it[/QUOTE]
Err, answer our 'trolling' questions then.
Who gave you positive reviews?
You want constructive criticism? You have a boring rhyme scheme and uninventive and unoriginal lyrics. There is no personality or emotion in what you're saying, it's just some lame, flat voice talking about how he can't get over a girl. You chose a shit beat to back it to as well.
Even if she likes it, she won't be moved by it and it won't improve your chances with her. Don't show her it, just move on and forget about it.
[QUOTE=Eluveitie;29943933]Err, answer our 'trolling' questions then.
Who gave you positive reviews?[/QUOTE]
I received positive reviews from a rap site. And i dont believe i ever said i wanted to get back with her....But yea i have better songs than this, for example im second verse on this song if you guys like weed [url]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=WR86t_NXMx4[/url]
If you guys say that song sucks then you guys just dont like the type of rap im into
[QUOTE=Heatvision...;29944129]I received positive reviews from a rap site. And i dont believe i ever said i wanted to get back with her....But yea i have better songs than this, for example im second verse on this song if you guys like weed [url]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=WR86t_NXMx4[/url]
If you guys say that song sucks then you guys just dont like the type of rap im into[/QUOTE]
That was just as bad. And which rap site, does it have credible reviewers and reviews successful rappers?
Just as bad? Meh, this music is not for your ears then so you can go back to listening to odd future or whatever rapper you listen to. Thanks for the criticism though.
A few rap sites that I am on are my16bars.com, bodybagsent.net, rap-royalty.com, rapbattles.com
[QUOTE=Heatvision...;29944180]Just as bad? Meh, this music is not for your ears then so you can go back to listening to odd future or whatever rapper you listen to. Thanks for the criticism though.
A few rap sites that I am on are my16bars.com, bodybagsent.net, rap-royalty.com, rapbattles.com[/QUOTE]
None of these review successful stuff. They're pretty low key.
[QUOTE=Eluveitie;29944244]None of these review successful stuff. They're pretty low key.[/QUOTE]
Ok you know a better site to get reviewed? I'm not like a professional though, Im still trying to perfect my craft. Plus I'm only using a karaoke mic.
[QUOTE=Heatvision...;29944281]Ok you know a better site to get reviewed? I'm not like a professional though, Im still trying to perfect my craft. Plus I'm only using a karaoke mic.[/QUOTE]
Let's see here....WAIT! I HAVE IT. Rolling Stone.
[QUOTE=Eluveitie;29944309]Let's see here....WAIT! I HAVE IT. Rolling Stone.[/QUOTE]
Umm....They seem to have only review famous songs....I dont even think i can upload my songs to that site.
[QUOTE=Heatvision...;29944329]Umm....They seem to have only review famous songs....I dont even think i can upload my songs to that site.[/QUOTE]
Exactly.
....Ummm....ok then
You aren't very good, the words and flow are okay but your voice itself is terrible to listen to.
lmao you guys are fucking dicks sometimes. i haven't listened to his tracks, and i don't plan on it, but a lot of this is just petty baggin' on him.
he's no better, though. when someone says they don't like your shit you can't just say, "MAN IT'S NOT MADE FOR U" lmfao. you're asking for their opinion. shut up or nut up bud
beautiful.
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