[QUOTE=Ajacks;25959577]Very nice comic so far. What kind of tablet do you use?[/QUOTE]
A A5 Wacom bamboo fun.
[QUOTE=Detlef;25959376]holey sheeet guys, my first fanart[/QUOTE]
I made that.
[QUOTE=r1ck;25959675]I made that.[/QUOTE]
And it's awesome
[QUOTE=Detlef;25959705]And it's awesome[/QUOTE]
I dare you to put it in the gallery :v:
[QUOTE=r1ck;25959771]I dare you to put it in the gallery :v:[/QUOTE]
Oh I will, but first I need some more content. patience my dear
[QUOTE=Detlef;25959866][edit]And are you trying to mock me?[/edit][/QUOTE]
no. I just thought you wouldnt put it up cos its bad.
Favorited
Loving it so far!
Book marked.
I think it's pretty good. Keep it up!
[QUOTE=~ZOMG;25954832]I love the artwork, and the character, from the little I've read see pretty cool.
This looks really promising.
[editline]9th November 2010[/editline]
You mind if I make the guy at the top my avatar? :3:
The one with the shotgun, next to the title.[/QUOTE]
I guess thats okay
[QUOTE=kevlar jens;25975001]I love waffl- zombies.
Keep up the great work.[/QUOTE]
I will break into your house and kill all your Dr. pepper
[QUOTE=Detlef;25975963]I will break into your house and kill all your Dr. pepper[/QUOTE]
i regret nothing
Nitpicking here, but theres a couple of typos, looking pretty good though.
Norwegian main character, yay!
Art's amazing, and the characters are interesting. Plot's good too. Bit slow to start, but becomes quite exciting later on :D Expect me to follow this.
Please add an RSS feed to your site. It'd be much easier for people to follow it then.
Also, you should get published.
Pretty nice so far, definitely going to follow this.
[QUOTE=Hiccuper;25982073]Nitpicking here, but theres a couple of typos, looking pretty good though.[/QUOTE]
those darn typos, i swear I have fixed like 15 of them but they still show up
I like the artstyle and all. The website seem quite slow though. Maybe it's just me (Having a shitty slow proxy at work).
[QUOTE=ShinyChrome;25990962]I like the artstyle and all. The website seem quite slow though. Maybe it's just me (Having a shitty slow proxy at work).[/QUOTE]
It's just you
I like it. Very nice art style. I wish I could draw like that.
The art is pretty neat, sometimes the anatomy is a little inconsistent but you have a good understanding of it so it's not that big of a deal, it's going to be flawless soon enough.
What bugs me is what others have mentioned and that is how relaxed they seem to be with it all, it seems that zombies are rather well-known so seeing one probably isn't as shocking as if it were something completely new, but they still shouldn't be so calm when they see someone getting torn to pieces.
This is something that goes through the whole series so far and that's their expressions ; So far you haven' done a lot of changing between their postures and how their facial expressions work, and it's getting rather stale. It seems that they have two moods : not caring and slightly angry.
Mix it up! The intro would've been a perfect place to have some more mixed emotions with everything that went on, they should be happy! They should be disgusted, shocked, dumbstruck etc, not just "not caring" and "slightly angry".
One other thing that threw me off is your language ; I take it you're not a native speaker of the english language, which means you need to proof-read it atleast twice and if possible have a friend who is better at the language check it out for you.
I'm definiatly going to follow this however, it's a pretty interesting introduction you've made and even though I don't hold a lot of sympathy for the characters because of how they don't convey emotion that well it's still something that can turn out really good.
[QUOTE=Gregah;25992157]The art is pretty neat, sometimes the anatomy is a little inconsistent but you have a good understanding of it so it's not that big of a deal, it's going to be flawless soon enough.
What bugs me is what others have mentioned and that is how relaxed they seem to be with it all, it seems that zombies are rather well-known so seeing one probably isn't as shocking as if it were something completely new, but they still shouldn't be so calm when they see someone getting torn to pieces.
This is something that goes through the whole series so far and that's their expressions ; So far you haven' done a lot of changing between their postures and how their facial expressions work, and it's getting rather stale. It seems that they have two moods : not caring and slightly angry.
Mix it up! The intro would've been a perfect place to have some more mixed emotions with everything that went on, they should be happy! They should be disgusted, shocked, dumbstruck etc, not just "not caring" and "slightly angry".
One other thing that threw me off is your language ; I take it you're not a native speaker of the english language, which means you need to proof-read it atleast twice and if possible have a friend who is better at the language check it out for you.
I'm definiatly going to follow this however, it's a pretty interesting introduction you've made and even though I don't hold a lot of sympathy for the characters because of how they don't convey emotion that well it's still something that can turn out really good.[/QUOTE]
thank you for the feedback, and yeah it gets better, when it comes to their expressions and all. It's gonna be a contrast. You will see.
And no, English is not my native language, but I have a proof-read now and I hope the newer pages will be better written.
I hope you will be positively suprised how much different the intro is from the rest. And thanks again for proper feedback.
So... are you gonna implement an RSS feed?
[QUOTE=Dude Meister;25997036]So... are you gonna implement an RSS feed?[/QUOTE]
RSS feed coming right up!
I didn't like the skip to 53 days later, I wanted to see stuff like the first infected showing signs of infection and all that.
[QUOTE=Detlef;25992848]thank you for the feedback, and yeah it gets better, when it comes to their expressions and all. It's gonna be a contrast. You will see.
And no, English is not my native language, but I have a proof-read now and I hope the newer pages will be better written.
I hope you will be positively suprised how much different the intro is from the rest. And thanks again for proper feedback.[/QUOTE]
Awesome, you're welcome. :)
[editline]11th November 2010[/editline]
[QUOTE=Shadow_Hedgehog;26001589]I didn't like the skip to 53 days later, I wanted to see stuff like the first infected showing signs of infection and all that.[/QUOTE]
I have a feeling that Detlef is going to make a lot of skips back and forth after some time, it's a rather common way of progressing a story where you first have an introduction (usually the beginning of whatever is the main theme), then go on until the shit hits the fan (in this case the soldiers in congo not being able to contain the outbreak) and then jump into the future.
After that, the main character have flashbacks to when the shit hits the fan, usually to describe why he/she is the way he/she is, back to present to progress the story, jump back to where they last were and so forth until there is nothing to go back to so to speak.
[QUOTE]I have a feeling that Detlef is going to make a lot of skips back and forth after some time, it's a rather common way of progressing a story where you first have an introduction (usually the beginning of whatever is the main theme), then go on until the shit hits the fan (in this case the soldiers in congo not being able to contain the outbreak) and then jump into the future.
After that, the main character have flashbacks to when the shit hits the fan, usually to describe why he/she is the way he/she is, back to present to progress the story, jump back to where they last were and so forth until there is nothing to go back to so to speak.[/QUOTE]
[IMG]http://imgur.com/Z42pH.jpg[/IMG]
no seriously
bookmarked
[QUOTE=Detlef;26002020][img_thumb]http://imgur.com/Z42pH.jpg[/img_thumb]
no seriously[/QUOTE]
It's something I would do (and it's a pretty common way of telling a story). :)
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