[QUOTE=3v3ryb0dy;27283907]If by "amazing" you mean "unintelligbe scribble" then I agree.
Who would want random white splatter on black background as their logo?
The local sperm bank?
Logos are meant to be witty, simple, understandable, memorable and easily redrawn as a bonus.[/QUOTE]
that's not my logo you tart
[IMG]http://cl.ly/3z1b0F3I0q3j1O1D3I0F/Screen_shot_2011-01-08_at_1.05.51_AM.PNG[/IMG]
this is my logo
[IMG]http://www.buzzgrinder.com/images/metal_logo.jpg[/IMG]
not this, god damnit
Either way they suck.
Logo has too much glow, it's too boring and that horn fuckup really shows. It's just ÖNI with slightly modified letters.
WITTY!
Rofl, it's Oni, not Öni you dunce.
[IMG]http://cl.ly/060c0O3k0M2z3f0T1l3K/Screen_shot_2011-01-08_at_8.56.06_PM.PNG[/IMG]
revised number 2
looks better but horns are still fucked on that ÖNI
And I'm just reading it as letters from my superior language.
[sp]HINT: Maybe since it causes misunderstandments, you know, try again from scratch and actually make something good?[/sp]
And this is not the time or place to discuss your logo. It's discussion not "show glowy shit"
Hey, I removed the glow christ, and it's not like a tiny logo like this really deserves a thread?
I'm a musician, not a graphic artist I was just asking for some CONSTRUCTIVE criticism.
As a muscian, do waht other musicans do and ask/pay for a band logo instead of making a shitty one yourself. And Nonikai, don't argue with me or anyone else here. I already saw your effect on the people down in "Love advice".
[QUOTE=technologic;27286943]As a muscian, do waht other musicans do and ask/pay for a band logo instead of making a shitty one yourself. And Nonikai, don't argue with me or anyone else here. I already saw your effect on the people down in "Love advice".[/QUOTE]
wow what does love advice have anything to do with this it's not like im lightbourne jesus christ oh god there goes my punctuation problems again
[QUOTE=Nonikai;27286049]I was just asking for some CONSTRUCTIVE criticism.[/QUOTE]
You've got loads of it. Read better.
[QUOTE=Nonikai;27286049]Hey, I removed the glow christ, and it's not like a tiny logo like this really deserves a thread?
I'm a musician, not a graphic artist I was just asking for some CONSTRUCTIVE criticism.[/QUOTE]
As DGG said, you've got plenty of constructive criticism, it's just that 3v3ryb0dy gives it like a drill instructor. Get past the harsh and you improve much faster than if people just coddled you and said things like "Oh that's nice, keep going I'm sure it'll be good!"
[QUOTE=daijitsu;27289995]As DGG said, you've got plenty of constructive criticism, it's just that 3v3ryb0dy gives it like a drill instructor. Get past the harsh and you improve much faster than if people just coddled you and said things like "Oh that's nice, keep going I'm sure it'll be good!"[/QUOTE]
okay okay shit, I'm new around this area in the forum and hope to not be misunderstood any longer
i'll work on it some more and post results later, is there any appropriate place to do this?
You can try jumping into the [url=http://www.facepunch.com/threads/946727-Creative-Work-That-Doesn-t-Deserve-A-Thread-V5-lt-Dongery-Penis-Edition-gt]'Creative Work that doesn't deserve a thread'[/url] thread, lots of in-progress stuff that people help back and forth with there.
[QUOTE=daijitsu;27289995]As DGG said, you've got plenty of constructive criticism, it's just that 3v3ryb0dy gives it like a drill instructor. Get past the harsh and you improve much faster than if people just coddled you and said things like "Oh that's nice, keep going I'm sure it'll be good!"[/QUOTE]
Actually this time I was just dicking around, it's just a dicking around thread.
[QUOTE=3v3ryb0dy;27299670]Actually this time I was just dicking around, it's just a dicking around thread.[/QUOTE]
And that's why I like you.
[QUOTE=3v3ryb0dy;27299670]Actually this time I was just dicking around, it's just a dicking around thread.[/QUOTE]
When you're being harsh to somebody, I never know whether it's a joke, or you're being dead serious.
So he's like the Sprocket Shit of Arts Section?
:love:
[QUOTE=Nonikai;27307371]So he's like the Sprocket Shit of Arts Section?
:love:[/QUOTE]
better
[QUOTE=Nonikai;27307371]So he's like the Sprocket Shit of Arts Section?
:love:[/QUOTE]
HAHAHAHahaha... the difference is sprocket was an intolerable prick, bigoted nutcase, paranoid the mods were out to get him (especially benji), and universally hated. The only people I know that [i]liked [/i]him were OIFYers that frequented the love advice section because they couldn't get enough of the shitstorms he caused.
sprocket owned
I tought sprocket was a part of my bike?
3v3ryb0dy and detlef remind me of each other, purely from the criticism you give
Only he's proper good and I'm just here cause everyone else don want me.
i want you 3v3ryb0dy
:unsmith:
not that way though
[QUOTE=3v3ryb0dy;27308286]Only he's proper good and I'm just here cause everyone else don want me.[/QUOTE]
i'm not surprised really, with the critique you give, most other forums on fp would moan. good c&c is hard to come by, i swear.
also, i don't spend much time in the creative works thread, but from what i've seen of your work, your pretty good bro.
[QUOTE=Nonikai;27308405]i want you 3v3ryb0dy
:unsmith:
not that way though[/QUOTE]
Need help, babe, PM me.
the C&C 3v3ryb0dy gives is much appreciated, I sadly do not post a lot here besides from music (I mostly dabble in MS paint, pixel art and even though I'm sure it could be posted here a lot of people would most likely moan about me going to MS Paint instead) but I know that 3v3ryb0dy, even with the harsh language is helping tremendously. It's a shame not everyone can accept C&C and just wants ego strokes, but (a lot of buts here) the harshest C&C is nine out of ten times the best.
Keep doing what you do best 3v3ryb0dy.
Making timber and cooking?
i wasn't just used to harshness, but 3v3ryb0dy showed me the light
you all giving me too much credit over nothing.
[QUOTE=3v3ryb0dy;27310291]you all giving me too much credit over nothing.[/QUOTE]
That's because they are sucking up to you because you're able to be honest, which most people here have a problem with because most people here thinks it matters what people think of them and want to be percieved as friendly people and thus sucks at giving criticism.
It's also funny because even though you and me and some other people can give some good but really harsh criticism there are still much better ways to give criticism that is direct and frank without being harsh at all. People just like it a lot more that you can say it in a harsh way because it expresses their honest feelings about it a lot more and find it nice that someone can say it FOR THEM without it affecting them.
I am friendly.
Just I am not very often.
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