i need some help writing a song - General

ok heres some amazing lyrics about exactly what you said im suspicious about my girlfriend if she was really the best in the world then she wouldn't be boning my dad so now im staying home and im sad i know shes doing it right now i'm thinking i should confront that white cow so i call her on my celly i'm like hey shelly i know what you're doing so stop she says what you talkin bout willis i'm only buying pretty ass clothes at the shop im like no you are sleeping with my dad you were the only thing that was ever keeping me glad she says thats hella gross i'm leaving you josh now we won't need baby clothes from oshkosh bgosh so i load up the mac, shits boutto get heated put the barrel to the front of my face and fucking squeeze it i love you shelly... [editline]07:01PM[/editline] i cried a little writing it

[QUOTE=xiempie;16458366]When i was a young boy my father....[/QUOTE] introduced me to a girl and i had a suspicious mind and i suicided.

Well I've been meaning to write a song so I put myself up to an hours challenge and here are your results. [url]http://dump.no/files/e74cce703ea0/I_Need_Help_Writing_a_Song_2.mp3[/url] [quote][B]Lyrics[/B] I saw my girl with a girl last week What do I do I turn the other cheek Can just rush these thoughts Cause thinking I'm not Maybe there's a reason A reason why I saw her with that girl A reason why There's a handprint on her thigh Don't wanna mess things up Between me her This whole last has been blur So we'll talk it out Figure it all out So we'll talk it out Find what it's about She told me Who are you Get out of here Get a clue I've been going out with someone but it's not you On the walk home Kind of down Feelings hit Cause no ones round So we talked it out Figured it all out So we talked it out Found what it's about Don't know What to do Maybe I'll talk to you So we'll talk it out Figured it all out So we'll talk it out Found what it's about[/quote]

Hiding behind the truth Giving no proof Save your affection It wont give you protection From me... The man behind the mirror Although these are my lyrics. It's just basically me fooling around to get something up. Don't steal this.

What next? We play the song for you?

hey i like this cute boy and i was wonderin if you can please write a song about love and how weve been best friends since 1st grade and i want it to give him a hint that i like him

This thread is 60% bad grammar/spelling, 35% lulz, and 5% good songwrighting.